'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: --peehu--
how can you end it there??
awesome update...it was written beautifully...

thanx peehu..

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Superb update.Sorry like button not working

thank u😊

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Awesum post.just loved it.i just love this ff.n its gud news dat u r changing it into ff.wow abhiya called each other by their nicknames.aww.hope everythng gets clear bw them soon.

thank u ...glad u like it...

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
beautiful update n gud news

thank u dear😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
thank you its beautiful but now she should speak the truth no new turn they should confess there love.

glad u like it...lets see what happens now..

Originally posted by: SukritiFan2001
Just amazing up date dear ,thanks for pm

thank u😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
beautiful update girls..!! so abhay lovs pia bt is nt ready to tel her...hawww how cn u stop at that point!

glad u like it..😊...hehe will continue soon..

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: flora212
WOW SWEETYS GREAT UPDATE! 🤗A BIG HAND FR U BOTH.👏👏..HOW CAN U STOP AT THIS POINT? UPDATE SOON.😛 AND I AM GLAD THAT U R MAKING IT INTO FF😆

glad u liked it dear..

Originally posted by: luckdiya
oh my god!!!!!!! u tk my breath away
mesmerizing updt grt wrk grls
bt u ended it at such an interesting point ...finally abhay realized his feeling 2wards piya😉 & pia ko bhi kuch kuch hota hai😆😆luvd dere raining prt... ❤️i m in abhiya dreamland

thanx dear...glad u like it...😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

thank u😊

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner
Awesome Update👍🏼

thank u

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing updt 👏

thank u prima

Originally posted by: DashingCuteJazz
Just amazing dear ,nice story thanks for pm ⭐️

thanx dear..

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
wow tora and indu. this one was really a beautiful update. so are pia and anik not really a couple, but just friends?

glad u like it dishu..about piya and anik..u'll become clearer with the upcoming updates😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

Originally posted by: meerubzara
fabulous update
abhiya moment was nice like the dhaba part nice pics thanks fr pm continu soon

glad u like it..

Originally posted by: .tanu.
Awesome update ⭐️ It was beautifully written. So it was that fight at Christmas party that separated Abhiya. So Abhay always felt something more than friendship for Piya and that is why he was hurt. Now he decided to let Piya be with Anik if she wants even if it's difficult for him and that's what makes him different from everyone else. Loved the Abhiya parts. Thanks for turning this into an FF and cont soon 😃

thanx tanu...glad u like it..😊...

Originally posted by: ashu1909

superb update tora.loved abhiya moment.waiting eagerly for next part

glad u liked it...thank u😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Woww.. that was a very nice chapter. loved the Abhiya moments and the the unsettled feelings they have for each other. they cant avoid it, they cant express it or ignore it either - such a complicated situation love is. liked how you described it. loved the dhaba part too... their friendship is adorable... i cant wait to see what Pia will say to abhay... continue soon dears...

thanks tanzie...glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awesome update
loved abhiya moments

thanx rumki...

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia
Just awe-some story dear abhiya moment very nice ,thanks for pm

thanx dear..

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
dat was beautiful..
brilliant work..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..

glad u liked it..

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
What the 😡 I am gonna kill u two. how can u stop there. It was such a beautiful update the moment was so perfect of the three friends together. So normal and natural Please update this awesome one soon

hehe..and i will kill u for not updating😆...glad u liked the update😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: -Chinky-
@Indu : Hey..! :)
This ss seems interesting.. Thank you for the pm.
I feel really honoured 😉
I loved the prologue ! I will comment again after reading all the 10 chapters 😃 thanks a lot again..

will wait for ur comments😊

Originally posted by: koli97
wowww why u stop there...sooo romantic😳...wowww hope they understand eachother feelings😊

glad u liked it...😊

Originally posted by: sukugeny
firstly thnks for ss to ff...frm bottom of my heart...

wondrful update with such a good pix.

wow..aww i loved jealously part more...
poor abhiya.figting of their feelings fr eachother...

rainy part too good...
nw hope they will talk before late n anik hv o come fr jealousy n abhiya vl come much closer na...love abhiya.
thnx.

glad u enjoy reading it...😊

Originally posted by: ilove99
awesome...

thanks meera😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

😊

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Lovely update tora n indu 👏
arrrggg 😡 u stopped der 😡

hehe..we r evil😆..will continue soon..don't worry..

Originally posted by: vampire123
Dialogue and pic r lovely but abhay past memory is so emotional can't wait for next update

thanks dear😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: Divya6696
@Indu and Tora.. This is amazing..!!! You girls are doing a brilliant Job.. Just finished reading all the chapters.. I'm glad you thought of converting it into a FF so that we can read more.. hai na..? Thank You..!

Waiting for the next update and the Abhiya convo.. want to see how they clear all the misunderstandings that happened in the past.. Do make Abhay express his feelings to Piya before its late.. and ha.. Anik is a nice soul.. don't turn him negative please..

Thanks for the PM Indu.. Do PM me everytime you update.. sent you the request.. accept it..

Update Soon Girls..

thanx dhrish😊...things are progressing well for them😊..lets see what happens...don't worry, anik won't turn negative...