Diary Of A Husband : Naitik Singhania , Update Page-2 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Dev.*



I hope so...i hope so...! thanks for encouraging me.😳


you are welcome Dev :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Dev Good second part 😊 Especially a guy is in coma he felling his wife sadness but he is unable to do nothing😊 Akshi is great Himmatwala👏 Continue the next par asap...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!! Its really good Dev!! Love it!!
Thanx for PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great post..loved each n every lines..
I appreciate ur skill... keep posting everyone...

tfs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Dev.*

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<p align="center"><font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Page 2</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Its evening , and Akshara sat just beside me. She can feel
me but she cannot feel my presence . She can talk to me but I'm unable to even
communicate with her by any means. After talking to me , she starts working on
office work but what she told me & what are her emotions , I'm not aware of
. I can only see these things happening around but not able to understand the
those particular situation & when ever I try to understand it , my brain
get tired . May be she was beholding/prying me ...with her shower of love . But
I'm not able to feel it . And when I don't make any movements , I can see the
sad face of my wife , who has a believe that one day I will surely stand , and
its like I'm not giving any sign of improvement , which is making her weak from
inside. I'm just like a dead body whose presence is not felt , a calm &
silent soul which will stand one day or not. The pain which I'm going through
is unbearable . Is this Love? If its Love then why we are not happy? Why I had
undergone so much of big accident that made me obligate/helpless. I'm not able
to communicate with my child Naksh & he actually don't miss me now since he
has not seen me from so many days & I think gradually he will forget me ,
if remain unreminded. He is so small & with age , he will surely miss my
presence. I'm not able to love him like other fathers do, I'm not able to help
him in his very 1st year of his life. I guess, all those things are
taken care by Maa , and Bhabhimaa is handling home while Akshara is managing
office. The only one who is not doing anything is me .</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Instead, I would had loved it if I had shared some of
workload of all others . It would have been good , if I can do any thing for my
family. Mujhe toh Zindgi se har khushi mili hain , aur har gham maine ab tak
dekha hain...hume mazboot banana ke liye zindgi ne naya khel khela hain...!</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Naksh & Maa came to see Naitik in his room. After the
meeting , what will be Naitik's views? Will Little Naksh still remember his
dad?</font>
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2nd part is alsi jjust mind blowing... lovedvit..really u portrays nk feelings..great thought...loved it
thanx dev... for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome and very well written👏
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dev ..yar superb yar..i saw this track of yrkh ..i literally cried seeing naitik akshra state..akshara ki feelings to hum sab jaanthe hai par tune naitik ka emotional feelings bhi dikhaya aaj..superb dear..
U wrote it beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well written
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Dev! This is just incredible... I really loved how you portrayed every feeling and every emotion from Naitik's perspective! Truly emotional and heartwarming! ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well the update may be short but u are an amazing writer! 👏
This was simply wonderful...
We all got everyone's POV after Naitik's accident except Naitik himself when he was in coma...the way u described the feelings of Naitik who is almost lifeless yet still alive and able to understand things around him was simply amazing!! 👏
Do continue :)))

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