Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 15

nice start
love it

ohhh aarti was brought up without mother love😭😭😭
love the arya romance
yash is just can't keep away from aarti😳😳😆😆😆

love payal and ayu.
he is sooo naughty
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Where do I begin

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I just loved Aayu. He is beyond cute. He is quite the animal-lover.

Aarti's past opens up a bit. A motherless child. That must be tough. Hope her father made up for her loss.

And Aarti picked out her mate on the day she was born by holding his finger. That was just awww...

The romance between AarYa was tooo goood

I am going to look at cake in a whole new way from now on.😳

And the treasure hunt begins.

True treasure is the update I tell you. Loved it a lot !

Deepti...your first sentence reminded me of the start of the "Do Re Mi..." song...
Let's start at the very beginning...A very good place to start...
When you read you begin with A-B-C...When you sing you begin with do-re-mi 😃

Thanks pal...I am much relieved that this has been well accepted. I had said that though this is mainly Yash/Aarti's coming-together story, but I have to go a bit slow...build it up to the flashback. I did try to give hints. Most of our friends have caught on the gist of what I am aiming to portray. *Sigh* Still miles to go...and many palpitations to alleviate.😊

Dear friends,

Thank you so much for the overwhelming response and encouragement. Please give me some time and I shall respond to everyone. Life's little busy at the moment.

Love you all.🤗
Indu

Love it! Keep it coming.. If it wasn't approaching midnight- I would write more.👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wow ji.. Wow Indu!!! 👏👏👏 Just loving it and craving for more... ❤️!!

The first part itself is so beautiful... 👏👍🏼

Again.. The kids are so sweet and adorable!! 😳 Oh.. The story told by Yash is somewhere emotional..! And it's Yash birthday... 😳 Finally.. Aarti is in the part..! 😃 Hmm.. Gosh! The romance.. ☺️!! Desserts...?? 😳😉

Waiting for more, Indu!! Thanks for the PM! 😃

Aww...many many 🤗 to you. Thank you so much for approving the beginning of Samarpan. Between the prologue and Part 1, I have managed to form a certain vision of the storyline. Let's see whether it gets more clear as we go along. Stay with me...😳

Wow Indu ,,,great start dear

Originally posted by: sallybaby

wow, awesome way to start👏

great update!

Thanks sally.😊

Originally posted by: princess121993

omg...wow...excellent brilliant..u r a great writer indu di...lovely awesome...do update soon n thanks for the pm

Thank you Charmi. I am humbled by your words my friend.😳

amazing update di.

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Oh gosh Indu Indu Indu... You made me blush like crazy reading this update that I was covering half of my face with a pillow so that my parents don't notice my emotions. I'm still trying to calm my heart down which can't stop racing after reading how yash "removed" the icing on aarti's cheeks and lips. ☺️And just desserts!!! haiyee Indu if Yash receives his just desserts, I'll be a goner for sure. 😆.. You write and depict romance in the most brilliant and beautiful way that even the cheesiest pick up line can make a girl (me) ,who averse these kinda lines, go all dreamy and make my legs wobble..

Ok more to the serious notion, I'm pretty sure Aarti's past was dark and somehow feel that her father blamed her and avoided her for the death of her mother. It's just a feeling though..

Arre Indu I still can't believe you were skeptical of yourself when you started this SS. The first part itself is so fantastic and beyond words beautifully penned. I love every bit of it and I mean it not just coz I love you and your work but it has the potential to become a masterpiece (the starting is already mindblowing). Great work indu and I have the feeling this is going to be in my archives too..
So here is a super super tight hug from your loyal and awed fan..🤗

Thanks Sheema...I am so happy I earned back my hugs...and also that your parents didn't query you as to what you were up to.😛

I am also glad that I could make you all accept this after Sparsh, which was given so much love. I am attempting something more intense here...and that sure has me up in knots.

Fan? Nah...a magnanimously appreciative and supportive reader, yes...Sheema, you guys are my support system here. If not for your two words of encouragement I would be left wondering whether I was going the right way or not.

Love you for being there...🤗