FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106 - Page 47

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

@dowy, the thing is I've lost the net connection here. So it might take another week.

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Who are Haseena and Chand and what's their story?

Liking how you are unfolding Abhay and Piya with both confused.

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

Another great update. ok highlight of the update for me was Piya killing her 1st victim, her self loathing and concern about Abhay's hatred towards her for killing a vampire and the consequences along with that. it was very very well written. the guilt, apology, piyas remorse for killing the human and her concern that Abhay must be hating her. the way you describe that along with her nightmare is jus good enough to show the impact Abhay has on Piya right now. how much it would hurt her if Abhay will hate him, how much it mattered.

Thanks. Yes that's one thing I took great pains to show.

So Haseena and Chand lives in human world and they are familiar with all human modern stuff but Piya isnt. i want to know about piyas connection with haseena and chand more. Chand is typical chand but i would like to know more about their relationship with vikrant and kabir and why they left Faye like Piya asked.

Yes you will know more with time. Yeah why they left Faye is a mystery that I won't divulge just yet.😆

again compromising situation.poor them who are fighting with their confused feelings and attraction so hard already 😆

haha I am planning more😆so much fun to write😆

and end, ah nice. now what will be piyas reaction when she will wake up in Abhay's arms. he is the ultimate savior here it looks.

You think she'll wake up in Abhay's arms?😉

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update dear...loved it a lot...😊

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

Awesome update!! Who are chandeena...?? Do they have any connection with abhay??

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Wow !!!! Mind blowing update 👏

The update started with both of them equally shocked at Piya's action. And I was expecting that Abhay to be in a state of horror condemning her action.

Well yes that is there obviously

Then they accidentally stumble into Haseena. Haseena might have realized that Piya is now alone and she needed a place and immediately informed Chand. But it was surprising she gave the same respect to Abhay also.

Chand and Haseena seem more like mentors and guides to Piya.

Yes they are.

Were Chand and Haseena related to Vikrant or are they related to Sid. The flash of anger in Chand's eyes when Abhay mentioned Kabir's name, it looks as if Kabir had a role in Vikrant's death or Chand and Haseena suffered some other loss due to Kabir.

Whoa so many guesses. No they are not really related to Sid or Vikrant - or at least, not closely. And no Kabir definitely did not have a role to play in Vikrant's death. Vikrant died fighting.

The way Haseena treated Abhay, it looks like they left Faye because they were against the unjust ways of the Vampires and when they voiced out their opinions they were shut down or something like that?

No, I am not disclosing yet why they left.😛

The house of Chand and Haseena was like a palace then why did Haseena offer them rooms with a common bath and she did not caution them also 😉

That I will leave you to guess😆

She may treat vampires and mutants alike but she does not know what Abhay feels for Piya and now Piya herself is not sure of her feelings towards Abhay. She still feels for Vikrant only.

Haseena would have known, right that Vampires and Mutants never bonded.

And Chand too seem to treat Abhay just like another vampire rather than a slave. He also did not mind about Abhay Piya 's room arrangements.

No she does not know the full extent and of course neither does Piya. They are hardly a couple yet. But she has recognised the fact that Piya trusts Abhay and Abhay is protecting Piya.

And regarding the poluxes, I had a doubt then itself if they general guardians of the place or if they were sent. The way Chand reacted, it looked like they were sent on purpose and how was it that Abhay knew that the King did not send it. Is it because he would not have sent them to kill his one daughter. Same applies to the queen also (unless there is another past) Kabir is dead. Not that he would send poluxes after the princess even if he was alive. And it couldn't have been Sid also. Some one wanted Piya dead? Because the poluxes would have attacked any one and cant just identify Abhay and kill him only. If they Poluxes were not general guardians of the place but were sent on purpose which would even mean killing the princess, did Abhay realize this?

You decide 😆 All I will say is that Abhay is keeping a few secrets.

The accidental meeting of Abhay and Piya in the bathroom is a real treat to the viewers ahem I mean to the readers (We do imagine them right more than reading 😳) And for a moment they almost lost in each others eyes. Wow !!! How are you able to write so well.

I really loved the way Haseena behaved with Abhay. He must surely remind her of some one whom she loved dearly and who was lost. And in a way she reminded him of his mother too.

I really felt bad for the mutants who were treated very badly as slaves.

Not necessarily everything has to remind us of someone we have lost. But yes Abhay misses his family. And more so now that he is back home.

And then Piya's nightmare, this was really the highlight. All the guilt manifested into nightmare.

All the while she had been blaming herself for Kabir's death, then her memories of Vikrant's death, landing Abhay in danger and then killing the human boy even before she realised that she killed him.

You described the nightmare very well.

And you are one of the best writers who bring out feelings really very well.

Piya was bottling up a lot inside so yes she was affected badly. Thanks for the compliment😳

Obviously Abhay was shocked when he saw Piya draining the boy and had condemned her action. But somewhere in his mind he might have felt that she had done that unknowingly. But his other thought that she might also be a ruthless vampire not having any respect for another life, he had nourished it more because he wanted to hate her and wanted to stop being in love with her.

What would he tell her. "Sorry, I was wrong about you? Sorry, I wanted you to be an evil creature so I could stop being in love with you? Sorry, I'm causing you nightmares? Sorry, for not doing more to help?"

Sorry, I wanted you to be an evil creature so I could stop being in love with you?

Though he might actually not tell this, but I guess this is what he wished that he should stop being in love with her. But somewhere deep in his heart, he also knew that she definitely is not the evil creature whom he might hate.

Yes he has wished for it. But he also knows that she is not evil.

Now I am looking forward to see Piya's reaction when she awakes 😛

So the sunlight burns the vampires. or have Chand and Haseena found out a way to stay protected from sunlight?

They have got used to it and take protection measures😳

If some one really has an idea of making a new season of PKYEK, then looks like a story is readily available. Not just story but with screenplay and dialogues and I am not kidding. This has all the potential .

Eagerly waiting for next update. But please also dont update so soon. I want it to last longer and longer and longer.

This is just the beginning. If I can , this could well be my biggest story.

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice update
chand nd haseena seems nice . they are caring .
waitng 4 chandeena story .

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Interesting update . I luv chand-haseena although der character need to unfold a lot .eagerly waiting for further journey of abhay pia .

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

chand and haseena seems interesting . so they too were part of war . i want to know why did they left that kingdom and came to reside among humans.

Yes they were. For that story I guess you'll have to wait😳

haseena feels symapthetic towards abhay...is she somehow related to him being mutant.

Hmm...no not yet😛

pia is feeling guilty after all she never hurts anyone but this time she did. she does care for abhay's opinion. her nightmares somehow confuse me. i want to know how vikrant died? she blames herself for that.

Ya that story will be told in time😳

abhay is feeling nostalgic as he comes back to his human land. all memories are rushing back to him.he is missing his human life.

he hating pia was i guess understandable. he loves her and have seen her saving ppl and considers her different from others so pia killing that boy for him must have been a shock.

It's a difficult period for both of them right now.

abhay and pia share same bathroom😆 i am sure more mishaps in bathroom will take place .

You bet😆

anyway is this the 1st time pia have been to human world? her reaction to mobiles and cars was innocently funny.

Of course. It is her first time.

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

mysterious one...😳
wats chandeena connection to abhay🤔
abhay and pia r osm as always😳