Arjun OS: Memorial of Love*Updated pg 3* - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

2.8k

Users

12

Likes

69

Frequent Posters

-Carrie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#21



I have not seen or experienced death of a loved one in my life.Touch wood.But I have always wondered what exactly must go through the mind of that young woman who has just lost her husband of few years in an accident or illness.What must that mother feel whose young son or daughter lies lifeless swathed in whites, who will never hear them call her Maa again.Or someone young and full of life and dreams like Arjun whose wife dies a horrible death for no fault of hers. You take us on a short but extremely poignant journey through the lanes of pain of these "dead" living human beings.I can only pray to the Good Lord that my current blissful state continues and I never ever get to see this first hand.

Very well written👏
shreya09 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#22
excellent writing 👏 👏
its beautiful & painful 👏 👏

Sadhana_pr thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#23
.

Originally posted by: -Carrie-




I have not seen or experienced death of a loved one in my life.Touch wood.But I have always wondered what exactly must go through the mind of that young woman who has just lost her husband of few years in an accident or illness.What must that mother feel whose young son or daughter lies lifeless swathed in whites, who will never hear them call her Maa again.Or someone young and full of life and dreams like Arjun whose wife dies a horrible death for no fault of hers. You take us on a short but extremely poignant journey through the lanes of pain of these "dead" living human beings.I can only pray to the Good Lord that my current blissful state continues and I never ever get to see this first hand.

Very well written👏

Thank you,dear😊. Yes,this is the darkest of themes possible and I realised that it makes the atmosphere very heavy. No more tragic stories from me now.
Arjun's story is indeed moving and his potrayal manages to evoke such deep emotions in us. No one should ever experience a tragedy of this magnitude in their lives. That this is fiction is deeply consoling!

Ah..I hate this morose discussion!!..Can we be back to our favourite topic instead-it's light and entertaining😉
-Carrie- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Sadhana_pr

. Thank you,dear😊. Yes,this is the darkest of themes possible and I realised that it makes the atmosphere very heavy. No more tragic stories from me now.

Arjun's story is indeed moving and his potrayal manages to evoke such deep emotions in us. No one should ever experience a tragedy of this magnitude in their lives. That this is fiction is deeply consoling!

Ah..I hate this morose discussion!!..Can we be back to our favourite topic instead-it's light and entertaining😉


Okay then.Please read my OS.That should be fun😆 Would love to discuss that with ya
Payal_156 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Jaha Arni me Waha 😉
ahaan

firstly
zuby ji
dat was real sid ji fb account
but ya its fishy to so clearly on fb 😉

now Sadhna ji 😊

awesome update 😊
lovely
very well written
so story flashbacks hmm

memorable lane 😳

really felt like watching...
waiting for more
lovely
n thanks dear for writing dis...
Amritamalhotra thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Again I am feeling the numbness. ..
You know after reading u everytime, i pprobably stop breathing for few seconds. ..
Then I start feeling extreme void around me abruptly. ..
It gives me wrenching pain of loss of someone close..or for someone who is living in grey...
"Pain without love / pain I cannot get enough / pain I like it rough /
Cause I would rather feel pain than nothing at all"

I could have never dared to feel the 'feeling' of a loving husband receiving the lifeless body of his beloved wife...

Related Topics

Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 9 months ago

🌸✨ Welcome to SarafWasima's Index! ✨🌸 A heartfelt welcome to my little corner filled with stories straight from the heart ❤️ Here, you'll find...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: RiyaA123 · 1 years ago

Hey there guys! I'm looking for a story with Ariya. I'm not sure if it was a SS or FF. It goes something like this. Riya took Xora and was...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Phir_Mohabbat · 9 months ago

Sooo...this is also a long ass story in case someone into binge reading. 61000 words to be exact Writing this gave me a closure i didnt know i...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Bodhianveshika · 1 months ago

Just a random thread to discuss possible plots, some stories we may have read, rant our frustrations of ehat could have been and how bad it...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 4 months ago

Case of the Heart The usual crispness of the ETF office was tainted that morning by a peculiar scent — no, not coffee. Tension. Unspoken, oddly...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".