'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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rockstarashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

superb update tora.loved abhiya moment.waiting eagerly for next part

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Woww.. that was a very nice chapter. loved the Abhiya moments and the the unsettled feelings they have for each other. they cant avoid it, they cant express it or ignore it either - such a complicated situation love is. liked how you described it. loved the dhaba part too... their friendship is adorable... i cant wait to see what Pia will say to abhay... continue soon dears...

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sadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Just awe-some story dear abhiya moment very nice ,thanks for pm

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

dat was beautiful..
brilliant work..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

What the 😡 I am gonna kill u two. how can u stop there. It was such a beautiful update the moment was so perfect of the three friends together. So normal and natural Please update this awesome one soon

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Mousumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

@Indu : Hey..! :)
This ss seems interesting.. Thank you for the pm.
I feel really honoured 😉
I loved the prologue ! I will comment again after reading all the 10 chapters 😃 thanks a lot again..

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Kakoli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

wowww why u stop there...sooo romantic😳...wowww hope they understand eachother feelings😊

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--geny--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

firstly thnks for ss to ff...frm bottom of my heart...

wondrful update with such a good pix.

wow..aww i loved jealously part more...
poor abhiya.figting of their feelings fr eachother...

rainy part too good...
nw hope they will talk before late n anik hv o come fr jealousy n abhiya vl come much closer na...love abhiya.
thnx.