FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145

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Hello friends today Im going to start an FF: Anjana. I don't know how long it go. According to likes and comments I will continue this FF. your support is needed. As Im not a writer so its difficult to explain the moments . Im going to write in Hindi and English both. You will find mistakes in my writing but, at least u understands the scene.

INDEX

PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 11
PART 12
PART 13
PART 14
PART 15
PART 16
PART 17
PART 18
PART 19
PART 20
PART 21
PART 22
PART 23
PART 24
Character sketch

Ram Kapoor:- Arrogant, short tempered and very strict. He don't believe in love. His first love is his work.

Priya Sharma:-cute, simple and very well educated. Believes in love. She give utmost importance to his family. Father sudhir, mother shipra and little sister Ayesha.

Rajat:- Priya's childhood friend living in same colony.

Vikram,neha character is same as in BALH.

Part-1

Scene1

Sham ke 6 baje, ram vikram ka intezaar coffee day mein kar raha tha. Vikram traffic mein fasa hua hai. Tabhi uski nazar side wale table mein jata hai. Wahan bhi ek ladki kisi ka intezaar kar rahi thi, Ram man hi man sochtha hai shayad uske dosth bhi traffic mein fasa hua honge. Kuch der baad Ram ,vikram ko phone karta hai.

Ram: Vikram kahan hai tu,kabse intezaar kar raha hoon

Vikram: bas 5 min mein pahuchta hoon

After 5 min, Vikram coffee day par pahuchta hai, at the same time uss ladki ke dosth bhi aa jate hai.

.Kuch der baad ladki apne dosth ke saat chali jati hai. Ram ye sab notice kar raha tha.Vikram bhi Ram ko notice karta hai.

Vikram: kya hua Ram,jabse aaya hoon tabse mein dekh raha hoon tu kisi aur duniya mein hai

Ram: kya matlab?

Vikram: baar baar uss ladki ko dekhe ja raha hai, kuch kuch ho raha hai kya

Ram: tu pagal ho gaya hai kya, mere tarah woh bhi intezaar kar rahi thi,isliye mera dhyan gaya

Vikram: Chalo job hi ho, tu kisi ki taraf dekha toh sahi

Ram is not interested to tell anything.

Kuch der baad Ram aur Vikram bhi chale jate hai.

Scene 2

It was 6 o'clock in the morning. Waise toh Ram itne jaldi uttha nahi hai, par aaj morning walk par park mein aaya hai. Kuch log waha yoga kar rahe the, Ram ki nazar uss yoga karne walo pe jata hai, tabhi uski nazar uss ladki par jati hai jise usne kal coffee shop par dekha tha. Iss baar woh apne papa ke saat aayi thi.Ram thodi der tak usse dekthe rehta hai aur wahan se chala jata hai.

Ram office mein Vikram ka intezaar karta hai aur jaise hi woh aata hai usse subha ki sari baat batata hai.

Vikram ,Ram ka excitement dekhta hai, aur sochta hai jarur koi baat hai, lekin who chup rehta hai.

Scene 3

It was raining in this evening. Ram office se kaam karke wapas lout raha tha, thabhi apni gadi woh park ke pass kadi karta hai, woh kidki se bahar dekta hai, barish ki wajah se usse thik se dikayi nahi deta hai, phir bhi who dekhne ki koshish karta hai, ek ladki barish mein jhum rahi thi aur saat mein bachhe bhi the unke saat woh khel rahi thi, woh bahut sundar lag rahi thi,uske bhege bhege hott uske gile baal, sabi uski sundartha ke char chand laga rahe the.Ram usse dekhte rehta hai with mouth wide open. Ye wahi ladki thi jise usne pehle coffee shop mein aur baad mein subah park mein dekha tha. Ram thodi der baad wahan se chala jata hai

Ram apne room mein baith ye sochta hai, mein ess ladki ko baar baar kyon dekhta hoon, kyon woh baar baar mere samne aati hai.Ram jyada sochta nahi aur sone chale jata hai.

Scene 4

Ram roz ki tarah apne office mein jar aha tha. Uski gadi signal par kadi ti, tabhi side mein ek bike wala aata hai,Ram usse dektha hai, tab uss bike mein woh ladki ko dekhta hai,woh bike wale ke piche baiti hui thi. Ram uss ladke ko nahi dekh pata becoz he is wearing helmet. Signal green hota hai aur dono apne raste chale jate hai.

Well, kya lagta hai kya Ram uss ladki se milenga. Who ladki kyon hai. Will be updated in next part.

Please let me know wheather u want me to continue. Ur comments and suggestion help me to write.

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Nice update...continue soon...bhai wo ladki priya ji hai to un dono ko to milna hi hai...right 😉
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nyc start..intresting pls cntinue soon
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Originally posted by: Alya1991

Nice update...continue soon...bhai wo ladki priya ji hai to un dono ko to milna hi hai...right 😉

wait,going to reveal in next part
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Part-2

Scene 5

Ram office pahuchta hai. Aaj company mein company secretariat ki post ke liye interview hai. Vikram interview conduct karnewala hai. Interview timing 9 o'clock.

Ram: vikram sab tayyari ho gayi na

Vikram: ha mere bayi tu ja apne cabin mein, mein bhi abhi thodi der mein interview shuru karna wala hoon.

Ram apne cabin mein jata hai, aur vikram interview shuru karta hai

There were around 15 candidates for the post

Ram came out from cabin for some work, suddenly he saw the same girl wearing blue salwar standing there waiting for her turn. Ram cabin mein jata hai, aur vikram ko call karta hai, aur kehta hai

Ram: Vikram woh ladki yahi hai

Vikram : are kaun si ladki

Ram: are wahi jise meine kahi baar alag alag jagah par dekha hai. Are wahi jo uss din coffee day mein thi

Vikram: ohhh achha woh ladki,hmm, kya kehta hai rak loo

Ram: are pehle interview toh le, pata toh chale ki woh capable hai ki nahi

Vikram: achha agar capable nahi nikli toh

Ram kept silent, Vikram understands his intentions

Vikram:- tu kahe toh usse shadi ki baat bhi kar loo

Ram: kya hai yaar,khaha ki baat khaha le jata hai, and cuts the call

Vikram call receptionalist, and told her to send the girl in blue salwar in

Recep: madam apko ander bula rahe hai

Ladki :- may I come in sir

Vikram: yes come in. thinking' come in mrs.kapoor, waise Ram ki choice bahut achhi hai, she is looking gorgeous.

Vikram go through her file and said so u r Miss Priya Sharma, and asked her many professional questions. Suddenly Vikram change his root and starts asking her some personal questions.

Vikram: do you have any boyfriend?

Priya : what? I mean no'

Vikram: so r u engaged?

Priya: No' little confused

Vikram: sorry, little after'.u wait outside and thinks Ram ke liye kya kya karna padta hai, kya soch rahi hogi priya

Priya: yes sir, and goes out and thinks Vikram bahut ajeeb hai, kaise kaise sawal karte hai.

Vikram calls Ram..kya kehta hai rak loo, waise woh capable hai, but experience ki thodi kami hai

Ek aur baat hai, na hi woh married hai aur na hi uska koi boyfriend hai

Ram: maine tumse ye batane ko nahi kaha, muje koi farak nahi padta ki uska koi boyfriend hai ya nahi

Aur rahi baat job ki toh usse rak lo, waise bhi hamare company mein young new talent ki jarurat hai

Vikram: sahi sahi bol na, job Priya ko de de. Waise jo sawal meine usse kiya hai pata nahi kya soch rahi hongi mere bare mein

Ram smiles and kept silent

Vikram calls priya inside the cabin and tells Mubarak ho you can join tomorrow and shake hands

Priya very excitedly thank you sir, and goes out

Scene 6

It's a new day for Priya . she is very excited. She woke up very early morning and get ready for office. She takes blessing from her parents and went for office. As usual Rajat gave lift. Aaj Ram bhi bahut kush hai, waise toh Ram ko pyar nahi hua hai phir bhi ek bechaini jaroor hai. Woh bhi aaj jaldi office ke liye nikalta hai. Rajat Priya ko office drop karke chala jata hai. Receptionalist lilly Priya ko wait karne ko kehti hai. Thodi der mein Ram bhi aa jata hai aur jaise office mein entry leta hai Priya ko dekhta hai.

Priya : good morning sir

Ram smiles and say good morning. Ram Priya ko cabin mein bulata hai aur kaam ke bare mein samjhata hai. Ram called receptionalist aur kehta hai inhe inka place dikha do. Priya ka place bilkul Ram ke cabin ke saamne tha, jahan se woh seedhe Priya ko dekh sakta tha. Waise toh Ram hamesha apna glass ke parde bandh rakta tha, par aaj usne curtain ko khola hua tha.

Tabhi wahan Vikram aa jata hai, good morning Ram, kaisi hai

Ram:- kon kaisi hai

Vikram:- priyaaa ; Ram:- are yaar tu subah subah shuru mat kar dena,tu abhi ja muje bahut kaam hai.

During recess

Everybody talking to Priya and giving some idea about their boss

1st colleague:- Ram sir bahut strict hai, jab bhi who kisi ko cabin mein bulate hai, hame pata chalta hai abb toh iski band baj gayi.

2nd colleague:- ha thoda strict hai,par kya lagte hai yaar'kya hot lagte hai. golu molu se hai, aur jab who haste hai'.hayeee

1st one:- aur pata hai Priya woh unmarried hai Pata nahi kaun hogi woh khushnasib jo hamare sir ke zindagi mein aayegi.

2nd one to 1st one:- tu try kar na, kya pata tera jadu chal jaye.

1st one:- Sir toh kabhi mud ke bhi nahi dekte,waise badde badde log hai hamari taraf dyan bhi nahi gaya honga. Kya pata sir ki koi girlfriend bhi ho.

Everybody laugh ,Priya listening all this. She smiles and kept silent.

Other colleague:- are Vikram sir bhi toh bahut handsome hai yaar,bahut cool aur kabhi kisi par chillate nahi hai. Priya:- vikram sir'. thinking yesterday's incidence.

Ram ka dyan aaj kam par nahi tha,na chahte hue bhi woh baar baar Priya ko dekhte rehta hai. Today Ram is also feeling good and happy

Day ended.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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