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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

Ah (sigh)! Couldn't have enough of your story. Very good storytelling! Thank you.



Thank you for the sweet words, Cynthia...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thank you Sarada. Glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing start Induji 👏
I love it Payal and Aayu are sooo cute and their parents also 😉
love it , completely love it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Wow..Beautiful update 👏 👏

Loved the way yash narrated his past to the kids..⭐️
Kids are cute and adorable..Aayu convo was sweet❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Aarti was motherless child😭...Waiting for to know their post
Aarya kitchen romance was awesome😳 😳 ..Loved it😳
Continue soon



Thanks for the appreciative words Radha.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Oh god Indu Dear how on earth do you manage to be so damn captivating always, you never fail to deliver. The small recap into the past and Aarthis birth gives us an intake that there was some really painful and emotional memories related to it as Yash did not want to divulge to much info. Omg the moment she held his hand was just truely beautiful. Loved how Yash explained to Aayu the value of relationships and trust. The joint family moment with Pari, Prateek and Nanimaasi was lovely and shows that they are indeed a very close family. Hehehee Yash n Nanimaasi moment was cute and love how he calls her his girlfriend. Lol my favourite part was the kitchen scene, gosh can cake tasting get any more hot n sexy...love love love the naughtiness between Arya. Oh Indu how could you torture us with the final part lol Aarthi is a real smartypants putting Yash through a treasure hunt for his gift...super eager to see what she got him and how the celebrations continue:) I cannot express how happy I am that you have started Samarpan and we get to read more outstanding work. Update soon and thanx for the PM:)




Hi J...Oh dear me...what do I say to all these beautiful words of love and appreciation. I am only doing what I love to do. I am just nervous as to whether I'll be able to do justice when the intense emotions come in.

I am so glad that you are with me on this from the beginning...




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Great update...really loved it...



Thank you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read both prologue and first part together 😃

Loving the way story has started and it keeps you curious to know more about their past. As we are curious, you have to write more fast 😳 😆

I don't know how I missed Sparsh

Finally found it and read all whole thing in one go 😛

It was just amazing, no words to describe the beauty of your writing and what a wonderful story 👏 👏

You are wonderful writer 😃

Waiting for the next part of Samarpan 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh Indu, I'm already in love with the story!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ns1970

Wow indu awesome update👍🏼

As always I enjoy this beginning hope you update soon
Looking forward to read more



Thanks ns.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

nice dear like it aarya kitchen romance 😆



Thanks Leevi.😊

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