Arjun OS: Memorial of Love*Updated pg 3* - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very beautifully written Sadhna..
I remember that once I have told you that your study on Arjun Rawte is simply from different level..unearthly. ..
Obviously you understand this character more than me..
You have helped me a lot to realize internal side of Arjun Rawte...
When I call him handsome or breath taking, you actually read his messy hair as memorial of love...
When I feel the pain of this man, you actually make me believe he is dying...
Superb story...more than story...
I will never have enough of this character. ..
Probably writer has himself created this character as such that he can be evolved and discovered from all the angles differently..
Hats off to the creator of this character and also to you...
Tajmahal and Arjun's love...beautiful blending. ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice 1
loved it ur quote fate can destroy everything v love bt not luv
it was awesome , heart touching
very well write 😃
i luv ds character very much 😉
Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Carrie-



Fate can destroy everything we love but not the love.


And there in lies the sum total of our life as we know and live it.In these few words.


Very beautifully written.👏 Wonder would it have been any less painful if at all he had convinced Roshni to part ways.Other than the fact of course that she'd been alive at the least.But knowing him what he must not give to go back in time to make her go far far away from him.


Please do continue.

Thanks a lot😊. I was almost inspired to write a second part..but then rumors of Siddharth leaving came in..too disappointed to give form to floating ideas😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sadhana_pr

Thanks a lot😊. I was almost inspired to write a second part..but then rumors of Siddharth leaving came in..too disappointed to give form to floating ideas😭

I think sid is not leaving just taking a break😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: laila1994

I think sid is not leaving just taking a break😊

Hope u are correct. Taking a break seems a more reasonable option anyways.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sadhana_pr

Thanks a lot😊. I was almost inspired to write a second part..but then rumors of Siddharth leaving came in..too disappointed to give form to floating ideas😭


Agree with Laila here.

It seems a private bantering between friends.We dont know if that's Sid's real FB account also.Why would he reveal something so imp to a fan of all people?😕 Dont let it affect this story. I want to know how that Taj Mahal turns out to be instrumental in seeking justice for Roshni.
Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Carrie-


Agree with Laila here.

It seems a private bantering between friends.We dont know if that's Sid's real FB account also.Why would he reveal something so imp to a fan of all people?😕 Dont let it affect this story. I want to know how that Taj Mahal turns out to be instrumental in seeking justice for Roshni.

That was encouraging👍🏼. I should have been more rational! Its just that after Behzaad left,nothing is too impossible😉. So,yaa...the story will be back..am not sure of how the Taj Mahal would be incorporated as of now..so prepare for more of Arjun's memory trip 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful os,you write it with such emotion that i fall in love with this.loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OK. Here goes the second part. This is a slight reference to a player who taught me the meaning of hero-worship. Could not help adding it here😛

Keep your views coming😊



Part 2

He held the newspaper in his hands for longer than usual. "The

master-blaster retires" read the headlines. And like millions in the

country, he could not help but feel nostalgic. His childhood

memories,his college canteen revelries was associated with Sachin.

He could remember the arguments he had had with Rathore,the

excitement they shared at his century,the disappointment at his

dismissal. Roshini had been a part of it as well. She was never fond of

cricket,but for him she had made it a part of her life as well. He had

patiently taught her the game,made her sit through the

matches,celebrated the victories together.


Though his life had ended much before Sachin's career,he could

tangibly feel those moments which had been made memorable by the

little man. But unlike the rest of cricket fans,he could not look behind

with a smile.For even this memory was blemished. It had darkness and

gloom written all over it. So in spite of a 24 years of cricket

memories,Arjun was saddled with the worst of them- of the day when

life suddenly stopped making sense.

No,it was not the day the tragedy unfolded.That was the day when the knife pierced through him. It

was the day after.Thats when the blood flowed out slowly.


Arjun had just returned from the hospital,bandages covering every

external wound. He normally opened the main door of his abode and

walked in. The medicines had made him numb both physically and

mentally,thus he was not able to think much. Which was a blessing for

him. Because the loss had not been soaked in yet. He still could not

figure the overnight change in his life. He had a shower and walked

into the balcony. He was having trouble recalling the incident.

Everything just felt like a bad dream. He was almost sure that he would

just wake up and everything would be normal again. This has to be a

dream-was all his mind repeated. Then why didn't Roshini walk up to

him yet was a question he did not want to answer.


He suddenly heard a lot of noise below his balcony. The children were

celebrating Sachin's century. He felt a familiar tinge of excitement,but it

drowned immediately. He knew the days of such trivial joys were over.

But he did not want to accept it. For this had to be a bad dream.


A regular alarm on his phone rang. It read-4 PM-Pick Roshini from the

Arts Academy. Though he immediately switched it off knowing the

futility of it,a part of him was telling him to take his car keys out as she

must be waiting for him. For this had to be a bad dream.


The door bell rang. DIG Cohelo walked in. They sat together for a long

time with a piercing silence. DIG cleared his throat and began

"Arjun,we need the details...

Arjun looked up distracted- "About?"

"About..what happened...last night..."

Arjun looked away. So,this was not a bad dream.

"I will fill in the details myself"-was all he managed to stutter.

Though, against the protocol DIG left the file with him.

At the door,he turned towards Arjun, placed his hand on his shoulder

and said- "The postmortem is done. You can collect the..ah..the.."

Arjun felt his kees collapsing and held on to the door. He nodded and

closed the door behind him and sat there on the floor,all night long.


This was the beginning of his sleepless nights. But there was a

difference. There was no rage,no pain,no anger,no grief yet. It was just

plain disbelief. Disbelief at the possibility of actually being separated

from her. Disbelief at the prospect of never ever meeting her again.

Disbelief at the proposal of spending his entire life without his life.


This was not the silence before the storm,this was the calm epicenter

of the storm. For from tomorrow the madness of revenge will give

company to the grief of loss. But today he was dealing with the bitter

truth that there was no waking up from this bad dream.

Edited by Sadhana_pr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
Beautiful & painful😭
U make me understand Arjun's pain...better👏
it was simply awesome
Every single word seems perfect
Nobody can write Arjun's pain better than this.
PLz cont it
love U
U rock😊
Edited by laila1994 - 12 years ago

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