Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 17

Originally posted by: ssroomani

A perfect beginning, Indu! Knowing you, I anticipate many more delicious chapters ahead! 😛

Thanks Shobha. Delicious?? Hmm...Don'tcha know that too much of delicacies can give indigestion??😆

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awww where to I start, first of all thank you fro the PM and secondly I'm glad I didn't read that at work 😉 😆

Aarti's birth was a bittersweet one but I love how you made AarYa meet from their childhood 👏 😳

AarYa's kids are too adorable, I love the way they interact with their loved ones...Oooh that AarYa moment n the kitchen was sizzling, the teasing that those two did and subtle hints b/t them 🤢 😳 😳

I can't wait to see if Yash finds his gift before his b'day is over 😛 😃

Great chapter Pal, you're brilliant 👏 👏 👏

Hey my dear dear friend...I am so so relieved that you and everyone seem to like this.

As for the crib date (😛) of Yash and Aarti, do you realize that Yash was the one Aarti first laid eyes on after she came into this world (apart from the docs and the nurses that is)? Although that is an extremely divine thought, I might deviate it to a different thought process.

So you liked the cake romance too...😆 I am sure you won't be surprised when I say it was a takeoff from a long-forgotten younger moment in moi's life.

Stay with me, Zet...even though I might be slower in my updates initially. The real life is very tight at the moment. Love ya...🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Deepti...your first sentence reminded me of the start of the "Do Re Mi..." song...
Let's start at the very beginning...A very good place to start...
When you read you begin with A-B-C...When you sing you begin with do-re-mi 😃

Thanks pal...I am much relieved that this has been well accepted. I had said that though this is mainly Yash/Aarti's coming-together story, but I have to go a bit slow...build it up to the flashback. I did try to give hints. Most of our friends have caught on the gist of what I am aiming to portray. *Sigh* Still miles to go...and many palpitations to alleviate.😊

just read prologue and part 1😃 ...wow.👏...loved very much.❤️👍🏼..superb work dear...👏.thanx for update and pm.😊

Originally posted by: 123mitul

loved it😊

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

a beautiful update indeed, though everything looks perfect in the present, you have maintained some underlying mystery in their past. thankyou for the pm.

Thanks...Yes, everything was not as is now...I had to show the present to in order to showcase the contrast.

Originally posted by: custodian75

I really like the conversations that takes place between the children and parent. Very endearing.

Thank you...I guess being a mumma to two beautiful children helps me in visualizing the kids😊

Originally posted by: taahir004

I'm intrigued ... I enjoyed the conversations between Yash and Aayu .

I somehow felt Aarti had a difficult upbringing

Yash values relationships now thats awesome

Indu your SS is most interesting and beautifully written

Hey Taahir...thank you so much. Oh yes, Yash values and appreciates his relationships...now!!!

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

I love your Aayu...and his mating question...I bursted out laughing at that!🤣

Aarti's past is kinda sad.😭

She held his finger...I am a sucker of baby romance.😆

The treasure hunt begins...and the cake part...😳☺️

I can tell Part 2 or 3 is going to be quite a besharam one, hai na??😳😉

Fantastic update...please continue soon!👏⭐️

Thank you. I have always loved Aarti's unborn Aayu of PV...so it seemed kinda befitting that I bring him into my writing at least once.

Aww pal...that's as besharam I can get. 😳

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

OMG!!!! Indu Di!!!! 👏 👏 Romance is such a pleasure to read when it's written by you!!!

That was marvelously fantastic!!! 👏 👏

I loved every line! Each line said so much and had scope for the future developments!!! 👏

Aayu is a sweetheart! I love the kid too much already!!! ☺️

Your characters are always wonderful! 👍🏼

I'm so much more curious now!!! Please continue soon! 😃

Hey Vanny...thank you.😳 Glad you could connect with the characters. That way the first chapters are always a little tricky. If the reader doesn't connect with the character, how can he/she feel the emotions? Right?😊