Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Superb part. Lovely family. Wow! Yash knows Aarti from her birth. She holds his hand in crib and from there their love story starts.

Thanks Shashi...Yes Yash ws the first person Aarti saw in this world apart from the hospital staff.😃

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

I love it! Aww the kids are so cute, especially Aayu. I love Aarti and Yash's bond here. Let the treasure hunt begin. I can't wait for your next update.

Thanks Maleena. Let's see what happens in treasure hunt.😛

Originally posted by: sia221

Great start.. too much info...frankly a little lost.. after reading introductions...!! 😆😆

1st encounter..Aarti falls asleep holding Yash's finger.. so Sparsh making the mark here too..😊

Yash bonding with the kids.. quite mature one..👍🏼

Peek into Aarti's past.. she lost her mother..but had her naanimasi for her...😊

(btw naani and dadi were COLLEGE friends.. thats quite forward thinking...liked it...👍🏼 )

Hmmm.. so the game begins...!! Interesting...!! 😊

Very nice.. Indu.. Thanks...and Do continue...!! 😊

Oops...I am so sorry Sia that you got confused with the characters. OK...Let me put it for you clearly:

Yash's parents are Gayatri and SP Scindia. His brother is Prateek whose wife is Pari. They have a son Ansh.

Aarti's parents are Satyendra (not yet named in the story) and Shobha Dubey. Shobha's mother had a twin sister...that is Shobha's maasi, hence she becomes Aarti's naanimaasi. Shobha dies while giving birth to Aarti. Aarti's naani (Shobha's mother) dies soon after. Therefore, from her mother Shobha's side Aarti' has only naanimaasi left.

I haven't yet introduced Satyendra's family.😛

Thanks for the appreciating words Sia...

Read it and loved it - but i would have to come back and comment Indu. Somedays life sucks - and your part 1 brought a little cheer and smile into my sucky day.

One word though - hai...

Originally posted by: InduG64

Oops...I am so sorry Sia that you got confused with the characters. OK...Let me put it for you clearly:

Yash's parents are Gayatri and SP Scindia. His brother is Prateek whose wife is Pari. They have a son Ansh.

Aarti's parents are Satyendra (not yet named in the story) and Shobha Dubey. Shobha's mother had a twin sister...that is Shobha's maasi, hence she becomes Aarti's naanimaasi. Shobha dies while giving birth to Aarti. Aarti's naani (Shobha's mother) dies soon after. Therefore, from her mother Shobha's side Aarti' has only naanimaasi left.

I haven't yet introduced Satyendra's family.😛

Thanks for the appreciating words Sia...

ok started reading and got confused I'll try again this weekend

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

ok started reading and got confused I'll try again this weekend

🤣 - see Indu's response to Sia on the previous page. She clarified the family tree.

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish...That bumble bee is so cute. I am sure Aayu will be very interested!😛

Originally posted by: Abie10

INDU!!!!! 👏

⭐️

I Loved the update sooo much ❤️❤️

Superb👍🏼

Thanks Abie...I love your hearty reaction...🤗

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

moi was here 😆

***Indu curtsies***...Thank you for gracing the thread with your presence, My Lady!!! 😊