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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

i hope abhay will try to understand y piya kill dat boy! i hope he will nt hate her.

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Anon

@raintrifle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Still a mystery...haan, some parts will be clearer as time passes and i write more.

ahhh seee????? Curiouser and Curiouser is taken from Alice in Wonderland and you are the first and only person to note the similarity so thank you!
Not to mention, the hole part.
How is Abhay and Sid connected..hmm, I guess you'd have to wait a long time for that.
As for that curse, I guess its her fate

@bold - really ?? coudnt stop myself to make out 1-2 similarities btw C&C and AIW . Never meant them that seriously .

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Anon

@raintrifle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

I just loved this chapter .

Pia knew Chand and Haseena , they were her teachers , they carved out the unsuppresable warrior out of her . Abhay is well facing very hard time , is missing his human family , dealing with his grief .

Waiting for the next chap .

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#454

so abhay n pia r at abhays birth place

piya killed da boy but her heart was really filled with sorrow n guilt

she was trying her best to make abhay realize dat it was just da lost of control n she didnt do it purposely

the thought dat hw could abhay love a murderer came to his mind as he was confused dat hw a soul like piya could do dat

still he wanted to comfort her with his cloak

n then came haseena,acc to piya her mento r

n chand da general(shw me b chand ko fire k paas bethna buhut acha lagta tha)

abhay was taken away in 1963 dats why he was feeling alien to da surroundings n to da new inventions

chand expressiond at hearing kabirs name?

abhay forgave piya verbally,initially but later on her sobs n night mares pulled him towards her

interesting n amazing update

looking forward to da next one

thanx fr da pm

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dowy

@dowy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#455

hi, I am dowy...a new reader of your fiction story. I found your story so so so much interesting, It is really very unique. totally different from other supernatural stories I read.👏

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#456

so entry of chand and haseena ... what chand and haseena in piya past life? i think chand knew kabir well enough the way he talked about him..
awsome update ... well narrate the conflicted emotions of abhiya