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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

after mariage there will be diaagreements on some issues.
I will be on may last week only.


😭.whate ever plz dont separate them plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER


😭.whate ever plz dont separate them plzzz

do not worry u will not find separation in any of my ff. its just a simple issues which normally face by married people. Raya case in my FF is different. Its not normal. It has proper ending also once they solved there issues.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u know ur story is very interesting 👏 even u have also penned down so well👏 i know i have never commented before but believe me i do follow this beautiful ff it's just that due to technical or some times time problem i couldn't comment plz do continue soon egarly waiting for desperate ram 😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting
update soon
want more raya moments
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This part I am dedicated to sangs and vironika.
In this u will not find desperate Ram😉😛 but many mistakes😆
Apart from joking now, u will know in this part what Sid is upto
PART 21
Scene-60

Sid met Priya

Sharma house

Priya's parents came back from their relatives place. They come to know about Rajat.

They are shocked and pacifying Priya. Sudhir called Ram and thank him for saving Priya from Rajat.

Priya office ke liye taiyaar hone jati hai. There is a knock on the door. Sudhir opens the door. It was Sid. Sudhir welcomes Sid and made him to sit.

Priya:- hii Sid. Aap yahan achanak

Sid:- haan '.mein office ke liye jaa raha tha toh pata chala ki sudhirji wapas aa gaye hai toh socha mill loo.

Sudhir:- aap dono baithkar baat karo mein abhi aata hoon

Priya:- sid mein tumhare liye chai lekar aati hoon

Sid:- nahi'.aap bhi office ke liye nikal rahi hai toh mein aapko chod deta hoon.

Both leave

Priya:- Sid kya tum meri madad kar sakte ho????

Sid:- bilkul bhabhi yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai. baathyiye mein aapki kya madad kar sakta hoon

Priya:- Ram ko iss baare mat batana ki tumne meri madad ki

Sid:- ok bhabhi

Priya:- woh kya hai na mein soch rahi thi ki Ram ko ek gift du???? Aur muje samaj nahi aa raha ki unhe kya du. Unke paas toh sab kuch toh hai.

Sid:- toh aap mujse kya madad chahti hai

Priya:- arre muje batao na mein kya gift karu????

After a while,

Sid:- bhabhi ek wrist watch kaise rahega????

Priya:- watch????

Sid:- haan watch. Aapne kabhi dhyan diya hai bhaiyya ek poorani si watch pehante hai

Priya:- haan dhyan toh diya hai''shayad tum teek keh rahe hoo. Accha hum pehle gift kareedhte hai uske baad hum office chalte hai

Sid:- why not'sure chalo'.

Here Priya and Sid selecting a watch, on the other hand Ram is continuously calling in Priya's mobile but, she is not picking up the call.

Sid:- waise bhabhi mauka ka hai ki aap bhaiyya ko gift kar rahe ho

Priya:- kuch nahi sid bas muje eisa laga ki unhe kuch dena chahiye

At last, Priya selected a watch.

Priya:- thank u Sid agar tumne madad nahi ki hoti toh mein kya karti

Sid:- kya bhabhi aapke liye toh mein kuch bhi karne ke liye taiyyar hoon.

Here Ram becomes impatience, he called sudhir. Sudhir told him that Priya is left with Sid.

Ram thinks "Priya Sid ke saat. Lekin Sid Priya se milne kyun gaya.

agar sid ke saat priya nikal chuki hai toh abhi tak aayi kyun nahi. Aur Priya bhi na mobile rakti kyun hai agar utha nahi sakti. Aane do phir batata hu use.

Ram has no other option but to wait.

Its 11'o clock,

Sid and Priya reached office. Priya checked her mobile and saw more than 10 miss call from Ram.

Priya thinks " aaj Ram mobile na uthane par khaa hi jaayenge. Koi baat nahi jab gift present karungi toh unka mood bhi teek ho jaayega.

Sid thinks" sorry bhabhi meine aapse jhoot kaha baiyya apne uss purine se watch ko lekar kaafi possessive hai. Dadaji ne aakri waqt baiyya ko woh gadhi soupi thi.

Muje abhi bhi yaad hai jab meine Ram baiyya se gadhi badalne ko kaha toh kitna gussa hue the. Priya abb tumhari baari baiyya ka gussa dekhne ka. Uss waqt pata chalega kitna galat decision hai baiyya se shaadi karne ka. Uss waqt koi muje nahi rok sakta tumhe mere paas aane ko.

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Priya gifted Ram

Priya knows that he will be angry. She straightly goes into Ram's cabin. Ram is upset. He shouts at Priya.

Ram: kahan gayi thi tum. Agar phone utha nahi sakti toh rakti hyun ho????

Aur Sid ke saat kahan thi.

Priya:- achhaaa' toh aapko yeh problem hai ki mein Sid ke saat thi haann..Jealous????

Ram:- mein koi jealous nahi feel kar raha. Sid mera bhai hai moreover mein apne aap se bhi jyada tumpar vishwas karta hoon. Achha woh chodo aur yeh batao phone kyun nahi attend kiya aur kahan thi itni der.

Priya:- sorry'.. mein phone gaadi mein bhul gayi thi.

Ram:- par gayi kahan thi

Priya take out the gift and gave it to Ram. Sid is standing outside the cabin and listens in their talk.

Ram:- yeh kya hai???

Priya:- gift hai. kholo tho sahi

Ram:- achha baba kholta hoon par aaj gift dene ki kya baat hui

Priya:- arre kya mein apne pati ko gift bhi nahi de sakti.

Ram becomes excited and opens the gift. It was a very beautiful and expensive wrist watch. His smile vanished and looked at Priya.

Priya is eagerly waiting for his reaction.

Priya:- kya hua??? Gift pasand nahi aaya???

Ram kept silent.

Priya again asked " bolo na Ram gift pasand nahi aaya. Aap upar se neeche tak hamesha ekdum tiptop rehte ho, bas yeh watch aappar thodi jazti nahi hai toh laga aapke liye naya watch le lu. Pasand aayi???

Ram looks at her innocence and smiles. Sid who is standing outside also smile and thinks his plans is working.

Ram:- meri biwi ne pehli baar muje kuch diya hai toh pasand kyun nahi aayegi. Muje bahut achha laga Priya.

Priya:- achha toh phir pehenke dhikao.

Ram wears the watch. It looks perfect on him.

Priya:- achhi lagi. Bolo na Ram achhi lagi.

Ram nods his head in positive and asked "Priya kya Sid ne tumhe watch lene ka suggestion diya.

Priya:- nahiii'.haan par meine Sid ko aapse iss baare mein batane ko mana kiya. Sid mere saat hi tha jab mein aapke liye watch select kar rahi thi.

Sid who is listening outside everything escapes.

Ram:- pata hai Priya (showing his old watch) yeh watch muje mere dadaji ne diya tha jab meine pehli baar kapoor industries ko join kiya. Aakri waqt mein bhi dadaji ne mujse samay ki keemat kosamjhate rahe. Aaj kapoor industries jiss mukam par hai uski wajah sirf mere dadaji hai. muje kabhi bhi isse badalne ka mann nahi kiya.

Priya feel bad and said " sorry Ram muje iss baare mein kuch bhi pata nahi tha. ek kaam kijiye aap mere di hui gadi ko uthar dijiye aur apne paas hi rakiye. Aap apni dadaji ki di hui gadi hi pehanna.

Ram feels proud for priya and said" nahi Priya aaj ke baad mein tumhari di hui gadi hi pehnunga aur iss gadi ko office mein apne table par rakunga iss tarah.

Priya becomes emotional and hugs Ram.

Ram thinks" mein jaanta hoon Sid tum yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho. Par kitni bhi koshish kar lo tumhe mein kabhi bhi jeetne nahi doonga.

Ram:- achha yeh batao Sid kyun aaya tha tumse milne

Priya:- nahi ram woh mujse nahi maa papa se milne aaya tha. muje toh lagta hai ki Sid maa papa ke bahane Ayesha se milna aaya tha.

Ram:- matlab???

Priya:- matlab yeh ki muje lagta hai Sid aur Ayesha ke beech mein zaroor kuch na kuch hai. aap sid se poochye aur mein Ayesha se poochti hoon.

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Scene 61

Preparation for marriage

Samay ke saat saat shaadi ke din bhi kareeb aa jata hai. Ram and Priya did lots of shopping together and selected dresses for each other. Ram filled his cupboard with different varieties of dresses for Priya.

Here Kapoor family and sharma family are busy in preparation for marriage. They are leaving no inch to make it beautiful.

Both the families invited all the respectives relatives and family friends. Details of marriage is shown in all news channel.

Samay ke saat Ram aur priya ke mehndi aur sangeet ki rasm bhi poori hoti hai. Both ram and priya were happy. Both ram and Priya were managed to meet every day.

Haldi rasm is in the morning shaadi muhurth is in the evening 7'oclock. Afterwards room is booked in a five star hotel. Timing for gruhpravesh is around 10'oclock in the next morning.

Now, there were strict instructions from both the families that they will not meet before marriage.

But, our Ram is Ram. He wanted to meet Priya before Haldi rasam and also wanted to put haldi first. He knows very well it's not easy. He takes the help of Vikram and Neha.

Ram called Priya and told her not to allow anybody to put haldi on her face.

Priya:- Ram yeh possible nahi hai. maa se kya kahungi aur aap mujse kaise mil sakte hai ghar poora mehmaano se bara hua hai.

Ram:- tum kaise sab manage karongi muje pata nahi lekin tumhe sabse pehle haldi toh mein hi lagaunga.

Shipra told priya to sit. She is wearing yellow color sari with sleeveless blouse. Ram ke ghar se haldi bhi aa chuki hai abb bas haldi rasm shuru hone ke deri hai. Neha is sitting beside her.

Here Ram and Vikram planned something and drove to Priya's place. They reached Priya's place.

Vikram:- Ram apna chehra chupa aur terrace mein jaakar Priya ka wait kar. Mein neha ko phone karke kisi bhi tarah Priya ko terrace mein lekar aane ko kehta hoon.

Vikram called Neha and told her to bring Priya to terrace, Ram is waiting there.

Priya gets up from there when Shipra stops her.

Shipra:- kahan jaa rahi hai beta abhi kuch hi der mein haldi shuru hone wali hai.

Priya:- (showing her little finger) maa mein abhi aayi

Shipra:- lekin beta sun toh''.

Here, Neha without noticing anybody takes haldi and goes from there with Priya to the terrace. Ram saw priya from top to bottom she is looking beautiful and glowing in this attire.

Ram aage badta hai aur Priya ko gale laga leta hai.

Neha:- huggy waggy baad mein kar lena aaj raat ko, pehle woh karo jo karne aaye ho

Both broke the hug.

Ram:- Neha kya meri ek madad aur kar sakti ho. Apna mooh band rakogi aur bahar wait karogi aur dekhogi ki koi aa raha hai ya nahi.

Neha:- haan' ok ok. Yeh lo haldi aur jaldi karna. Pyar wyar ki baatein aaj raat ko kar lena shaadi ke baad.

Priya blushed.

Ram:- thank u priya mein jaanta hoon kitna mushkil hai rishtedaaro ke beech se mujse milne aane ko. Par kya hai na meine socha hi tha ki shaadi se pehle tumse mill lu. Aur mein tumhe sabse pehle apne haato se haldi lagau.

Ram dips his finger in haldi bowl and applies on her face. Priya's eyes are filled with tears.

Ram:- abb bas kuch hi gante baaki hai uske baad tum hamesha ke liye sirf meri ho sirf aur sirf meri. I can't wait.

Priya:- I love you Ram. I love you very very much.

Neha:- Priyaaa dekho shipra ji aa rahi hai. Ram yahan se jao..

Both ram and priya panicked.

Neha started laughing and said" daro mat mein Mazak kar rahi thi.

Ram gets angry on her ;neha tumhe toh mein nahi chodne wala.

Priya:- Ram aap abhi jaayiye.

Ram:- ok bye milte hai'..

Priya back to her house

Shipra:- priya kahan gayi thi kab se tera intezaar kar rahe hai. aur yeh haldi kisne lagayi.

Priya:- maa' yeh na sab neha ki wajah se hua.

Neha:- meri wajah se''. haan aunty woh kya hai na galti se mera haat haldi mein chala gaya aur mera haat lagkar Priya ke gaalo par toh na yeh eisa hua.

Shipra:- achha chalo jaldi haldi shuru karte hai.

Dono gharo mein haldi ki rasm poori hoti hai

Precap:- dena mushkil hai phir bhi deti hoon

Raya marriage, first night and gruhpravesh.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally gotta reply first after a long time..

update is fab but wha t this sid is upto.. ram is so desperate .. love our foursome ,,

write soon .. plzzz
Edited by luvbalh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res wow beautiful upfate...
Lil doubt...why sid is after priya...n ram nows this..
Confusing...
Looking forward to raya wedding...
Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww
sandy dear thank u for dedicating it to me

thanks a lot dear

coming to updt it was just mind blowing

chupke chupke romance bohut achaa hain terrace pey

ram is so cute he is so desperate that he cannot leave without priya for sec also
such a sweet heart he is

and priya is so innocent but ram is very smart he handled situation so cooly

aur sid is 😡 😡
Edited by sangeethagupta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sid ka plan how he do itChi Chi Chi but ram is smart he understand sid planvikha sweetheart

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