A PaYa Story: **Melbourne Madness**Chap 3(updated), Page 5

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chorabali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Silsha
Aww,. Shaily its really...
very nice...
Amazing
Super
Lovely
SS..!!!

plz do cnt..

Thankyou so so so much Prateek! 😳😃😃 Will try to write more now that I am getting positive reviews!😃

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Nikita

@Duggukede

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

awesome

it doesnt look like this is your first one

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

What an SS you are a natural! Are you sure you havent written anything before because this was superb!!!!! Really loved the Adi and Pankhu nok jhok and of course the fight between RuYal it is of course very typical of them to fight about shopping! Keep it going and thanks for the PM!

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Shaily1008

@bold Hahaha..🤣 And I was ready with a helmet..🤣

Thankyou for liking!!😃 Yeah will try to write more often...actually I was too scared to write...IF u don't like... But thankyou for enjoying it! 😳😃

Your writing was super Shaily...I'm sure I'll always like it don't be scared to write😊

and I'm sure I'll never need any tomatos or chapal😆

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Duggukede
awesome
it doesnt look like this is your first one
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Aww!!! Thankyou so much for reading !!! 😳 Well its really my first one!!!😃 Yeah..I will continue soon...😳

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
What an SS you are a natural! Are you sure you havent written anything before because this was superb!!!!! Really loved the Adi and Pankhu nok jhok and of course the fight between RuYal it is of course very typical of them to fight about shopping! Keep it going and thanks for the PM!

Thankyou thankyou Sonia ji!!😳 Actually people like YOU are my inspiration...I remember reading your poems and OS's and SS's when I was a silent reader...I loved your writing!!!😊😊

And welcome will continue soon..😳