#4|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 18 to Chp 22)

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Mrinalini

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Wooohooo!!! New Thread!

WAY TO GO! 🥳

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

@ Mina Di

You put a smile on my face and just you can do it everytime and you being not in the same city yet are closer to the people here. I love you to death

Meri super adorable sis.. Mahi hai! 😳

ummm...🤔

❤️

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Mrinalini

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Finally... I'm un-reserving my comments!

Chapter 18:

I knew Zoya won't forgive him so easily! I totally loved the conversation and Zoya's Past! Poor girl has gone through a lot of hardships in life.

I hope Asad manages to cheer her up a bit! 😳

OMG! Rashid-Asad scene was beautiful! 👏

Rashid made Asad look into his eyes and said "Not till now but you will if you don't get me Zoya as my daughter-in-law."

Well said Rashid! 👏

"Fear" said Rashid making Asad look at him and then he continued "Fear of an unknown thing is what you need to drive away from your and her heart."

True! 👍🏼 Totally loved the way you have written the dialogues in this conversation! 👏 ⭐️

"That was not your last case. You and Zoya are going to India to sort stuff out" spoke Rashid winking at his son.

I'm totally enjoying this! 😉 Rashid! 🤗 *BIG HUG*

Zoya shut Ayaan up! 😆

AsYa in India! 🥳

ArIya involved in case! 👏 AsYa in ArIya's House! 😃

Zoya scared of cockroach! 🤣

Reminded me of this scene! 😆

Awww.. Asad tried to talk to Zoya! 👏

"Ok so we act like friends, right?" questioned Asad again to be sure.

Zoya irritated now replied "Absolutely."

"We act like friends but what are we actually?" enquired Asad determined to get an answer.

"Acquaintance" was the curt reply that Zoya gave after pondering for a while.

This was so natural!

"Well we are not technically colleagues as you are still not back on the team. Friend is a word that defines two people who trust each other and can count on each other. Lovers was a never a word that defined us. And lastly I don't think we are strangers" replied Zoya not looking in Asad's eyes.

Asad looked at her intently and said "From what I see we are two people who love each other but are apart for a while due to some differences."

"So technically we have a relation that can't even be named" spoke Zoya hiding the fact that she knew that his words were so true.

Both stood looking at each other for some time lost in their own thoughts.

This scene was mesmerizing!

The whole song sequence was WOW! 👏

Zoya suddenly saw something in her mehendi which made her eyes widen. There was a beautiful A' calligraphed on her hand. She tried to hide it but Asad saw it nevertheless. He looked at Riya who winked at him indicating that she had got it done.

Kya baat hai Riya! 😉

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...

Bye bye...

xoxo

The Next 4 pages including this are waiting for you! 😉

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Consolidating ALL my comments here!

So, In the Next 4 pages are all the comments I have made by far on your 'Cupid Strikes' chapters on Thread #1, 2 and 3! 😉

*ENJOY READING*

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Mrinalini

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PROLOGUE:

Ahaan... Detective-giri..

Mazza aayega... 👏

Beautifully written prologue and well explained.

Congrats for the New FF! 👏

Love ❤️

Mina di

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Mrinalini

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Character Sketch:

New Character Sketch and New Story.. 😃

Completely unique! 👏

Padfoot here???? 😲 😆

Continue soon! 😳

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Mrinalini

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Chapter 1:

Awesome Update! ❤️

Loved it to bits! ❤️

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Mrinalini

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Chapter 2:

This update was sooo cute!

Completely loved it!

OMG! Asad and Zoya fighting like cats and dogs and they played Rock-Paper-Scissors thing? 😆

This is ADORABLE! ❤️

Zoya made Asad eat spicy food! Awww... poor thing! 😳

Ahaan.. I guess Najma is gonna get her bhaijaan and her bestie together soon!

Surely they have to wish her together! 😳

BRILLIANT UPDATE! 👏

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Chapter 3:

OMG!!! Their lips brushed??? 😲 ... ☺️

Yayyy!!!! ❤️

Ahaan.. Dance competition!

Haayeee...

Ya allah.. They FOUGHT AGAIN!!!!

Going to the next part! 😉

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#4|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 18 to Chp 22)

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