FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106 - Page 76

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap.8 lost love

You written about witch..whose name is Sasha..a re Naagin ki Sesha yad aa gyi..lol.So Pia having curse... The
curse was that whoever she loved would pay
dearly!Now finally the escaped.Loved all abhiya scenes...river one too...how much abhay cares for her...khi pia ko kuch ho na jaye!!Vikrant story is good.Still Abhay listening it quietly. He is madly in love with Pia.Karan gupta new entry and he seems human.Interesting!Fab update !

Chap.9

Chandeena met AbhIya :D
Introduction was quite well of both pairs...I thought they were Abhays parents but its only his birth place.Chand showed the bathroom to Pia n Hasina to Abhay..Pia's thoughts not leaving Abhay...great going..enjoyed...damn abhiya!!He ate food after a long time.Pia was having nightmare bcz of all Vikrant,Kabir and Abhay...written beautifully.. her vulnerability.

Chap.10CAC

So much curiosity in Pia for humans...from each n everything.All points are...done well.too good job Shreya.
Ye que eleva kya hai be?something like sweety,sweetheart type?
Big chappy and entertaining all human world. all education they are going to get.Both are in clg...interesting looking forward. Dont know what is the party for.

chap.11

Party thing.Hallarious Pia was with that yellow dress.enjoyed read.Mishas entry in party..finally.
good written...Abhay kissed her...why didnt they clear it...esp.pia..lol.Now both,are on same height i mean no one is princes and slave.So so Abhay going clg..!

chap.12

In Clg...Misha and Abhay first friend i liked it.So now Pia gonna have a mob and laptop..sucha human feel.

LOL
His first period had been theory in
chemistry, and he'd hated to see the
professor blowing a gasket over petty stuff.
He wondered if the man's blood literally
boiled when angry, and if so, when would it
come rushing out through his nose and
ears?
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Pia used google not loogle...!great going and what a writing man!So much deep.Chand was really worried for Pia giving instructions to Abhay about her safty.
Yaar clg stuff was so much fun...Pia aabbb teacher bann gyi...oh my!Ab abhay ka kya hoga!Brilliant written darling <3


chap.13

As a teacher Pia really got a limelight...lol.poor abhay.Sid is caring too wah!He was cruel as strategist bt he seems positive. What are Misha and T.Something is really coming as Chand was talking.

chap14
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Posted: 9 years ago

chap.14.
Good going...Was it Abhiya first met...with Naiki drinking abhays blood?Dont know what is on pias mind..kbhi idher kbhi udher..abhay and arjun.
What happened with Kraya and her brother now werewolfs?Going deep and deep..intriguing.
The superior seems very wise...i love the way u write them.Was that superior was Sid...why sid have kept that mutant girl..which answers .answers for abhiya?
loved abhiya fight over a clip.When will they realise their feelings...abhay's protection.So he will go for movie.

chap.15
Haha loved abhiya dance practice.
What was misha n t upto?????
Written well.Arjun-pia on date no...where is abhay then...yeah i loved all nightmare scenes and this time it moved further as abhay stayed there and pia saw him also they talked...cute :D

chap.16

Falshback scenes are nice.Abhay didnt let happen arjun pia date...lol.good job .so now they are out in forest.a lil been...abhiya should give a try to their feelings...and something intense or any romantic way... nice chap.

chap.17

What on earth...Pia feeling lonely... abhay hai na yaar!Loved Radz-Pia ice cream scene...Abhay must be following her..Arjun-pia-abhay-radz...cooking so much.first abhiya have to interact.Mark and aiza were tring to save abhay...so now king and queen want to keep pia happy but they already lost her.
oh damn last fight.I hoped for a lil romance.. a kiss or just something more...this ended he out of her room bt actually it would have ended with a..kiss or something u r special friend like .


Well ,Would love if you conti.this further.
will king and queen find abhiya?what is sid is doing?what abt mark and aiza..what happen to pia-abhay-arjun-radz story and then whats with Misha and T?whats with abhiya feelings...when will they accept?werewolf-mutant-vampire will any fight happen ever.and will pia take revange of Vikrant and kabirs killers?so many things left behind.

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's shocking but I respect ur wish 😭 ( secretly hoping u vil change ur mind n continue)
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just read prologue and part1 shreya
U made pia and kabir couple in love!!!???
Abhay was mutant right

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