Arjun OS: Memorial of Love*Updated pg 3*

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Hello everyone! I am back with other product of my crazy imagination. Hope you enjoy it. Please keep the feedback coming😊

Part 2-pg3

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Arjun stared blankly at what lay in his hands. The ETF-Evidence labeled plastic was not enough

to shield the whirlpool of emotions the object was radiating. It was a miniature Taj Mahal

showpiece they had derived from the crime scene. This was no ordinary monument and nor was

this an ordinary man. He could feel the sudden increase in his pulse,the hollowness in his chest

and a very familiar pain. He closed his eyes, struggling to fight back, not wanting to indulge into

the melancholy. But this was a battle he had always lost on many fronts.


"Arjun!..Look at this" rang in his ears. A voice which still made him skip a heartbeat,the only

difference being this was a broken heart's beat. Years had gone by, life had unimaginably

changed.But he had cherished each moment with her and still remembered each of their

conversations. This was one of the grave discussions they were having at the seaside. The time

had come to change their love into commitment and both of them were longing to exchange

those sacred vows,but something was worrying Arjun.


"Roshni,I am going to be frank with you. I have never been accepted this much by anyone

else,nor has anyone else ever given me more happiness than you. You are no longer a part of my

life,you are my life.


He could see her eyes glimmering with tears, but he had to complete..


"But we should think practically about this. The nature of my profession is fully known to you. Its

ruthless, its cruel and its unforgiving. I am willing to lay my life in the service of the country without

blinking, but cannot ask my loved ones to do the same. Roshini, when people marry they don't

just share the house,the life,they share each others happiness,sorrow and sufferings. But you

will have to share my enemies. And I don't think I am ready..."


Roshini stared calmly into his eyes and quipped with a smile-"These words don't sound like

Arjun Rawte speaking..."

"No-because today it is Acp Arjun Rawte speaking".

"Ok,so you are scared of what..our love being left incomplete?"

She had put it more simply than he had imagined, but he nodded.

Just then a little boy passed by selling some artifacts. She excitedly spotted the Taj Mahal and

wanted to buy it.

She thrust it upon him,saying-"So then you make this for me and our love would be immortal. Simple."

He helplessly stared at her smiling face. It was hard to be upset with her. It was an insensitive

comment but was filled with such innocence and simplicity that he just looked away. She did not

understand and he prayed that life should never try to make her understand. Some things are

best left unsaid.


"Arjun,can we just live the moment. No one knows what the future has in store for us and unless

we take the first step,no one ever will know. Fate can destroy everything we love but not the

love. Then what is the fear?.


They looked into each other's eyes for long. They were indeed hopelessly in love and could not

imagine not being together. Arjun gave her a reassuring hug and looked at the stars above-He

silently pleaded with destiny to uphold her faith at least...


He snapped back into the present and caught his reflection on the glass table. And he could

hardly recognize himself! The messy hair,the sunken face,the haunted eyes..Grief was written all

over it. He knew that even if the existence of Roshni's shadow had been wiped from the surface of

earth, he had become her living remain. His wounded heart was her legacy. And,he found

himself to be smiling through the tears.


She had wanted him to build her a memorial of their love...He had become the memorial.

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nicky13 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww that was so Beutifully written with the feeling ... Touching :)
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beautiful & brilliant writing 👏 👏 👏
superb 👍🏼
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lovely...love can be never dead. and their love will be there for eternity
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beautiful👏
u write it with such a maturity that i fall in love with this OS.😊
if I remember properly i have read ur previous ff too in which u describe arjun's pain. that was out of the world. I can say u r a wonderful writer👏😉

love,
laila
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awesome of
the feelings of true, endless n immortal
love of arjun-roshni was beautifully written
arni- made for each other
this truth is above all
even death
thanks
loved it
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Thank you everyone for the extremely kind words😊
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Very beautiful and brilliantly written.
Emotions were portrayed very nicely.
Touched my heart
keep writing more..
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sadhna dear 🤗
awesome os
lovely
beautifully written 👏
so apt title
very well potray
he himself becums memorial
so true ...
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Fate can destroy everything we love but not the love.


And there in lies the sum total of our life as we know and live it.In these few words.


Very beautifully written.👏 Wonder would it have been any less painful if at all he had convinced Roshni to part ways.Other than the fact of course that she'd been alive at the least.But knowing him what he must not give to go back in time to make her go far far away from him.


Please do continue.

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