A PaYa Story: **Melbourne Madness**Chap 3(updated), Page 5

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Love it Shaily! Sorry for the late reply but I am sure that you will show so much more romance than the CV's did! Loved the belt scene! Also, like how you are still going to write about Mumbai even though we want more Melbourne of course!

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cupcake2906

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

The PaYa scene was really good 😆 and the new Panks LOL 🤣🤣

Can't even imagine our shy Pankhu getting close to him, let alone kissing him 😳

I think you should become the new writer of PKDH and then we can have really awesome PaYa scenes every day 😃

Stupid CV's should take serious advice and inspiration from you!! 👏

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chorabali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
Love it Shaily! Sorry for the late reply but I am sure that you will show so much more romance than the CV's did! Loved the belt scene! Also, like how you are still going to write about Mumbai even though we want more Melbourne of course!

Oh no..its okay! No need of sorry! Thanx for reading!😊

Yeah..I'll try to show as much romance as I can...coz cvs never do so..🤢

Yeah...but you have to wait for sometime for the next chapter! Hope you don't mind!😳

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chorabali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: cupcake2906
The PaYa scene was really good 😆 and the new Panks LOL 🤣🤣
Can't even imagine our shy Pankhu getting close to him, let alone kissing him 😳

I think you should become the new writer of PKDH and then we can have really awesome PaYa scenes every day 😃

Stupid CV's should take serious advice and inspiration from you!! 👏

Thankyou!😳 I love PaYa and their cute romance! So had to put a romantic scene into it!😛😉

Yeah...the real pankhu can NEVER be that bold...but I was imagining myself in place of pankhu..🤣.what I wud do if I get to be near Adi..☺️

Haha...I wud be GLAD if I wud get a chace to write the story of pkdh..and then trps as well as CM rank wud be sky rocket!😉😃

BTW thanx for reading! :)

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Awesome !!!!!! please continue :) i simply love the way u write😊😊

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Where are you Shaily...

its been ages...update na please!!!😳

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Laugh.Out.Loud

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

WOWWW!!! This is absolutely amazing! You have got an amazing sense of humor, mystery and everything a writer should have! FAB dearie! Waiting for your next update!