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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Beautiful update. Yash Aarti restaurant part was awesome, when he said he don't want to eat alone on his birthday.

Dadi send him to meet Arpita, and I felt that he will think that the journal was written by Arpita and will say yes to marry her. But pls. pls. give him some sign that she is not that simple as she pretends.

Waiting for Yash and Aarti's meeting.

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Another marvelous update Pal 👏 👏 👏...hehe so I was right it was Yash in the dinner 😳 😃 I love their encounter and the way he said that he didn't want to be alone on his birthday, glad that Aarti agreed to sit with him for a while.

Wow so Yash went to meet Arpita and saw Aati's book let's see if he will mistake Arpita for the writer or that he will feel that it isn't her after they start to talk...what I would like for Yash to do is ask her to compose a poem on the spot for him 😛 😆

I'm glad that Aman and Yash stayed friends, Yash laughing it off when Aman told him about finding his soulmate...haa little did they both knew that Yash already met her and at every crucial/important phase of their lives they come in contact with each other 😉

Fantabulous job my friend, well done 👏 👏 ❤️

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Another awesome update Indu 👏 👏 do that man was yash. Really loving the way story is progressing 👍🏼
So this is how yash got the journal hope he doesn't mistake Arpita as the writer.

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pooja vejani

@pvejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

wow👏👏👏superb update dear👏👏.loved very much .thanx for this beautiful update and pm😃.

so...yash is going to mistake arpita as writer? very curious for next part.continue soon dear.

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Shwty

@Shwty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

What a twist! Didn't think Arpita would be in this story. Hope Yash realises who Aarti is. Hope he finds out that he is the one he saved and he met her when she was small. Loved the update hope the next part comes soon, very soon.

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Pankhudi

@..Pankhudi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Prologue indu ... i know am very late and didn't commented on prologue when i read it earlier i'll try to catch up with the story ..hmm just read part 1 and i can't resist commenting on it ...its too good 😳 . Aww yash met aarti when she was born 😳. Aayu is super cute and payal is also lovely BTW ansh is my favorite of all the kids of aarya but here he is PraDhi child 😭 . loved aarya moments .

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

ooo it IS the same journal

you know i love your leads (ofcourse!) but i also like all the little details for the supporting cast - like in ths chapter- aman and daadi and arpita(ugh). you give them characters. and that too in just a couple of lines. amazing 👏