Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 8

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hello Buddy...wow seems I am really late to praise ur talent cause everybody is as blown away as me. Indu you are truely a genius. OMG the title "SAMARPAN" gave away the brilliance this SS is going to be. I just loved the play on words and your out of the box thinking when it comes to the storyline. I am yet to read any story where Aayu is apart of it so this is going to be new and interesting. The father, daughter, son moment was just so heartwarming. Seems like Payal as grown up to be a very in depth character and seeing things beyond what they appear to be in terms of being understanding, caring and considerate. Its so beautiful to see children who can visibly see the depth of love their parents share. Aayu reminded me of Ansh, protecting his sister and letting it be known he will do anything to protect her despite being her juniour. Wonderful sibling interaction moment and gives us an understanding of their relationship. Can't comment on Aarthi as not much was given about her directly but it is clear she is the rock of her family from their talks about her. Wow they have known each other since Aarthis birth...truely shows that they are soulmates. Indu darling you have got me riveted and hyped up so please do continue soon :) I have full faith in u to be blown into the world of SAMARPAN:)

Hey J...Thanks bud. I am simply overwhelmed with such nice words.

I am going to devote much of the story in building up Yash and Aarti's slow samarpan to each other, given the restraints they had put on themselves because of the experiences life had meted out to them before they met as grown-up adults. I just hope I am able to project this well.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

awesome start indu beautiful write up as always dear you fascinate me with your writing love the title. do please continue.and thanks for the pm.

Thanks for the sweet words Naeema.😊

Originally posted by: gmhatcher

Indu,

Thank you. I am in awe of your ability to set scene, mood, and story in motion all in the first paragraph. I've read volumes because of one beautifully constructed sentence and you turn out beautifully constructed stories with apparent ease.

And for this I thank you.

For your willingness to share these stories I thank you again.

Looking forward to an update Samarpan.

Hi Gemmy...Thanks my friend. I am just a rookie in this field...I have just Our Life, The Summer returns, and Sparsh to show in my resume. I find my own ways of writing a story weird. I have no plan, no draft, no prethoughts except a hazy scenario circling my head, and no research whatsover. I just sit down to write and let the feeling take over. But yes what I discovered about me in the journey of these three stories is that when something strikes me I remain distracted till I write it down.

I have to thank you and everyone here for partaking in my craziness and my fiction world.😳

Originally posted by: Leevi05

good start indu 😉

continue soon

Thanks Leevi.😊

Originally posted by: ssroomani

You are back, Indu with another story! I was so pleased to get the PM from you...🤗

Do continue...the beginning is so good!

Thanks Shobha...Need all the good wishes.🤗

Originally posted by: ns1970

OMG YOU ARE BACK AND I'M LOVING THIS NEW SS👏
WOW Yash with the kids talking about Aarti was special
hope you update sooon
WELCOME BACK HOME

Thanks for the warm welcome, ns...🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Vidya...Great to see you here. I am so happy...I missed you in the later parts of Sparsh.

(Bold parts) Were you there somewhere within me when I reflected on Samarpan?😃 Those insights are spot on my friend. I shall be dwelling on exactly that aspect. I am at peace now...

No Vidya...no Ansh, no Palak...in fact kids are not going to be there much. That was one of the reasons I was so wary of this concept...I wanted to explore only the coming together of Yash/Aarti.

As for your reference to the song, you are so right...it does mirror what I want to portray...especially these lines...

mann ki gali tu phuharoon si aa
bheeg jaye mere khwabon ka kafila
jise tu gungunaye meri dhun hai wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

bheeg jaye mere khwabon ka kafila"

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks for the confidence Miti. I have this vague idea about the story...Just don't know where it'll take me.


Here's the link to the first thread of Sparsh:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3308447

loved the story di..waiting for the next part

OMG! You're back!!!!!🥳