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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Thanks Indu di for coming up with new ff with new thoughs and your learnings which will enlighten us again

SAMARPAN is actually a very heavy word but then from where it is coming doesn't surprise me asi recalled our one of the convo when you tell me I will find my yash in my man its just you have to be adjusting and adjusting for you loved one is in a way samarpun hai naa di ..

Well samarpan is well defined here when a man and woman fall in love when a woman becomes mother and father becomes father of a teenage young gal or cool nautghy kiddo😃

Aarti journey from yash nazar.. hayee its really a great feeling😳

Love this way kids convo I too sometimes sits with my parents and tease mumma bechare mere papa phas gaye n all 😆😆😆

Hmm Yash birthday planz… so all I can say I am in to be part of your new journey

Thanks for pm and for this thanks will not suffice👏👏

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: InduG64

Aww...my sweet Saf...you bring a smile to my lips with the simplest, sincerest of compliments. With the expectations of everyone so high, my nervousness quotient has skyrocketed. Simply put...I am scared.😳...I promise I shall give this my best shot...

@ Indu: 😃 Don't be nervous you're an awesome writer so whatever you churn out is going to be great. Plus you have all our good wishes with you so no need to worry. 🤗

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doratalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Indu! Hi!

Yes please continue- pretty please!!!!!!!!!

I am already curious to see how your vision for this story unfolds. And I love that the kids in focus appear to be Payal and Aayu rather than Ansh and Palak. I hope they make an appearance as well though! I do love them both! 😊

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sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Woah..!! Indu.. u r back.. so soon...!! 😊

Parent kid bonding.. absolutely adorable..👍🏼

So its Yash-Aarti's love story... their journey...overcoming difficulties..situations..and finally surrendering to each other...Thats what I gathered...!! 😕

Yash starting with his own version.. and we might get Aarti's through the book..😊

I really liked the prologue...would like to read the further story too..

Do continue.. Indu..

Thanks for the PM...😊

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Okay I'm hooked.

I can't wait for the first chapter!

Thanks for coming back with another amazing story Indu! =D

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: freya123
nice start

Thanks freya.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ksfan2
loved the story di..waiting for the next part

Thank you.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Prasadini
Lovely work indu👏

Thanks Prasadini.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: guruandkratz
OMG! You're back!!!!!🥳
This piece is a masterpiece!!!👏⭐️
Aarti...quiet...I was really confused as Aarti is never quiet!!!😕😆
This is really great!!!👏⭐️
Can't wait for the next part to find out what 'Since the Day She was Born' is about!!

Please please please please please please please please PLEASE continue...SOON!!!😆

Hi pal...Thanks for the warm welcome.😃
Oh yeah...since the day she was born...ain't that something to be dreamy about? Destiny has strange ways about it...😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: RA17

Thanks Indu di for coming up with new ff with new thoughs and your learnings which will enlighten us again
SAMARPAN is actually a very heavy word but then from where it is coming doesn't surprise me asi recalled our one of the convo when you tell me I will find my yash in my man its just you have to be adjusting and adjusting for you loved one is in a way samarpun hai naa di ..
Well samarpan is well defined here when a man and woman fall in love when a woman becomes mother and father becomes father of a teenage young gal or cool nautghy kiddo😃
Aarti journey from yash nazar.. hayee its really a great feeling😳
Love this way kids convo I too sometimes sits with my parents and tease mumma bechare mere papa phas gaye n all 😆😆😆
Hmm Yash birthday planz' so all I can say I am in to be part of your new journey
Thanks for pm and for this thanks will not suffice👏👏

Hey Riya...Thanks re. You know I feel pretty sheepish for getting back so soon after Sparsh. I am myself surprised, because I was too drained when Sparsh got over. I had resolved to take a long break, but then over the weekend I met a girl...and then bam!...this thought crossed my mind and I was kind of rejuvenated and felt the same excitement coming back. I saw Aarti in that girl and everything fit.😳

Thanks for liking whatever little I wrote. Let's see where this takes us. Stay with me...will ya?

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