WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th - Page 82

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

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MANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 I will bang ur head into the glass wall now😡 u know what u are a hopeless case...😡 jab dekho u underestimate urself...!!!😭😭
Mandy it was a marvelous update loved it to bits❤️ so finally sid and also marcus died...and now abhiya went back to India...😃
this ss ended 😭it was so amazing...😳

Join Shreya's "Hammer Mandy Group" 😛 Here vampires r not angels in the disguise of a demon n they r pure evil 😛 So they all had to die. Pia went back home with her love This was technically supposed to be an OS but I turned it into an SS 😕 Thanks for liking 😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

oh wow main first😃

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

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*runs after mandy with all the weapons she has and bangs her repeatedly on the head*
ARE YOU MAD?
(Yes, I'm screaming.)
you were cribbing about this? Urgh Mandy...urgh... Youuu!!!

The update -

Kept me glued to it. I was downright terrified Abhay or Pia would die till the end and as usual you are a pro at writing fights...too god.
The last confrontation...this time, I didn't feel bad for Sid either...like Abhay said..he can go to hell and plan there. Ha!

And OMG what the! I honestly thought he was dead. I mean, seriously though, what a turnaround! Even the way Pia thought seemed to point at his death but 🤗 seriously I love you for not killing him off.

The OS was too good Mandy... You better have the Covenant update reallly sooon.
PS. Awesome banner!

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

simply amazing update

it was too thrilling to read.

i felt as if it's a hollywood movie running here!

sid had indeed lost everything...how can he think of hurting his brother that way...glad abhay killed him for once and for all!!!

i really thought augustus has died but m happy he was able to survive and got rid of that mark finally.

loved the relationship b/w augustus and pia...they both were indeed true friends not caring for themselves when it comes to the other one.

finally abhiya are together and w/o any worries...luvd their convo in the last part.

awsum ss!!!!

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

wowww lovely end...enjoy every action like I watch that action...thank god Augutus save...& love it happy ending🤗

Originally posted by: didlr

I'm sure mandy that u were not in ur sences when u wrote the starting para, stating the update was not it.

it was just amazing. The entire action sequence was very well written. I'm happy marus's dead n sid too.

so finally we have a happy ending for all:)

N abhiya tog forever n ever:)

Loved it

Thanks fr pm indu:)

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Loved every bit of the last part and action seems to the point when sid bite pia I think abhiya will be destroyed but you mold it so well loved your writing and please update your other SS and FF also I waiting for it also. And Thank you so much for updating

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

mandy if u can call this as bad, then i should really quit writing 🥱

It was really amazing. and I was right, noone writes action better than you

and Augustus - Marcus fight was really the highlight of your update. Truly remarkable and something I could never predict. 👏

Originally posted by: rkmad

omg very good and the end lovely story
how you wrote it so easily too hard to read and understand
very well written
i love it