Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139)

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Awww where to I start, first of all thank you fro the PM and secondly I'm glad I didn't read that at work 😉 😆

Aarti's birth was a bittersweet one but I love how you made AarYa meet from their childhood 👏 😳

AarYa's kids are too adorable, I love the way they interact with their loved ones...Oooh that AarYa moment n the kitchen was sizzling, the teasing that those two did and subtle hints b/t them 🤢 😳 😳

I can't wait to see if Yash finds his gift before his b'day is over 😛 😃

Great chapter Pal, you're brilliant 👏 👏 👏

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scorpiodreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

a beautiful update indeed, though everything looks perfect in the present, you have maintained some underlying mystery in their past. thankyou for the pm.

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Taahir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

I'm intrigued ... I enjoyed the conversations between Yash and Aayu .

I somehow felt Aarti had a difficult upbringing

Yash values relationships now thats awesome

Indu your SS is most interesting and beautifully written

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Roza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

I love your Aayu...and his mating question...I bursted out laughing at that!🤣

Aarti's past is kinda sad.😭

She held his finger...I am a sucker of baby romance.😆

The treasure hunt begins...and the cake part...😳☺️

I can tell Part 2 or 3 is going to be quite a besharam one, hai na??😳😉

Fantastic update...please continue soon!👏⭐️

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

OMG!!!! Indu Di!!!! 👏 👏 Romance is such a pleasure to read when it's written by you!!!

That was marvelously fantastic!!! 👏 👏

I loved every line! Each line said so much and had scope for the future developments!!! 👏

Aayu is a sweetheart! I love the kid too much already!!! ☺️

Your characters are always wonderful! 👍🏼

I'm so much more curious now!!! Please continue soon! 😃

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Superb part. Lovely family. Wow! Yash knows Aarti from her birth. She holds his hand in crib and from there their love story starts.

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Maleena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

I love it! Aww the kids are so cute, especially Aayu. I love Aarti and Yash's bond here. Let the treasure hunt begin. I can't wait for your next update.