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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

why nupur is behaving like this? did mayank cheated her?




I thnk its too early to conclude lets just wait and watch hope it will be worth it 😊 🤣
Edited by yashu_arti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ri.mn



please update soon



Ok dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha333

Lovely update...😊


Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

fab !! update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

wow its awesome update bachha

thanks for pm me and sorry for late
i always love u
deepa



Thanks..its ok sis.. 😊
lv u muuaah
Edited by yashu_arti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh i became late kya hota hai yashfeen

nice update... even better precapšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arti_4ever

yeh i became late kya hota hai yashfeen


nice update... even better precapšŸ˜‰



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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8

As soon as the lights turned off Nupur started screaming at the top of her voice.It was pitch dark at the side Mayank Nupur were standing and they could barely see each other.

Just to stop her, Mayank sensing her presence stepped forward and placed his palm on her mouth. Mayank was very close to her there was barely an inch difference between the two. All they could see was each other's eyes which wanted to pour a lot of things out but they also knew that it wasn't the right time to do so cause they rather Nupur needed time to adapt the situation.


Mayank kept staring at her big beautiful eyes which had pain in them. Ofcourse he knew she was in pain but he was unaware of the reason for her pain. He wanted to know he wanted to help her but he knew she needed time. He knew he could spend all his life just staring at those eyes but he also knew she wouldn't let him do so at least not at this point of their lives .

Mayank had hundreds of questions hidden inside it and he knew Nupur too had hundreds of questions hidden behind those beautiful eyes placed on a even more beautiful face of hers which kept faking smiles these days.


Nupur too was drowned in his eyes the eyes she always wanted to keep an eye on her the eyes which spoke a lot but now she knew that all it said was lie and nothing else.

As soon as the word lie came to her mind she realised what they were doing so she just jerked his hand and stepped backwards. Soon the empty room was filled with awkwardness .There was silence the room , all they could hear was each other's breath.

Just to break the awkwardness Mayank spoke


"I think we are stuck here. Is something wrong with the door or we have been locked inside?"


Realising that they are stuck inside Nupur spoke with a shocked expression on her face
"What? First of all there is nothing wrong with the door and how can they just lock us inside? Don't they check out first before closing ?"


"Nupur how can they come and check each and every room? You see there is no key to the locks here they just have a special electronic system for closing the doors it's our responsibility to leave these building before 10:30 and unfortunately or fortunately we are stuck here."He said while grinning because he knew how much he loved spending time with Nupur and now they have an entire night together.


"Couldn't you tell me before ?"
Nupur asked with irritation.


"I would have definitely told you but how could I miss this great chance to spend time with such a beautiful lady."he said while chuckling as he knew what her reaction would be.


"Please for God's sake don't start again."
She said in anger.


"Very bad Nupur its really very bad of you."He said while supressing his laughter.


Nupur just raised her brows indicating that she is clueless of what he is talking about.
"Why did you bring God's name in between Nupur. I had so many things running in my mind how will I do them now?"


Nupur just gave a disgusted look and spoke
"Please Mr.Sharma do you mind being serious at least at such times?"


"Dear I would have loved being serious but come on I can never be serious in such situations. This is a life time opportunity Nupur it's like getting admission in Oxford University. You and me stuck in this office and no one is around it's so cool. Even my money couldn't do this woah." saying all this he started singing


"Hum tum ek kamre me band ho aur chabi kho jaye. Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho?Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho"
he sang while leaning towards Nupur


"Shut up please dare you utter a word now. It would have been better if I was stuck alone over here. Let me think of something because you will never do so."

She said while turning around and after a bit of pause Nupur spoke with some happiness


"Idea! I have the watchman's I should give him a call."
Nupur took her phone out of her pocket but when she about to make the call she found that her battery was low. She felt irritated she wanted to throw her phone out of the building but she couldn't do so because it had some really important stuffs but at this point of time it was useless.

Nupur just turned towards Mayank and asked for his phone but Mayank was behaving as if he was alone in this room. He was looking at everything in the room except Nupur which made Nupur confused.


"What's wrong Mayank? All the time you keep blabbering and now when you should speak you are quiet behaving as if there is no one around."


Nupur asked in confusion hoping to get a reply from the other side but to her surprise Mayank kept quiet at first he stared at her face and then he started moving towards her. He kept decreasing the space between the two Nupur out of nervousness started stepping backwards .Seeing that there was barely any space to cover backwards she pointed her index finger towards him and spoke


"Listen Mayank please st...o...p." she said while fumbling .


But Mayank kept coming closer and finally she found that there was no space at the back and her back touched a cabinet kept near the wall. Out of nervousness she closed her eyes tightly as tightly as she could.




PRECAP;
"I HATE YOU I HATE YOU"

"PLEASE DON'T LIE"

HOPE YOU LIKED IT😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
yupy i am 2nd
yeh wow its amazing update yashu baby
mayank is really cute
i love it keep rock it

love u always baby

love u


deepa


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