OS: Problem, Mr Khan? (last part pg 37)

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Awww i love it!!! Wonderful!!! 😃

So lovellyy

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viya

@viya.mallik4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Great part dear. Loved it. Ya, simple yet effective. But atleast a forehead kiss would have been okay you know 😛

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

baahhhaaa Kya updt tha U hv 2 write more and more. M waiting!!

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divikash

@divikash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

it was so cute,lovely, u have a good writing skill,👏

tanq u 4 updating it soonr.

will seriouly luk forwrd 4 ur futur works.👍🏼

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

ohhh. DAt was sooo sweet yaar...

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can call me Mrs Enrique Iglesias

@enrique

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

This was 1 superb update

Trust me I loved it

Special u maintained the characters

It was adorable

Plzzz pm me next update

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

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Man I just left house and when I sat in bus I saw ur pm and a big smile crept my lips
I was like yauyyy

And after reading ur update I was smiling like a fool and someone gave me look lol
Loved the update it was superbbb
I wanted a jealous asad but I still loved asya in it.the confession was damn goood. You did make it sound so damn real.

I loved how asad's sui was atki on same line what was ayaaan doing here
lol

M gonna reread both the parts bfr I start my work so I can smile all day.

And plzzz con with it plzzz I wanna see najms and dilshaad teasing them with ayaaan
Plzzz puppy face 😳

Edited by jazmeen - 12 years ago

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

so cute & adoreable.🤗..asad zoya convo was beautiful..u showed their emotions so perfectly...finally asad confessed..and i loved the scene that followed after the confession❤️..the last two dialouge was hilarious, asad asking zoya if she would continue to call him mr.khan and zoya's immediate reaction that he has a problem with that too😆..only zoya can do that..all in all it was outstanding👏👏 and i loved it...do write more..

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Starshina

@Starshina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

hey nice one.. Please pm me when you update.. Thanks.. :)

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giee

@giee

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

dint like it????
u must be kidding me ??? 😲

i simply LOVED IT 👏
i could seriously imagine the scene
n dat my friend proves dat u r an AMAZING WRITER 👍🏼

all the jaw dropping moments were fab 😆
*the hug*
howww adorable ☺️

confrontations are always special 😳
again i m *awestruck*

p.s-dis was d end rite??? 😭
i want moreee pleaseee 😆

n thanx fr d pm 😃

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