Wow !!!! Mind blowing update 👏
The update started with both of them equally shocked at Piya's action. And I was expecting that Abhay to be in a state of horror condemning her action.
Then they accidentally stumble into Haseena. Haseena might have realized that Piya is now alone and she needed a place and immediately informed Chand. But it was surprising she gave the same respect to Abhay also.
Chand and Haseena seem more like mentors and guides to Piya.
Were Chand and Haseena related to Vikrant or are they related to Sid. The flash of anger in Chand's eyes when Abhay mentioned Kabir's name, it looks as if Kabir had a role in Vikrant's death or Chand and Haseena suffered some other loss due to Kabir.
The way Haseena treated Abhay, it looks like they left Faye because they were against the unjust ways of the Vampires and when they voiced out their opinions they were shut down or something like that?
The house of Chand and Haseena was like a palace then why did Haseena offer them rooms with a common bath and she did not caution them also 😉
She may treat vampires and mutants alike but she does not know what Abhay feels for Piya and now Piya herself is not sure of her feelings towards Abhay. She still feels for Vikrant only.
Haseena would have known, right that Vampires and Mutants never bonded.
And Chand too seem to treat Abhay just like another vampire rather than a slave. He also did not mind about Abhay Piya 's room arrangements.
And regarding the poluxes, I had a doubt then itself if they general guardians of the place or if they were sent. The way Chand reacted, it looked like they were sent on purpose and how was it that Abhay knew that the King did not send it. Is it because he would not have sent them to kill his one daughter. Same applies to the queen also (unless there is another past) Kabir is dead. Not that he would send poluxes after the princess even if he was alive. And it couldn't have been Sid also. Some one wanted Piya dead? Because the poluxes would have attacked any one and cant just identify Abhay and kill him only. If they Poluxes were not general guardians of the place but were sent on purpose which would even mean killing the princess, did Abhay realize this?
The accidental meeting of Abhay and Piya in the bathroom is a real treat to the viewers ahem I mean to the readers (We do imagine them right more than reading 😳) And for a moment they almost lost in each others eyes. Wow !!! How are you able to write so well.
I really loved the way Haseena behaved with Abhay. He must surely remind her of some one whom she loved dearly and who was lost. And in a way she reminded him of his mother too.
I really felt bad for the mutants who were treated very badly as slaves.
And then Piya's nightmare, this was really the highlight. All the guilt manifested into nightmare.
All the while she had been blaming herself for Kabir's death, then her memories of Vikrant's death, landing Abhay in danger and then killing the human boy even before she realised that she killed him.
You described the nightmare very well.
And you are one of the best writers who bring out feelings really very well.
Obviously Abhay was shocked when he saw Piya draining the boy and had condemned her action. But somewhere in his mind he might have felt that she had done that unknowingly. But his other thought that she might also be a ruthless vampire not having any respect for another life, he had nourished it more because he wanted to hate her and wanted to stop being in love with her.
What would he tell her. "Sorry, I was wrong about you? Sorry, I wanted you to be an evil creature so I could stop being in love with you? Sorry, I'm causing you nightmares? Sorry, for not doing more to help?"
Sorry, I wanted you to be an evil creature so I could stop being in love with you?
Though he might actually not tell this, but I guess this is what he wished that he should stop being in love with her. But somewhere deep in his heart, he also knew that she definitely is not the evil creature whom he might hate.
Now I am looking forward to see Piya's reaction when she awakes 😛
So the sunlight burns the vampires. or have Chand and Haseena found out a way to stay protected from sunlight?
If some one really has an idea of making a new season of PKYEK, then looks like a story is readily available. Not just story but with screenplay and dialogues and I am not kidding. This has all the potential .
Eagerly waiting for next update. But please also dont update so soon. I want it to last longer and longer and longer.
Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago
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