'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: Rmuk
wow wow wow such a gr8 news, this is a ff now means way to read more, I am hell happy guys, I just love this ff a lot. Now coming to the update Woaaa tora yaar simply outstanding update. Ufff it was so so so romantic yaar. From beggining till end it was just fab!!! So abhiya were separated coz pf a misunderstanding in christmas party. I wonder when will abhay understand. I loved the trio convo's, the dhabba part, the rain part and abhay ka possiveness over piya. U wrote everything b'fully. Update next part soon I am dying to know what will piya say to abhay. Gr8 job guys!!!!

thanx romi...😊..glad u like it...😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: bellaaa
wow guys superb news yar
so now this ff yupieee
totally fab update tora and indu
the way abhay jealous thinking of the past and decided to remain only friend of piya
loved the dabba scenes and specially the raining scene
lovely song
piya also feel the same too wow
so now piya confront to abhay hope they solved their issues
cont soon

thanx beenish...lets see whether the confrontation will occur or not..we r evil u know na😆

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow fantastic update!!!!!!!
abhay n piya's feelings were explained beautifully.
both love each other but not ready to accept their feelings...hope they realise it soon.

thanx...glad u like it..😊

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update indu
It was long & thts y me happy
Finally Abhiya solved their misunderstanding & r spending their time lke olden days
Uff I lub tht rain scene & protective Abhay
I agree they need 2 talk & solve their other misunderstandings too
Uff I hope love confession bhi ho jaaye
Plz cont...😳

thanx shrish...love confession not so soon😆

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Lovely update loved it
Abhay realized his feelings n piya feels
Sorry for late reply

thanx dear...

Originally posted by: Priya46
beautiful ff

glad u like it..😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
Amazing yr... Plzz cont soon...
I hope both abhay n pia open up to each other. N tell dere feeling..
Update soon

thanx dear..glad u like it...😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#856

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

That was a lovely update Tora 👏 n u guys surely kept us waiting for long 😛 But it was worth it 😃 Loved reading it. Loved the beginning where Pia will be wanting to say something to Abhay but their phones keep interrupting them 😆 Then Abhay told her maybe the timing's not good But after reading abt the part where Pia talks to Anik I kinda fear for Abhiya Did Pia wanna say she's getting engaged to Anik? Abhay has already realised his feelings for Pia but when will Pia realise it? If she goes with Anik it wont be fair not only with Abhay but also Anik n most importantly herself I am glad Abhay is able to find himself back n am so glad he's away from Kate 😛 But what on earth is she upto now? 😡 Nothing good, going by her standards for sure 🤢 But now Abhay knows wat a b***h 🤬 she is, hopefully he'll put a damper to her plans 😆 I am so happy tat Abhay is back to being wat he is. He got rid of one vile woman n now he has his happy life back. Just the way he missed Tora, Pia, his mom n Risa, I am sure they missed him too But now everyone's back together 😳 Abhiya r the lead in a movie? 😃 YIPPEE But I hope Kate doesn do anything here 😡 Loved Abhay Risa convo too 😊 So endearing n I am glad Abhay could let it out 😊 But yes if he's happy on one side, he's sad on the other hand as well, as he knows probably its a bit too late for him to confess his feelings for Pia 😭 I really hope Anik steps aside Anyways lovely update Tora n please please please Indu n Tora dont leave this update hanging for a long time. I really missed this one a lot 😭 Thanks for the update 🤗

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#858

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wonderful update tora👏loved it❤️

so what did piya want to abhay...?????

what is this kate planning?????😡😡

sorry for late reply😳

Happy Diwali 🤗

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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STUTI KANSAL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#859

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