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innocentindian

@innocentindian

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Posted: 20 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: smisha

I will post some more later.

Thanks!
Smisha

We will look forward to it....😊

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akshata

@Akshata

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Posted: 20 years ago

#32

Hey Smisha,
I'm so glad you shared your poem with us.It's very evident in your posts that you enjoy writing.The only complaint I have is that you don't write often enough!!!

so looking forward to some more.....

Cheers

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innocentindian

@innocentindian

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Posted: 20 years ago

#33

ya - and i think u should make sure akshata doesn't complain more ... 😊
....cos otherwise i will as welll 😆

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Mumtaz

@mumtaz

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Posted: 20 years ago

#34

Smisha,thats very sweet of u to have shared it with us!
I love writing too,by my hindi is not as powerful so putting my thots in writing with proper words gets alittle weird! 😛 😆
But urs is excellent and pls do share somemore if u don't mind,i love reading it!!! 👏 👏 👏

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innocentindian

@innocentindian

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Posted: 20 years ago

#35

that's ok mumtaz ....go for it anyway! we will look forwarrd to it... 😛

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Anitha

@anitha.b

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+ 2

Posted: 20 years ago

#36

ok friends here are some more..please give me your honest feedback

Pyaar bhaara tarana hain zindagi
Geeton ki dhaara hain zindagi
Tum nahin ho to meri zindagi
ashkon ke maala hain zindagi

saaya bhi mera tera naam pukare
puka pukar kar, dil bhi na haare
shyaam ho ya savere, tum ho hamare
janam janam se hum hain tumhare

Ishq mein kya guzare
Deewane hein jaane
pal pal ki tadap
laye bahar baad mein

Pal guzre
Din guzre
Raat guzre
guzre na teri
yaddon ki ghaadi

Jaane kya baat hain
Dil ki gherahi mein
Ek choot nazar ata hain
dard ki ehasaas nahin
kya yeh pyaar to nahin

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srividya

@sree

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Posted: 20 years ago

#37

Wow Smisha,this is really excellent. I did not know that you are such a great writer...I am glad that i asked you to pen in some words... 😃

Hey friends, i deserve a pat in the back too for bringing our dear Smisha to open up her collection of poems.... 😉 Will i get a pat? hehehe I am just joking. 😳 Smisha, full marks to you for this!!!

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innocentindian

@innocentindian

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Posted: 20 years ago

#38

👏 and <pat> for sree! .... 😊

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akshata

@Akshata

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Posted: 20 years ago

#39

Thanks Sree and that was truely wonderful smisha.
Is Hindi your mothertongue? How do you find these words? Wow!

Cheers

I'm sure there are many out there who are very talented but are either very busy or shy to share their poems with us.Come on guys,please come forth with your prose and Poetry.

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