A PaYa Story: **Melbourne Madness**Chap 3(updated), Page 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

Lovely...keep going!!!!!! I'm interesting to read the Kaira bit...

Thankyou ji! 😳
But wait...it will take me some time to update..plz bear with it!😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
once again a mind blowing update
keep making these updates like this i love them
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
It's superb! Loved reading it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Hayee the PaYa scene is so cutee😳😳 Amazinggg... Loved this update.!! Waiting for the next one.!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear..plz continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diana08D

Hayee the PaYa scene is so cutee😳😳 Amazinggg... Loved this update.!! Waiting for the next one.!!


which update is everyone talking about 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry guys I am really really late with the update..was feeling kinda lazy..😆 And I was also waiting for Aussie track to be over so that I get some idea about Australia! 😉😃

So here's the next part..😳😊

Chapter 3

1st March 2014, time: 6 a.m.

PaYa and RuYal have safely boarded the plane to Melbourne. The flight is about to take off. Pankhu and Payal are travelling in a plane for the first time. Adi and rubel know this and are pulling their legs.. :p

Adi(to Pankhuri) : Achha Pankhu, tu kaun kaun si jagah mein plane se gayi hai?😉

Rubel: Ha payal, tum bhi..isse pehle kabhi plane mein chadhi ho?

Pankhuri and Payal are annoyed😡 : Huh! Stop making fun of us.! You are such shameless husbands!

(Announcement is made to tie the seat belts as the flight is taking off. Adi and Rubel help their wives in tying the seat belts. The flight takes off..)

PaYa and Ruyal: There we go! We are coming Australia!!!!!!!!! (they laugh)

From now on, the story will have two parts..one part describing the incidents in Mumbai and another part describing the queer incidents in Melbourne which no one had ever expected...

Melbourne, 3rd March

Paya and Ruyal have are now staying at Hotel "Paradise". 24 hours have passed since they have landed in Melbourne. Today they have got up fresh in the morning and are ready to tour the beautiful city..

(In Room No. 308, PaYa are staying and in Room No. 408 RuYal are staying..so that RuYal's room is just above PaYa's.)

Room 308-

A: Arre Pankhu aur kitna time lagai gi come out fast! It's already half an hour since you went to the washroom to change!

P: Buss 2 min aur...

A: 2 min mein toh maggi noodles ban jayga lekin tu nahin niklegi...(:D😃)

Pankhuri comes out of the washroom wearing a black jeans, red top and a feathered coat. She is looking completely different and really beautiful. Adi stares at her for a moment and then a big smile comes on his face-

A: Arre wah Mrs. Kumar! Didn't know you can look so hot!😉😃(can't stop grinning)

P: Ab aap gadhe ki tarah hassna bandh kijiye aur mujhe belt lagane mein madat kijiye..come on!

A(muttering to himself-"Yeh ladkiya bhi na! Tareef karo toh problem na karo toh bhi problem!") : Ha ha aa raha hun! Help karne..

Adi helps pankhu tie the belt. Then holds her tightly by the waist..😉😳

P(without thinking): Adi chodiye mom aa jayengi..😳

A(amazed): Mom??(breaks into fits of laughter🤣): Hahahahaha...oh my god...hahahaha...

P(turns red😳): Woh..mera matlab hai ki..

A: hahahaha...pata hai pankhu...yeh hi hota hai agar koi zarurat se zyada conscious ho toh...isiliye kehta hun..kabhi kabhi apne pati ko romance karne dena chahiye..samjhi ?.. AAA😲!!!!(Pankhu had thrown Adi on the bed😆) Yeh kya kiya tune?😲

Pankhu slowly moves towards Adi and lies on top of him.😉😳 Says: Aapko kya lagta hai..sirf aapko hi romance karna aata hai? (grins and plants a kiss on his left cheek☺️)

A(shocked like hell): Tu..tu..P..Pankhu hi hai na?😲

P: Nahin...main woh Mumbai wali Pankhu nahi hun jo baat baat par sharmati hai...I am a changed Pankhu..aka..Pankhs!😎(naughty expression on her face😉)

A(smiles at last): Woh toh main dekh hi raha hun!! You have taken a 180 degrees turn! Will have to be conscious now! (grins😃) Pankhs!!

Pankhuri gets up and also pulls up Adi. 😊"Now get ready fast! We'll have to call Rubel and Payal too! They must be waiting for us!"😛

A: Yes! Give me just a minute!😛

Just then they hear a thud from the room above, i.e., RuYal's. PaYa rush to their room...only to discover the unexpected...

Mumbai, 3rd March

"Yes Sheila they have safely reached!! Now how many more times do I have to repeat this?"

"No, Anuj...you won't understand a mother's mind..a mother always wants the well being of her children...and when her children are not in front of her...she can't stay relaxed until she sees her children in front of her again..."

"I understand Sheila...but don't worry, Rubel and Kaira will be fine!"

"Don't know Anuj...and by the way, what was the need of Kaira to go to Delhi now? She could have completed her work after Rubel and Payal come back right?"

Shanky calls them for breakfast. They go to the breakfast table. Anuj picks up the newspaper to read it. The news on the front page comes as a shock to him...

To be continued...

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Please tell me how's it?😳 Will be waiting for your reviews!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
lovely Shaily!!!! I wish we had some scenes like this in the real honeymoon too...omg this new pankhu was great!!!!! Keep up the romance haha!!!! it would've been awesome if we really saw this pankhs on TV!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

lovely Shaily!!!! I wish we had some scenes like this in the real honeymoon too...omg this new pankhu was great!!!!! Keep up the romance haha!!!! it would've been awesome if we really saw this pankhs on TV!!!

Thankyou!! 😃
Ya..what can I do other than imagining...cvs toh kuch dikhate nahi hai..🤢
Yeah...even for the little time that pankhu became pankhs I loved her!😃 Hope she becomes bold like that again to fight the Dhanrajgirs!😉😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wow.. Shaily.. Its an awesome update.. Really lovd it to d core..😳
Keep wrtng😉

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