WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th

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jack-12

@jack-12

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

this is an amazing concept indu:)

n mandy just read the entire story, great yar! It reminded me of VA, specially the training:)

sid n marcus were very well characterized:)

the bond bwt piya n agus was cool:)

N finally the happyending, like in any fairy tale:D

Great concept grl!

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

thank god beautiful ending without any scared or shock
love this episode
happy ending
nice work

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

marvlous update mandy ...

ho w can u say its not gud... its was so gud ...

evryone pov was written so well ...

i feeled so bad thinkhing augustus died ...

bt i m happy dat he is alive ...nd he can live his life normaly ...

awsm o s ...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

mandy i m speechless ... that was mind blowing update👏 i just loved it ... hatts to you the way u carry the whole concept and described it ...ether it was the scene of marcus with piya , augustus with abhay or when sid abhay fight and the last one when you narrate the augustus inner feelings and specially the little abhiya moments all were superb ... well written piece... great work u did 👍🏼

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

update was outstanding
every action scenes are perfectlly describe , like which we can't write in word ,
this update is really excillent , action -packed , & last abhiya beautifull moment
happy ending

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

update was fabulous Manasa full of action and loved the ending Marcus and Sid died along with all other vampires abhiya got their happy ending and Augustus his freedom

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

"Ever After" - Mandy, this is one of the best SS I have ever come across.

All the time I was scared about the end. That it might turn out to be a tragedy.

But it turned out to be the best. I simply loved it.

I will read it over and over again.

Thanks a lot for the wonderful SS.

And coming to your writing skills, Why do you doubt them dear. You are one of the best writers in our Forum. I never felt that I was reading a fan fiction. The way you described, it really felt that I was watching it and infact living through it. Be it emotions, actions, romance, you are really one of the best writers.

Please do write more ... on Abhiya ofcourse 😉

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Finally u updated Mandy
A beautiful end to a beautiful story
Oh I loved it

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: jack-12
this is an amazing concept indu:)

n mandy just read the entire story, great yar! It reminded me of VA, specially the training:)

sid n marcus were very well characterized:)

the bond bwt piya n agus was cool:)

N finally the happyending, like in any fairy tale:D

Great concept grl!

Thanks Jack 😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
thank god beautiful ending without any scared or shock
love this episode
happy ending
nice work

The actual end of the story was tragic but I changed it long ago 😆 I wanted to kill Augustus but then I thought it wont be fair to him 😕 Thanks for liking 😳