WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th - Page 84

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

marvlous update mandy ...

ho w can u say its not gud... its was so gud ...

evryone pov was written so well ...

i feeled so bad thinkhing augustus died ...

bt i m happy dat he is alive ...nd he can live his life normaly ...

awsm o s ...

Originally posted by: bellaaa

mandy i m speechless ... that was mind blowing update👏 i just loved it ... hatts to you the way u carry the whole concept and described it ...ether it was the scene of marcus with piya , augustus with abhay or when sid abhay fight and the last one when you narrate the augustus inner feelings and specially the little abhiya moments all were superb ... well written piece... great work u did 👍🏼

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

update was outstanding
every action scenes are perfectlly describe , like which we can't write in word ,
this update is really excillent , action -packed , & last abhiya beautifull moment
happy ending

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

update was fabulous Manasa full of action and loved the ending Marcus and Sid died along with all other vampires abhiya got their happy ending and Augustus his freedom

Originally posted by: himanshu1990

Superb ending.

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

"Ever After" - Mandy, this is one of the best SS I have ever come across.

All the time I was scared about the end. That it might turn out to be a tragedy.

But it turned out to be the best. I simply loved it.

I will read it over and over again.

Thanks a lot for the wonderful SS.

And coming to your writing skills, Why do you doubt them dear. You are one of the best writers in our Forum. I never felt that I was reading a fan fiction. The way you described, it really felt that I was watching it and infact living through it. Be it emotions, actions, romance, you are really one of the best writers.

Please do write more ... on Abhiya ofcourse 😉

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Finally u updated Mandy
A beautiful end to a beautiful story
Oh I loved it

sorry sorry so sorry.read it now only.it was awsome di.i loved the fight seqences and especially pia fighting those vampires.abhiya scenes were so hot.isse zyada nahi bolungi nahito bologi ki kam umar mein pak gayi hoon 🤣 .i so loved augustya and salute him for his bravery.and last but not the least thank u so much for a happy ending.i so loved this mini ss.do write more and apne writing ko crap bolke humara insult mat kiya karo.and pls forgive me for being late.

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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you said it's bad, terrible and all the unnecessary words 😳 its excellent 👏 it was very long though so for commenting i had to read twice again 😆 as i always say your supernatural stuff and action sequences are the best I have read on IF. nobody can write such intense action sequences like you do n yours one was full of that. I felt bad actually because Sid died. i donno why but i did. Abhay calling the other slayers were selfish true and for that many died but glad atleast marcus died and their scarifies didnt go in vein. I was sure Abhay will fight till anything to save Pia and he did the same way. oor him and sid.. i felt bad. Pia was kickass and i loved it how she fought. I thought Augustus will die with Marcus like harry and voldemort type stuff 😆 glad he didnt 😃 I love Marcus's dialogues how you wrote them. it stands out - the power, authority n arrogance jus smells from his character it seems. all credit goes to your writing 👏

it was fab and actually it deserves to be a SS and not just a OS. its so long and love reading it. there was no need to take so much time for this trust me. u did so well,i dont even understand why you were so confused n didnt like it. fab job.. amazing supernatural stuff n specially action sequences like i could see it 👏👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

sorry sorry so sorry.read it now only.it was awsome di.i loved the fight seqences and especially pia fighting those vampires.abhiya scenes were so hot.isse zyada nahi bolungi nahito bologi ki kam umar mein pak gayi hoon 🤣 .i so loved augustya and salute him for his bravery.and last but not the least thank u so much for a happy ending.i so loved this mini ss.do write more and apne writing ko crap bolke humara insult mat kiya karo.and pls forgive me for being late.