You written about witch..whose name is Sasha..a re Naagin ki Sesha yad aa gyi..lol.So Pia having curse... The
curse was that whoever she loved would pay
dearly!Now finally the escaped.Loved all abhiya scenes...river one too...how much abhay cares for her...khi pia ko kuch ho na jaye!!Vikrant story is good.Still Abhay listening it quietly. He is madly in love with Pia.Karan gupta new entry and he seems human.Interesting!Fab update !
Chap.9
Chandeena met AbhIya :D
Introduction was quite well of both pairs...I thought they were Abhays parents but its only his birth place.Chand showed the bathroom to Pia n Hasina to Abhay..Pia's thoughts not leaving Abhay...great going..enjoyed...damn abhiya!!He ate food after a long time.Pia was having nightmare bcz of all Vikrant,Kabir and Abhay...written beautifully.. her vulnerability.
Chap.10CAC
So much curiosity in Pia for humans...from each n everything.All points are...done well.too good job Shreya.
Ye que eleva kya hai be?something like sweety,sweetheart type?
Big chappy and entertaining all human world. all education they are going to get.Both are in clg...interesting looking forward. Dont know what is the party for.
chap.11
Party thing.Hallarious Pia was with that yellow dress.enjoyed read.Mishas entry in party..finally.
good written...Abhay kissed her...why didnt they clear it...esp.pia..lol.Now both,are on same height i mean no one is princes and slave.So so Abhay going clg..!
chap.12
In Clg...Misha and Abhay first friend i liked it.So now Pia gonna have a mob and laptop..sucha human feel.
LOL
His first period had been theory in
chemistry, and he'd hated to see the
professor blowing a gasket over petty stuff.
He wondered if the man's blood literally
boiled when angry, and if so, when would it
come rushing out through his nose and
ears?
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Pia used google not loogle...!great going and what a writing man!So much deep.Chand was really worried for Pia giving instructions to Abhay about her safty.
Yaar clg stuff was so much fun...Pia aabbb teacher bann gyi...oh my!Ab abhay ka kya hoga!Brilliant written darling <3
chap.13
As a teacher Pia really got a limelight...lol.poor abhay.Sid is caring too wah!He was cruel as strategist bt he seems positive. What are Misha and T.Something is really coming as Chand was talking.
chap14