Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 10

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey Riya...Thanks re. You know I feel pretty sheepish for getting back so soon after Sparsh. I am myself surprised, because I was too drained when Sparsh got over. I had resolved to take a long break, but then over the weekend I met a girl...and then bam!...this thought crossed my mind and I was kind of rejuvenated and felt the same excitement coming back. I saw Aarti in that girl and everything fit.😳

Thanks for liking whatever little I wrote. Let's see where this takes us. Stay with me...will ya?

Originally posted by: doratalk

Indu! Hi!

Yes please continue- pretty please!!!!!!!!!

I am already curious to see how your vision for this story unfolds. And I love that the kids in focus appear to be Payal and Aayu rather than Ansh and Palak. I hope they make an appearance as well though! I do love them both! 😊

Thanks for the confidence, Dora. I shall certainly try my best...and that's the only thing I can promise at the moment. I only have Payal and Aayu this time...and that too not much...at least initially not much. I have an idea I'll get them back later. Why Aayu? No specific reason...except that I am a little partial toward the PV's unborn one. Payal was the obvious choice because of how she turns out.

Originally posted by: sia221

Woah..!! Indu.. u r back.. so soon...!! 😊

Parent kid bonding.. absolutely adorable..👍🏼

So its Yash-Aarti's love story... their journey...overcoming difficulties..situations..and finally surrendering to each other...Thats what I gathered...!! 😕

Yash starting with his own version.. and we might get Aarti's through the book..😊

I really liked the prologue...would like to read the further story too..

Do continue.. Indu..

Thanks for the PM...😊

Thanks Sia...Yup, I had to come back because I had to try to put into words this characterization. I shall be exploring something I haven't tried before...let's see.😊

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Okay I'm hooked.

I can't wait for the first chapter!

Thanks for coming back with another amazing story Indu! =D

Thanks for the positive vote Saffi...though I am rather nervous with this one.😳

Welcome back Induji with the magic of your words .

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

Welcome back Induji with the magic of your words .

The prologue was lovely and cute .

Looking forward to the story ...

Thank you Keerthus. They are just mere words that form in my head my friend. You guys put the magic in them by pouring your love and support.😊

sorry for the late reply Indu

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

sorry for the late reply Indu

Samarpan Prologu is Amazing Indu.

You put emotions in words which make readers spell bound. Waiting for this FF from you.

Hey Sarada...I was wondering where you were. It's OK pal...I just put up the prologue to gauge everyone's reactions. Also, that day it was PV's first anniversary, so just wanted to contribute in my small way and in the only way I know. I am glad you approved of the prologue.😊

Indu Di - This is a fantastic idea!!! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: custodian75

Good start. The prologue was quiet interesting. Very much interested in reading this FF. I also know that u r a very good writer and will create a beautiful story.

Thank you for the support.😊