Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 82

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

I finally caught up! This is absolutely marvelous!

Res. 😳

Thanks Iqra. I'll be eagerly awaiting your feedback.😳

nice update

yash's heart broke down😭😭😭😭 but it happened for good
love dadi and yash convo
whattt yash went to see arpita😕😕
ab yeh kya
where did aarti go now😆😆😆

waiting for next update😉

Originally posted by: maha9

wow superb part indu dear !!!!

i am sure yash will fall in love with arthi soon. but dont tell me he will marry arpita.

continue soon dear i am waiting !!!!

Thanks Maha.

What can I say what's in store for Yash? Que sera, sera...😊

Originally posted by: ns1970

Awesome update love yash so well mannered can't believe he is reading aarti journal hope they meet soon

Thanks ns.😊

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Great update dear👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...

Omg 😲that man is yash only..But why he is in poor state...

Liked Yash-Aman conversation⭐️

Really felt sad for yash😭 first tanya😡 and also hurted with Deepa😡..

Now with Arpita😡 ...She already had a boyfriend rahul...What happened to rahul😕..The way she behaving to yash she seems to be happy with this rishta🤔

Glad that yash got aarti's journal⭐️..Hope he won't MU that arpita was his soul mate...

Waiting for next part

Continue soon

Thanks Radha.😊

Yeah...that's very much our Yash. Now, now...don't get upset. Appearances can be deceptive.For all you know he may be on his way to a costume party in that get-up.😛

We have just begun to know Arpita. We'll soon know what happened to Rahul: Is he in or is he out?

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Beautiful update. Yash Aarti restaurant part was awesome, when he said he don't want to eat alone on his birthday.

Dadi send him to meet Arpita, and I felt that he will think that the journal was written by Arpita and will say yes to marry her. But pls. pls. give him some sign that she is not that simple as she pretends.

Waiting for Yash and Aarti's meeting.

Thanks Shashi.

Tell you something dear friend...I am simply looking forward to the continuation of the Brownies' meeting. I feel like Jerry who is thrilled to have been able to hide his piece of cheese from Tom.😛😆

Yash, Aarti, Deepa, Arpita, Aman...all are part of destiny's game. When who will be checkmated...who knows?

Originally posted by: Zetter

Another marvelous update Pal 👏 👏 👏...hehe so I was right it was Yash in the dinner 😳 😃 I love their encounter and the way he said that he didn't want to be alone on his birthday, glad that Aarti agreed to sit with him for a while.

Wow so Yash went to meet Arpita and saw Aati's book let's see if he will mistake Arpita for the writer or that he will feel that it isn't her after they start to talk...what I would like for Yash to do is ask her to compose a poem on the spot for him 😛 😆

I'm glad that Aman and Yash stayed friends, Yash laughing it off when Aman told him about finding his soulmate...haa little did they both knew that Yash already met her and at every crucial/important phase of their lives they come in contact with each other 😉

Fantabulous job my friend, well done 👏 👏 ❤️

Hey pal...I am once agin relieved that this part (about Yash) was well received. After being so deeply involved with Aarti's life, I had to switch over to Yash's...I had my fingers crossed that the readers shouldn't get confused as to what happened. Main thing to remember is that before the Brownies' meeting Yash and Aarti had seen each other only twice and that too when they were children...hence the graphs of their lives, even though had touched, never really crossed and went different routes.

Yeah, I wanted to explore the dostana between Yash and Aman a bit. I always wanted Aman and Yash of PV to have continued their friendship...They were perfect foils to each other in the Mumbai track. Anyways, Aman is to Yash what Malti in a way was to Aarti...a friend and a guide.

Thank you so much. Love you for being there...🤗

Originally posted by: Abie10

Another awesome update Indu 👏 👏 do that man was yash. Really loving the way story is progressing 👍🏼
So this is how yash got the journal hope he doesn't mistake Arpita as the writer.

Thanks Abie. I do hope the pace of the story is OK.😳

Originally posted by: pvejani

wow👏👏👏superb update dear👏👏.loved very much .thanx for this beautiful update and pm😃.

so...yash is going to mistake arpita as writer? very curious for next part.continue soon dear.

Thanks pal.😊

Originally posted by: Shwty

What a twist! Didn't think Arpita would be in this story. Hope Yash realises who Aarti is. Hope he finds out that he is the one he saved and he met her when she was small. Loved the update hope the next part comes soon, very soon.

Thanks Shwty...Oho, Arpita is very much a part of the past and the only one who was a part of both their pasts.😊