FF: Broken Hearts[Pt.27 Pg.78, 30th December] - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Hey you guys, thanks for your comments ❤️ I'm on my way to work and I'll try to update on my phone, so maybe in an hour if I come up with anything good 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Loving it very much.. I hope asad finds out the shadow was none other than tanu's.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Okay, I know it's short, so I'll try and continue later..

Part 10.1:
Asad almost walked out without his shirt but stopped at the door and grabbed it of his bed. When he got out Dilshaad had just got to the kitchen and was getting breakfast ready, she looked at her son looking around and said; Zoya change karne ki liye gayi hain - suppressing laughter seeing her sons expression. She had been at taken back seeing Zoya walk out of Asad's bedroom at 6 AM, but had hear her mutter; yeh Mr. Khan mujhe pagal karwake chorega, itne subha koi kise ko darate hain kya?! Allah Miya what's wrong with Mr. Khan, yeh bimar hone ki natak ki liye toh unhe nai chorungi main..

Woh Zoya abhi abhi ayi thi, woh hum dono..
Relax Asad, mujhe achi tarha se pata ke meri Zoya kis type ki ladki hain, aur mujhe yeh bhi pata ke aaj woh tujhe nai choregi - Dilshaad couldn't hold back her laughter any more and seeing Asad's expression almost made her fall.

Ammi itni modern kab se hui?! - Asad thought to himself slowly scratching his head, and looked up to his Ammi with a confused look on his face.
Ammi, Zoya ne aapko bataya kya? - he asked still confused.
Are beta, aur kya. Wahi bataya jo Tum dono ne kiya - Dilshaad said once again laughing seeing her sons terrified look.
A..aurr.. woh kya hain? Asad asked terrified. He wasn't sure of what scared him the most, the fact that Zoya had told his Ammi everything or the fact that his Ammi was reacting like THIS!!

Yeh ke tumne use itne subha utaya aur use daraya, mana toh padega mera beta bada hogaya hai. Aapna biwi ko chedta bhi hai - she said smiling, but suddenly she got serious; baar beta, yeh bimar hone ka natak acha nai tha, tujhe pata hain na ke Zoya tujhse kitna pyaar karti hain, and when you say you're sick she actually believes you. Woh abhi abhi khud bemaar thi, itna stress lena acha nai hai uski liye.
Asad hardly heard a word coming out of his Ammi's mouth, he was so relived that Zoya hadn't told his Ammi everything.
Asad, Tumne mera baat suna bhi ya nai?!
Ha Ammi suna, Zoya kaha par hai?
Behind you, aur main aapse koi baat nai karna chati - with that she turned around and sat on the chair that was placed the furthest from Asad's.
Acha Zoya, aaj toh main bhi tumhe nai chorunga, maine toh sirf bimar hone ka drama kiya, tumne toh sach mein heart attack diya..
Tanveer saw all of this from the top of the stairs and happily got down them thinking aaj toh mujhe koi nai rook sakta, aaj se Zoya ke jagha mera!!


I had to bring Tannu in, sorry, you'll see later 😛
Edited by Illo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
tis is really lovely...
asad n zoya r just so cute...
thx fr the pm...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Wow lovely
need more asya scean
hope u update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Too cute! How they're pretending haha I hope Tanveer misunderstands and in turn her true colors come out infront of Asad 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Hey you guys, thank you so much for all the sweet comments, I just got of work and wasn't gonna update more today cause I was so tired, but reading all your wonderful comments gave me energy, I'll see how much I can write on my way home 😉 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Here's the second part of Chp. 10

Part 10.2:
Asad watched Zoya sit at the chair the furthest away from his; acha toh mujhse door betna chati ho, main bhi dekhta hoon ke kaisa kamyab hongi tum!
Tanveer quickly got down the stairs and was about to sit next to Zoya, so she ended up being between them when Asad stopped her; Tannu tu waha peh beet - ha said pointing towards the chair across the table. Saying this he sat down on the chair next to Zoya smiling. Tanveer stared at him stunned for a minute and then went and did as he told her, to shocked to have an actual reaction to what just happened.
The doorbell rang and sensing someone sit next to her Zoya said; Nazma please darwaza kolo na.
Nazma was on her way into the kitchen and just turned around hearing Zoya without looking up.
She brought in the pizza box a few minutes later.
Zoya itne subha subha aap pizza kaogi? - Nazma said finally looking up and what she saw made her drop the pizza box on the floor.
Zoya looked up and saw Nazma's shocked expression and her pizza on the floor; Nazma mera pizza! Tum itna shocked kaise ke is bechare pizza ko itni berehmi se zamin peh girna pada.
Zoya had her eyes on the pizza and when Nazma didn't answer she looked up to her. Nazma was still looking shocked, she had her eyes fixed on..Zoya? No she was looking pass her, Zoya slowly turned around not sure what to expect.
Suddenly Zoya jumped up from her chair looking at the person sitting next to her calmly eating breakfast.
Right then Dilshaad came with the bread basket in her hands. She looked at the two girls and their shocked expressions; kya hua Tum dono ko - she turned around to see what they where looking at continuing - aise lag rahe ho jaisa koi boot.. She dropped the bread basket and stared at her son. After a minute or so she slowly walked up to him and asked while putting her hand on his forehead: tu theek toh hai na Asad? Woh main doctor bulao, bukar toh nai hai baar phir bhi check up karwate hain, tumhara tabyat kuch theek nai lag raha ha
i.
Main bilkul theek ho, aapki bahu jo hai, use yeh brilliant idea aya ki kyoun na hum sab seats hi change karadete hai, aur aapko toh pata hain jab Zoya Begum decide karte hain, kuch karne ke liye toh woh kisi ka bhi baat nai sunta, mere toh bilkul nai, hai na Zoya? He asked his would be wife who was still staring at him to shocked to react on what he just said.
Huh? Was all she managed to reply.
Dilshaad, woh was finally getting over the initial shock, bent down picking up the basket with a huge smile on her lips.
Zoya, Nazma snap out of it, and sit down and eat breakfast before it gets cold - she said and sat down at Asad's usual place while a shocked Nazma picked up the pizza box, put it on Zoya's place and sat down across the table next to Tanveer who now looked disgusted, looked closer one could see that she looked as if she was sick. Her morning sickness was really kicking in and seeing all of this, this early in the morning didn't help and she got up and left the table. Everybody was busy staring at Asad and Zoya that now sat next to him, that they didn't notice her looking sick, nor did they notice her leave.
Just as it was a first for Asad to suddenly do something out of the ordinary, especially with his own free will, it was also a first for Zoya, to have her favorite pizza in front of her and not even remember to eat it.

Good night you all, I'll try to update more tomorrow ❤️
Edited by Illo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
haha nice but uh oh what has Tanveer been doing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Wow.. Brilliant yaar..love this changed asad...superb.. Hope tanveer's truth comes out soon.

Post soon.

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