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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

i know i m a day late to write something specially for riya..

bt kisiko yaad karne ke liye koi din

koi pal ke khaas hone ke zarorat nahi hia..

kyonki unki yaad ek aam pal ko bhi khaas bana deti hai..

dedicated to our riya whom we can never ever forget..

she was, is , and will always be the princess of our hearts..

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was another day in etf ... bt for some this day was the worst.. the day they lost someone the day they never ever want to remember.. the day which stole their only reason to smile from them..

it was 27th october, 2012. can be named as " black day" in history of etf..

a day whn we lost our brave officer riya mukherjee, someone lost her daughter, someone a dear friend,

some a sisterly love, and for one person it was an undefined feeling bt yet a feeling that no one can ever understand..

arjun, choree and rathod were sitting in their conference room.. all pretended working bt were lost in their thoughts.. remembering the sweet moments they spent with their loved one.

ayesha and sakshi entered the room and saw everyone lost..

ayesha: sakshi aaj sab itne shaant kyon hia..?

sakshi: haa ayesha pata shree aur chotu bhi itne shaant arjun aur sameer toh hamesha ese hi hote hia.. par in dono ko kya hua.?

ayesha; gm sir.. gm guys..

no response..

sakshi: guys gm...

sakshi was loud enough to bring them all back from their memory lane..

rathod and arjun got up and went to their cabins..and choree too were not in a mood to say anything..

they were staring at a pic in shree' lapi..

ayesha: yeh tum dono kya dekh rahe hoo?

sakshi: waise aaj mausam achcha hai.. guys bahar chalte hai..com'n..

tears started to flow down for choree's eyes.

ayesha and sakhi shocked and ran to them..

all they could see was a pic..

sakshi: yeh kaun hai guys.. i mean meine isee dekha toh hai.. yeh etf mein thi shayad.kya naam tha ??? yaad nai aa raha..

shree: hamare ri...

ayesha: ri??

chotu: riya riya mukherjee...ek saal pehle issi din usne apne bahaduri se iss desh mein failne wale bohot bade aatank ko bachchaya.. bas khudko nahi bacha paye..

shree: hame chodke chali gai hamare ri..

sakshi and ayesha: guys we are sorry hume pata nahi tha..

sakshi: isliye arjun and sameer bhi itne dhuki hia..

chotu: hamare riya etf ke jaan thi...uske hasein uske batein.. uska wooh statistics ke data bolna ..

chotu bursted out in tears and couldnot speak more..

shree: har waqt.. " sir ankhode ke hisab se..." bas yahi se har line shuru hoti uske ..

aur ek pal hi bas hamara saath chod ke chali gai..

chotu: waqt beet gaya par yadein aaj bhi wahi hia..shree aaj 1 saal hogaya hum hamare ri ko gaye..

shree: ha chotu wooh kitna bhayank din tha jab humare ri hame chodke chali aur hum kuch nahi kar paye apni ri ko bachane ke liye..hum kitne majbur hogai the uss din..

chotu: haan shree wooh tadap rahe the aur hum kuch bhi nahi kar paye uske liye

aaj bhi jab hasta hoon muskurata hoon toh dil pe bhoj lagta hia ek kami lagti hai ke ri hamare saath nahi hai..wooh jagah dekh rahe ho sakshi.. wahan baitthe the hamare ri..

shree: aur bohot achche coffee banate the hum sabke liye..aur hygiene freak toh deva.. itni ke wooh cup bhi tissue paper pooch kar pete the..

kuch alag hi the hamare riya.. sabse alag ..

aaj humare zindagi par ek karz hai ri ka karz agar wooh na hoti toh kya aaj hum sab zinda hote..yeh seher hasta khelta naa rehta..

chotu: haan shree hum zindagi par karz toh hai hamare ri ka..

sakshi: par guys tumhare dost tumhe ese dekhe bohot dhuki hogi..

ayesha: haan uske apne jaan desh ke de apno ke liye di.. toh uske isss bahaduri ko ro ke sharminda mat karo..

sakshi: ayesha chotu and shree toh apna dard baton baya kar diya.. par..

ayesha: hoon par sameer sir aur arjun sir wooh toh aaj bhi andar hi andar ghut rahe honge..

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

rathod in his cabin..

remembering riya's last words..

rathod pov..

riya kyon chali gai tum..

hum sabko chodke kyon chali gai..

tumne ek ummedd dekhti thi mujhe..

umeed hum sabko saath lane ke..

umeed etf mein ek jaan dalne ke..

umeed mere dost ke zindagi mein phir se ek

hase lane ke..

par tum toh chali gai hume akela chodke...

bas reh gai tumhare wooh yadein aur tumhare

ankde...

i m sorry riya mein tumhe bacha nahi paya..

tumhe bhi kho diya.. jaise roshni ko..

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

arjun in his cabin..

looking at the red clip of riya which was the beautiful

memory of hers of their first meeting...

arjun had asked for the red clip of riya from her parents..

he was holding the clip and remembering small moments of

her..

arjun pov:

riya jab tumse mila tha toh yeh socha tha ke tum field work

ke masbut nahi hoon..

tum sirf research desk ke liye bane ho..

par tumne mujhe galat sabit kar diya ...

apni bahaduri apni jaan dekar sabit kar di tumne riya..

par tum ek baar bhi nahi socha ke hamara kya hoga..??

hum kaise rahenge tumhare bina..

tumne apni muskurat dekhne laga tha par tum wooh bhi

apne saath le gai..

mere adhuri zindagi ko aur adhura kar gai ..

iss kadar ke aab wooh adhurapan mujhe apni akhri saans tak

saath leke jena padega..

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

zindagi mein kitne pal jiye yeh zarori

unpalon mein zindagi kitni jee yeh zarori hia

the quote i gave for devildiva21 thread..

" aaj hum muskura rahe hai

kyonki kal kisine hamare kisine hamare hisse ke asson peye hai.."

" aaj humare saseein le rahe hai

Kyonki koi apne jaan usme dal gaya hai."

"aaj hum zinda hai

kyonki koi hamare hisse ke maut le gaya.."

no intention to hurt anyone.. bas i wanted to make us all feel our riya's memory once again..

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome os dear..
Loved it..
U included all four members pov..
Choree missing them n cries their heart out n describe their feelings to girls..
Girls r worried as samjun cannot do so..
Sameer thoughts over riya's loss..
Arjun feel lost after riya..
The feelings he had for riya was unsaid, undescribed n unheard too..
His smile that had returned had left him with riya's loss..
Simply wow..
Thanks for pm..

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archi

@hunny1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pinku...rula diya mujhe

Na rahe koi shabd baya ki

Kaise batuu apna dard

Jab wo baan gaya adaat ...

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful os!
emotional and heart touching
Choree talks,Rathod and Arjun's povs were well written
till today each heart living with a pain of loss of their dearest member
of team which can never be healed
not even with time
a big salute to Riya for her bravery and love for her country
that she didn't even think to give up herself to save her country n people
its a yr but still nothing has affected the love n respect which we hold for Riya
love our Ri..

thanks for this os pinku
loved it!
n thanks for pm