OS: Problem, Mr Khan? (last part pg 37)

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Just came across this ss and read it in one go. It was very well written.😃

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Amna

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Asad Zoya Convo is Amazing !!!

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Amna

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Asad's confession was absolutely Fantastic

loved it !!!

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

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That was such a beautiful ending, I'm not even gonna lie! 😳😳 This was my favorite chapter of all, I loved the comedy you added between some parts! 🤣

"Allah miyaan! What kind of a man is he? He should be spending sleepless nights after confessing like that, today, and look at him! Ye toh ghode bech ke so rahe hain!" 🤣🤣

"Yeah, of course you're not. Did you know Britney Spears stays in my house whenever she comes to New York? We're best friends. We have pyjama parties too". 😆😆😆 🤣🤣 🤪

Oh Zoya and her sense of humor.

I'm dead serious right now, these two dialogues made me laugh so much I don't even know why! But anyway, loved the pinch of comedy you added to this part!

Loved their kiss, and they are so adorable *GOSH!* 😳😳

I loved how Asad made Zoya say his name several times, and then kept on getting closer and closer and then. . . kiss.

I don't know why but that part also made me laugh. 😆 It was still so cute and lovely. ❤️❤️

I loved this OS, TS, SS? Idk, but whatever it was, it was great! 😆😆 Continue to write more stories! This is my fav one of yours! 🤗

Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

^ Unres, if that comment could get any longer 🤣

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

it was super duper nice. "what- why aren't you wearing any clothes?" "Ammi! I'm just not wearing a shirt! Please don't make it sound like something else, entirely" i was grinning showing my whole teeth.there r so many other dailogues i loved.u write really awesome.

Edited by lourel24 - 11 years ago