'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#821

@Indu and Tora.. This is amazing..!!! You girls are doing a brilliant Job.. Just finished reading all the chapters.. I'm glad you thought of converting it into a FF so that we can read more.. hai na..? Thank You..!

Waiting for the next update and the Abhiya convo.. want to see how they clear all the misunderstandings that happened in the past.. Do make Abhay express his feelings to Piya before its late.. and ha.. Anik is a nice soul.. don't turn him negative please..

Thanks for the PM Indu.. Do PM me everytime you update.. sent you the request.. accept it..

Update Soon Girls..

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#822

wow wow wow such a gr8 news, this is a ff now means way to read more, I am hell happy guys, I just love this ff a lot. Now coming to the update Woaaa tora yaar simply outstanding update. Ufff it was so so so romantic yaar. From beggining till end it was just fab!!! So abhiya were separated coz pf a misunderstanding in christmas party. I wonder when will abhay understand. I loved the trio convo's, the dhabba part, the rain part and abhay ka possiveness over piya. U wrote everything b'fully. Update next part soon I am dying to know what will piya say to abhay. Gr8 job guys!!!!

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

wow guys superb news yar
so now this ff yupieee
totally fab update tora and indu
the way abhay jealous thinking of the past and decided to remain only friend of piya
loved the dabba scenes and specially the raining scene
lovely song
piya also feel the same too wow
so now piya confront to abhay hope they solved their issues
cont soon

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Anj01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

wow fantastic update!!!!!!!
abhay n piya's feelings were explained beautifully.
both love each other but not ready to accept their feelings...hope they realise it soon.

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