Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 84

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wonderful update, Indu ji! 👏👏

Hmm.. so that person was Yash re! He was all sad because of Tanya! Then comes the Deepa.. 😕!! At the end... Arpita! 😕 But I think Arpita got boyfriend! 😛

Hope Yash will be able to recognize Aarti! 😳 He saved her na! 😳 Owh.. the journal! 😉

Nice one.. sorry for the late comment! Thanks for the PM and looking forward for more! 😃

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Great , awesome. , superb,,, I am out of words ...

Originally posted by: pankhudi11

hello ...indu di 🤗( if you don't mind may i call you di please ?😳).

Read part 3-8 in one go 😃👍🏼.

What a ride ...😳 i think i have a very good fortune to come across SAMARPAN 😳. Many thanks to you for PM's of course . IT was blissful ,i am really touched ❤️.

Coming to the point..i mean parts 😆 i read part 1 ,2 and 3 yesterday and find it very interesting in part 2nd when payal said to aarti she can't find someone who can love her as completely and reverently as her papa loves her mumma and aarti started quivering and crying frankly speaking i was just enjoying that part as i used to any other fiction but after reading part 4 i understood what aarti meant , her pain ...her dark and painful childhood . IT took me to some other world ..Oh poor aarti lost everyone she loved . i can't believe myself i cried , it was heart wrenching . How can i cry on a fiction 😲 . Loved baby yash and baby aarti's conversation and meeting though they were short but i absolutely loved it and also loved the old sweet couple chris and anna , radhama and of course naanimasi 😳. Ah maya can never change whether its serials or fiction she is one such character i hate so much 😡. Oh poor yash got cheated ..never mind aarti is there for him😳. and yeah .. though i didn't like prashant but wanna know if his character is over / gone ? or he'll come back ?😕 Yash and arpita's meeting through yash grand mother was unexpected . How can his grandmother think that a girl like arpita is fit for yash 😲? Hope yash refuse this proposal . I know he will😉.

I will say it again it was very well- written . i absolutely loved it 😳. I regret that i delayed reading this wonderful piece of work 😭.

INDU DI you are really gifted to ..to understand people and their emotion i believe that one who can her/him self understand the things can only explain or write it so beautifully . Oh i bored you so much i got carried away . Please bear with me ..i promise i won't bore you from next time😆.

Looking forward to know more about yash and his past in up coming parts 😳. Please , update soon ..i'll be waiting eagerly 😳.

Lots of love 😳.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey pal...I am once agin relieved that this part (about Yash) was well received. After being so deeply involved with Aarti's life, I had to switch over to Yash's...I had my fingers crossed that the readers shouldn't get confused as to what happened. Main thing to remember is that before the Brownies' meeting Yash and Aarti had seen each other only twice and that too when they were children...hence the graphs of their lives, even though had touched, never really crossed and went different routes.

Yeah, I wanted to explore the dostana between Yash and Aman a bit. I always wanted Aman and Yash of PV to have continued their friendship...They were perfect foils to each other in the Mumbai track. Anyways, Aman is to Yash what Malti in a way was to Aarti...a friend and a guide.

Thank you so much. Love you for being there...🤗

*Reserving before you end up posting Part 9 😉*

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

*Reserving before you end up posting Part 9 😉*

Originally posted by: Surish