Discussion Topic: Poetry - Page 3

Hey IIndian
Brilliant idea.I love the title track too.

And Mumtaz.... thank you for your compliments.The translatiion was apt.Poetry loses it's essence if translated literally.You did a good job.

All our serials may not have the best story writers but they have fantastic lyricists,musicians and singers.Do you agree?

Cheers

Absoloutely,Akshata!!

I love all the songs from most of the serials,like Tum Bin Jaoon Kahan,Astitva Ek Prem Kahani,Sindoor Tere Naam Ka,TD etc!!They're just so melodious and the lyrics are just superb,which is hard to come by these days in most of the hindi gaaney,unfortunately!! 😆

Btw,Sree,II and Akshata,thanks for the compliments..i did my best for the lyrics!Glad it turned out right! 😛

ok Sree as promised here is what I had written few years ago...

Pyaar mein hamara aansoon is kadar barase
jaise bharkha roothe kaale badal se
Mera Pyaar root kar is tarah bichada
jaise koyi atma apne sharir se nikale



Dil naumeed hota hain jab,
hava ke jhoke maar jathe hain
bhavanaoo ke phahad ko
hava bhi kya Jaane
kis nazuk ghaddi mein hain dil


koyi pyaar kare to jaane
koyi dil se pooche to jaane
koyi pyaar mein choot kaye to jane
dard sahkar jiye to jane

Hey Smisha, great job yaar!!! Hmm, you have a great dictionanry of hindi words, good good!!! 😊

Wow!is all I can say,Smisha.

Excellent choice of words,Smisha!!Very Nice!!! 👏 👏 👏
Wish i cud write like that!!!! 😛

smisha - that was smashing

absolutely brilliant smisha .... very moving poem !! loved it !

Thanks everyone. This is my 10 year old treasure. I was very passionate about writing when I was in school and college. Since I also studied with Hindi as my major through out my schooling and college, words were not difficult. I always felt little shy to get them published in a school magazine or somewhere else...I am glad I shared with you all.

I will post some more later.

Thanks!
Smisha