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i thought no one needs the update😆😆
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part-70

It was night and Geet was sleeping in deep sleep
she heard a voice .she frowned in her sleep-kaun hai?
Voice-Geet-open youe eyes beta.Geet knew that she had heard that sound in her childhood.She opend her eyes and looked here and there.she could see nothing.she could only se smoke every where.slowly slowly that smoke reduced and she could see two people in front of her.She rubbed her eyes and as soon as she was able to see their faces clearly, She got shocked-Papa,dad and she hugged them both at the same time-aap log yahaan itne dino baad.
Sagar-Geet we are here to share your happiness.
Mohan-haan Geet hum dono tumhaare liye bahut khush hain.Bhagwaan tumhen hamesha khush rakhe.
Geet-Dad papa.but that is a incomplete happiness. Why can't I get those happinesss altogether.whenever they come some thing is snatched away from me.
Sagar-Geet I m too Sad for that.I want my family to be together but I think My dream is not going to be true.Geet I m sorry whatever Paami and Sameera did to you.Please forgive them.I was not feeling any peace from some days so we came here.
Geet-dad I too didn't want them to lose but Sameera hates me. Mom too is angry with me.
Mohan-So what Geet?They are your mother and sister.At leat you should try once.koshih to karo Geet.Kya pata sab theek ho jaaye.And if you too will behave with them like Sameera behaved with you so what is the difference between you and her.Pammi bhabhi must be thinking that you forgot them after getting another family.Geet you are not that selfish beta .You are my daughter.Sir's daughter who had a big heart .Behave like him Geet.Learn to forgive beta.
Sagar-Geet I really want to see you all like a family.And you promised me Geet that you would never leave them. No matter waht happens.You know I could see love for all in your eyes at that young age.You were the my lucky charm Geet. Geet for my sake. Forgive them .I m begging you.
Geet -Dad why are you doing this.If you want me to go there I will go and talk to them.But papa now I have some responsibilities for this family too.they supported me in my worst time.They held me strongly when i was on the edge of losing every thing and Sameera didn't care about them at all.and I will have to take their permission too to go there.If they allow me I will definitely go.
sagar-Theek hai beta,Now I don't have much right on you after all that happened,but still I wish that I could see you all as a family.
Mohan came forward and kissed Geet on her whole face and Sagar to hugged her with love and they stood apart from her and started to disappear-Be always happy Geet.
Geet-Dad,Papa where are you going.please don't go.I need you both. Paaapaaa... Daaaddd...Please don't leave me. Please don't go .I miss you papa.I miss you dad.But both disappeared it seemed that they too had tears in their eyes
Geet woke up with a jerk and found herself in bed. She was sobbing badly- I miss you a lot. Please come back.She got up from the bed and searched for her fathers but couldn't.She was crying now to remember Sagar's face .She set on Floor near bed and cuddled in to herself while crying . and after sometime her cries subsidized and she again slept in that position.
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It was morning and all were on dinning table but Geet was still not up by now.
ram-Priya Geet nahin aayi.is she still sleeping?
Priya-I don't know actuaaly I was too surprised for not seeing her
Savitriji-Priya -Jaao dekho .Is she fine or not?
Maan-Maa you sit, I will see her.
and he went to her room It was open and he called her-Geet
but hearing no sound he went in and saw her on the floor al cuddled in herself.He quickly went near her-Geet
He shook her and her sleep broke. She saw Maan and then realized her position on floor.She instantly got up-Maan.Tum yahhan? I think I m late today. G... Good morning.
Maan observed her face it was was showing dried marks of tears-Geet.Is every thing alright?Tum yahaan floor par kya kar rahi thi?
Geet-Wo maan I m sorry.Shayad neend me uthkar aa gayi thi.I think all are waiting for me.Please give me ten minutes I m comimg after getting fresh.She moved towards the wash room But Maan stopped her-Geet,Kya baat hai you are looking disturbed. bolo na
Geet again felt her eyes wet-No nothing much.I will tell you later. please ab tum jaao warna sab aa jaayenge.
Maan-Are you sure?
Geet-Off course Maan.please don't worry. I m just fine
Maan-Okey Geet.get fresh and come soon and went.He could See that Geet was disturbed. .
In his thought he reached to the dinning area
Ram-Maan. Geet kahaan hai ?
Maan-Papa she slept little long, so she is comming in few minutes
Savitriji-Theek hai.
After some time Geet came-Good morning Every one.and I m sorry for being lata.wo pata hi nahin chala ki it's morning now.
Priya-to kya hua ?come have your breakfast.
Geet set near Maan as dadi had alredy teased them for that.Geet was lost in her dream-Wo sapna hi tha ya phir wo dono sach me aaye the.
Ram-Geet wo toast pass karna .Geet gave him milk instead of toast as she was lost in her thoughts.
Priya-Geet Ram ne toast maanga hai milk nahin.
Geet-Huh? Oh I m sorry and gave him toast.
Geet was very quite today and this was strange for them.
Savitriji observed her and called-Geet
Geet passed her the jam.
All now looked at her.
Ram-Geet kya baat hai beta.Where are you lost?
Geet-Par dadi ne to jam hi maanga tha na?
Savitriji-Geet I didn't ask you for any thing.
Maan held her hand-Geet kya baat hai?Kyun itni pareshaan ho?
Geet now wasn't able to control herself more.She felt her eyed burned with tears-I m sorry.
Ram-if you are in some problem then say that na.hum sab hain na.
Geet-Papa Actually I m want to say some thing.
Ram -haan to kaho na itna soch kyum rahi ho?
Geet-actually I want to go home. I mean I want to talk to Mom once.
Maan-Geet ye kya kah rahi ho.You know nw how they behaved with you.
Geet-Haan.. I know. but I think that I should do at least one effort to convince them.
Ram-Geet bachche you owe nothing to them.
Geet-I know ,but they were my family at least for me for so many years . They gave a shelter to me.to kya mera farz nahin banta ki main ek baar un toote hue rishton ko jodne ki koshish karoon.
Ram-Geet . please tell me what is bothering you? at night you were all fine.
Geet-papa yesterday night my papa and Dad came in my dream.You know it never happened with me. I never saw them in my dreams even for once since they left. Dad was very sad.He was sad to see that his family was broken.For my dad I want to go there.Papa too told me to do so.he said that I m not sameera so I should not behave like her.
Ram-It's okey .You can go but not alone.
Geet-But papa
Ram-I respect those two souls, so I m sending you but I don't trust pammiji or sameera now.
Maan-Can I go with her Papa?
Savitriji-I think Maan can go with her
Ram-Geet I have a condition.If they refuse to accept you .You will never go there.I don't want them to hurt you again.
Geet-Ji papa, I promise.
Priya-and whatever good or bad happens there you will not take that on heart.I don't want to see you sad again.
Geet hugged Priya-Maa I promise I will not allow them to effect my happiness . and thank u so much
Savitriji-Geet I too want to say one thing.We are family now you have all the rights to ask for any thing you want.I want you to show your right on us.
Geet-sorry dadi .I was scared to ask.but i will never do that again
Savitriji kept her hand on her cheek and smiled.


In Ram' room
Priya-ram why did you allow geet to go thate .What if Pammiji and sameera again hurt her
ram-I think Pammiji will not do that after all that happened.And Geet still has some guilt indide her for all that.So I want him to be free from that guilt.She will be satisfied to think that she at least try to convince them. and don't worry,nothing will happen there.
Priya-I hope you are right.
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Maan and Geet reached Khanna house.Maan stopped the car.Geet was
little bit nervous.Maan kept his hand on her to make her at ease
Geet-Maan I m scared.
Maan-let's go back
Geet-Nahin.Aaj hanin kiya to kabhi nahin ja paaungi.Maan I need a promise from you
Maan-phir se you are asking for a promise?yahaan koi aatma hai kya jo tumhe apne control me lekar promise karwaati hai?
Geet whaked on his arm-Maan, stop it. I only want to say Whatever happens inside the house, you will not lose your temper.If Sameera gets angry on me please let her be. Meri wajah se uska sapna to toota hi hai.
Maan-What is this?Agar wo tumhe ulta seedha kahegi to how will I keep my cool
Geet-I know .That's why I m saying this.
Maan-Geeett
Geet.-please.mere liye and she showed him her cute face
Maan-Okey .but I want some thing in return too
Geet raised her eyebrow-tell me what do you want.
Maan-If I kept my promise to badle tumhen wahi karna padega jo main
kahoonga.
Geet-And what do you want
Maan whispered in her ears- Ahaan,That's a surprise my red apple
Geet-ye red apple kya hai.
Maan-Pulled her cheeks-That's you, my red apple.
Geet Shied-maan
maan-Dekho dekho you are turning in to a red apple again. ab jyada red mat ho otherwise I will eat you up right now righ here.
Geet-Thanks maan
Maan-why?
Geet-To make me comfortable before going in, and she kissed on his cheek.
Maan held his cheek in disbelief-OMG.geet pinch me.Am I dreaming or you really did it?
geet smiled and this time maan to reciprocate with the kiss on her cheek too-Let's go
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geet pushed the bell and few minutes later Door opened.Thare was Ramu kaka on the door-Geet beti.and he was very happy to see her-kaisi ho tum
Geet-theek hoon Ramu kaka aap kaise hain.
Ramu kaka-Tumhaare bina ghar ekdum suna hai bitiya.par main tumhaare liye bahut khush hoon.Mujhe pata hai ki maan ke saath tum bahut khush rahogi.
Geet-Thanks kaka.wo mom hai ghar par mujhe un se milna hai.
Ramu kaka-arrey ! Geet ander to aao.ye ghar ab bhi tumhara hi hai.aao
just then Sam came out of her room and saw maan and Geet-Oh ho.Mr. and would be maan singh Khuramna are here.Welcome. If some thing else is left which you want from this house?
Pammi too came-Sameera! Behave yourself.Don't forget that this house belongs to her too.
Geet could not believe what Pammi said-Mom .please make her understand it was not in my hand.
Sameera-Geet stop creating drama.you did all with a well knitted plan.
Maan-sam. you are crossing your limits.
Geet-Maan please , you promised me. Please.let me talk.( To Sameera) sam tum galat soch rahi ho. Perhaps You and Maan were not made for each other. Jo hona tha ho gaya .Please bhool jaao sab.and we can move forward.
Sameera-No way Geet.Tumhen to main kabhi nahin bhool sakoongi.You
are the only one who always stood between me and my happiness.
Pammi-Sameera.That's enough.agar tumhen peacefully baat nahin karni hai to you can go from here .I will talk to you later. Go right now in your room.
sameera saw them with anger and marched towards her room.
Geet-Mom I m very sorry .but i really didn't do that intentionaly. Mujhe pata hi nahin chala when I started to love Maan.
Pammi-It's ok Geet.Whatever happend was destined to be.You were not wrong.agar koi galat tha then It was me.maine hi kabhi koshish nahin ki tum dono ki dooriyaan mitaane ki.Now It's very late.Sameera will not change now.But I want to say sorry to you.
geet-no Mom.Please don't say it.to main ye samjhoon ki aapne mujhe maaf kiya.
Pammi-geet tumne kuchh galat kiya hi nahin to maafi kis baat ki.
geet held her hand-Thank u mom.Thank u so much and she had tears in her eyes.
Pammi kept her hand on her face and Geet saw an all new Pammi as she was touching her first time.She never touched geet before it.Geet kisse her hand-Thank u mom.
Pammi nodded and Geet left.
Pammi-Geet ab tumhen ek family mil gayi hai but we are too your family. give some more time to sameera.She too will understand.
Geet-Ji mom.
And That day Geet was feeling herself quite contended.

Precap-what say -an official date before marriage?

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Guys-I can't promise when will give my next uodate.It may take three or four days.Please bear with me-Rashmi
Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Bhaag Milka Bhaag 😃
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Power supply is resumed

if it continues, I will update in some time😃😃

will be wating 😊😃
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Originally posted by: valli30

will be wating 😊😃

updated -pg 11
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me first

my guess was right its geet's dream

geet was disturbed after the dream
she was missing her dad and papa😭😭😭

everyone tensed as geet is lost some where and finally she told evryone whats bugging her

ram allowed her to meet pammi

maan,geet reaching khanna's house

maan wanted to make her relax before going inside and he started teasing her 😉😛

geet phir se promise (mein soch rahi thi ab kya mangagi maan promise math karna)🤢

maan calling geet as red apple,pulling her cheecks and geet kissed him(maan is right I to pinced myself sach me geet ne kiss kiya)

my heart was thudding when they rang the door bell 🤢

pammi realised her mistake 😃😃

sam phirse se geet ko dosh de rahi hai😡

ofcourse official date mein tho abhi se hawa mein udne lagi

aur ek aur long drive bhi 😉

will be waiting for next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli30

Bhaag Milka Bhaag 😃

we too are planning to go😃😃
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aww such a sweet sweet emotional update...

my heart was beating very fast when Geet and Maan were ringing bell...

thank God Pammi got some sense...

she realized that she was wrong in supporting Sam's ambitions...

now Geet is relieved from the burden on her heart...

waiting for next part...

official date to honi chahiye but kuch hatkar...woh beach par tent wagerah to bahut dekh liye hain...


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aww such a sweet sweet emotional update...

my heart was beating very fast when Geet and Maan were ringing bell...

thank God Pammi got some sense...

she realized that she was wrong in supporting Sam's ambitions...

now Geet is relieved from the burden on her heart...

waiting for next part...

official date to honi chahiye but kuch hatkar...woh beach par tent wagerah to bahut dekh liye hain...



Thanks Yaar
par yaar tumne to mujhe tension hi dedi kuchh hatke maang kar
Well I will try my best, actually I was too thinking the same.i hope that i get successful to give some diggerent😃😃😃
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😊 update ke liye

last one too is due😆

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