'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 84

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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Superb smashing update tora... 🤗 the entire updzate was a pleasure to read!!! The words were litterally created deep impact over me!!! U wrote so so beautifully princess...u'r the best!!! 🤗 thank u fairy..but u help a lot..u know it😳
abhay juggling between his new found feelings and pia's happiness...was written in an extremly beautiful way!!! 👏
and him choosing pia's happiness makes abhay...ABHAY! N that is why nobody can b compared wth him!! He is special!! 😊 yup he is unique isn't he?*dreamy*
the rain scene was extraordinarily beautiful...i cudnot distinguish. Btw reality and words dear...it was such a pleasurable feeling!! 👏
The dhaba part was another brilliant piece of work!!! Lovely!! And the song sequence u inserted was a nyc thing to add!! The song was beautiful too n one of my favs! 😊 it made the update even moreee...beautiful...!!! 😳 and the trio bond was depicted wonderfully! Bt I felt bad for tora.! Aww..poor girl was so heartbroken wen the food got burned! 😔 but it proved to b beneficial for the trio and specially abhaiya!!! 😉 i had to make tora's food burn...otherwise i couldn't take abhiya out together like that😆..waise bhi real life mein tora does not know the C of cooking😆
Lets see what pia has to say to abhay now!! 😛
And Wth this update u took this ff into new heights princess...that I possibly cud hav nver been able to do!!! 😊 thanks a lot for agreeying to join me dear... 🤗hey don't say that..it was a team work..😃

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

I can't believe you guys ended it there! Beautfully written girls...and lovely pics too...and yeah this is a terrific news too!!!

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

lovely update tora and indu and nice pics too... but u knw wat d past memory of abhay make me cry... so its misunderstanding no no a big misunderstanding created by dat despo idiot and wat not bad adjectives 4 her ops u knw whom its kate no no cat... hope everything get clear n m sure kate is not going to miss from pic so soon she is on way of weird plan against pia... but wat ...

congo dat u r going to make dis ff

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Beautiful update Tora 👏 Gosh love the way u write dear. This was such a beautiful piece of writing I tell ya 😳 thanx mansa..it means a lot😊The story is so simple n sweet n the way u guys have portrayed the inner turmoil of the leads esp Abhay n Pia is wonderful 👏 So the event at the christmas party was what that lead to their misunderstanding? But Abhay was surely being a jerk 😡 It was ok for him to move on with Kate but he couldn digest the fact that Pia too could find somebody special for herself? That was indeed petty of him but to a certain extent I can understand his situation as he had been in denial over his feelings for Pia till then 😭hm..ya...he was confused...and this combined with his anger made him hurt piya more...it's actually only piya in his heart all along..😊 Now tat he did realise, things are way too messed up 😭 But loved the fact that Abhay decided to be just a friend for her 😊 Its tough but he decided that Pia's happiness matters the most to him 😳 yep that's abhay for uPia on the other hand seems unsure about her feelings towards Anik or does she really feel anything for him? 😕 u'll know about this soon😊Loved Tora 😃 She seems to be only one with a sane mind here 😆lolz😆 Hope Abhiya realise wat they mean to each other pretty soon 😳 Loved the hang out. It was penned down so beautifully 👏 and the pictures were nice too 😊 I am eagerly waiting for the next part now n plz plz plz girls continue soon 😃 Fantastic update Tora 👏thanx once more and thanx for the biggg coment😊