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Posted: 12 years ago

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plz plz today evening pretty plz.but if u r free.then ok .plz .

I have to do some editing work. taken some issues, may b u don't like
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Fabulous update dear ...continue soon .. waiting
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thanks for all comments.
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

thanks for all comments.

heres comes the next update...




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PART 24

Scene- 70

Priya not happy

Priya is shocked and numbed. She can't understand why Ram given her contraceptive pills. A minute before she is very happy, now, she is confused with a sudden change in his behavior.

She sits on the bed putting her both hands on her head. She keeps aside the pill on the bed side table. Her mind is juggling, she wanted to know why Ram given her a pill and what's going on in his mind.

She took bath, wore the bath robe and looking for the dress to change. She opens the cupboard and saw 2-3 sets of dresses are hanging. She has habit of wearing all types of dresses. She selects one dress, its long blue color skirt and white cotton shirt.

She is disturbed. She even skips the breakfast. She calls in her home and told them that she is fine and not to worry. She is passing her time to read some magazine, and then watching TV; but, she is not concentrating on anything. She takes some rest.

Around 3'oclock,

Ram came back from meeting. On the reception counter he comes to know that Priya has not ordered anything from the morning, even she send back the cleaner. Ram is confused and worried about Priya. He told them to bring two cups of coffee and some snack to his room.

When he entered he saw dull face of Priya. He also saw she has not taken medicine.

Ram:- kya hua Priya???? Tum itni udas kyun lag rahi ho??? Aur tumne abhi tak dawai(showing his finger towards medicine) kyun nahi khayi??? Aur muje reception se pata bhi chala ki tumne abhi tak kuch khaya bhi nahi hai. kya hua tum teek toh ho kuch hua hai kya.

Priya keeps silent and looking down scratching on the bed with her fingertips.

Ram:- Priya chup kyun ho?? Kuch toh bolo kya hua hai. jab tak tum bologi nahi muje pata kaise chalega.

Tabhi waiter aata hai aur coffee aur snack table par rakkar chala jata hai.

Ram:- achha teek hai pehle kuch khaa lo hum baad mein baat karte hai.

Ram gets up and takes 2-3 steps towards the table when Priya asked " yeh contraceptive kis liye???

Ram stops and turned back. Now, He knows why Priya is silent.

He goes near sit beside her, takes her hand.

Ram:-(sounded very calmly) Priya'..dekho mein yeh chahta hoon ki koi bhi family shuru karne se pehle hum uske liye taiyaar ho jaye, aur abhi mein family shuru karne ke liye taiyaar nahi hoon. Mein abhi apni marriage life poori tarah se jeena chahta hoon. Sirf tum aur mein.

Dekho hamara rishta abhi naya hai,do din pehle hamari shaadi hui hai,mein isse poori tarah se jeena chahta hoon. Aur waise bhi agle do saal ke liye mere kaafi commitments hai,jiski wajah se mein busy rahunga,iss beech mein yeh resposnsibility nahi le sakta. Mein tumhare saat poori khushiyaan baatna chahta hoon.

I want to enjoy this fully.

Priya:- (she is not convinced) Ram'.

Ram:- (pressing her hand) Priyaa'mein khaha mana kar raha hoon. Arre mein toh tumhare saat zindagi ke har pal ko jeena chahta hoon,zindagi ki har sidi tumhare saat badana chahta hoon. Hamare bhi bachhe honge, arre 1 kyun,hamare toh 3-3 bachhe honge. Hum unhe ek saat bada karenge,unhe ek saat school leke jaayenge, padayenge, likkayenge, unki shaadi karayenge sab kuch hum ek saat karenge.

Socho jab hamare bachhe bade honge toh tum kaise dekhongi.

Both started laughing.

He put his hand around her shoulder. She put her head in his chest. He hugs her very tightly.

Priya:- I love you Ram. I love you.

Ram:- I love you too jaan.

He kisses her forehead.

Ram:- abb chalo coffee peete hai, nahi toh thandi ho jaayengi. Uske baad hum goomne chalte hai. arre itni pyari jagah aaye hai, aur hum iss hotel ke kamre mein baite hai.

Waise bhi jiss kaam ke liye aaya tha who poora ho gaya hai toh kal mein free hoon, hum kal subah Goa dekhne niklenge. Pehle beech jaayenge, phir thodi shopping karenge, ship mein jaayenge, sites ghoomenge, aur raat ko dinner. Kaisa laga plan

Priya smiles,

Both take coffee and snack.

Ram:- inn sab ki wajah se tumhe batana hi bhool gaya ki tum aaj bahut pyari lag rahi ho. Bilkul college student lag rahi ho.

Arre dress se yaad aaya tumhare liye jo dress mein select kiya hai kaise hai.

Priya:- hmm. Meine dekha ek shots hai, aur dusri gown aur woh bhi sleeveless.

Ram:- haan' shots tum kal beech mein pehnongi aur gown kal party mein

Priya:- party???

Ram:- haan woh jo mere clients hai unhe jab pata chala ki tum bhi aayi ho toh unhone hamare liye kal party ke intezaam kiya hai.

Both get ready. Before leaving, Ram given her pills. She takes, but somewhere in heart she is not accepting this. But, she said nothing.

They spend quality time together.

Scene 71

A day out with Priya

Ram and priya are happy together. First they went to beach. They play and go deep into the beach. When the waves hit they hold their hand together. Then they go in water bike then parachute and in this way they enjoy together in beach. They take their lunch from beach side restaurant. Then they eat gola from the road side.

After that they change and in the evening they enjoy their time in ship. So many young boys and girls are dancing; Raya also dance and they are very happy.

Then they go for shopping, they purchased Indian culture antics pieces made from shells. They purchased dresses for themselves also all members of both the family.

They came back in hotel, take some rest then getting ready for the party.

Ram:- Priyaa.. jaldi karo. Aur kitna time logi.

Actually she is feeling uneasy wearing sleeveless gown. Normally she wore but, first time she is getting ready for Ram.

Ram:- Priya kya hua.agar tum nahi nikli toh mein andhar aa jaaunga

Priya(fearing):- nahii'.please app andhar matt aayiye
Ram:- Priyaa'. Agar tum yeh kehna chahti ho ki tumhe sharam aa rahi hai toh mein yaad dila du ki hamari shaadi bhi ho chuki hai aur tum mere saamne''

Tabhi Ram darwaza kolne ka awaz suntan hai, Ram mudta hai.

His eyes gaze her from top to bottom with a mouth wide open. Priya is looking extremely beautiful and sexy in the gown. Even without any jewellery she is looking gorgeous. Priya is nervous and looking down. He goes near her slowly lifts her chin with his fingertips, straightly looked into her eyes. Takes her hand and taken her near the mirror, closes her eyes.

He put his hand in his pocket and taken out the diamond earring and necklace and wore it. When he touches her ear she is feeling his touch. Ram told her not to open her eyes without telling.

Ram:- Abb apni aakhen kholo.

Priya opened her eyes. She touched the necklace and very happy. She had tears in her eyes.

Ram:- Pasand aaya????

Priya turns and said" bahut" and hugs him.

After some time Priya brokes the hug

Priya:- chalna nahi hai''der nahi ho rahi

Both reached the place. It's an open air restaurant on the beach side. Cool breeze and sound of waves makes the place even more beautiful. Place is fully decorated with candles. Light music is playing.

Priya likes the place but, she is surprised to see that restaurant is empty.

Priya:- Ram yahan toh'.

Ram puts his finger on her mouth.

Ram:- aaj ki sham sirf tum aur mein. Yeh khoobsurti sirf aur sirf mere liye hai. meine yeh poora restaurant book kiya hai. kya tum mere saat yeh sham bitana chaaongi and forward his hand.

Priya:- yes'..and given her hand to hi.

They spend beautiful time together.

Scene 71

Priya- Sid faceoff

After returning from Goa, everybody busy in their daily work. Priya also joined the office. She is using the same place for work. Ram as usual watches her through his cabin. He told her many time to shift in to new cabin but, she denied. Both works together, take their lunch together in the office and as usual both feed each other. He always clinched time to romance with Priya in office.

Both are travelling in the new world, world of love. Usually they made love every night, more clearly Ram needs every day.

Priya is happy with Ram. She has everything in her life, but she is missing something. She wanted to start a family, but, she knows that Ram is not ready and knows his anger. she knows that once he decided something he will not change his decision.

The only problem they have is interference of Sid which is increasing Day by Day. Now, Priya also feeling uncomfortable, he enters in their bedroom without permission, tries to speak with her on unnecessary subjects, and tries to come closer; Priya also noticing all this. Initially she ignored but, she soon realizes there is something wrong in him.

Priya nahi chahti thi ki Ram ko iss baare mein kuch bhi pata chale. So, she decided to talk with him personally.

On the other side Ram also notice change in the behavior of Sid and decided to confront him personally without letting Priya to know about all this.

One day Priya is alone at home. She has taken leave from office. KK is also not there at home. Ram is in office. The only person who is at home at that time is Sid.

It's in the afternoon

Both Priya and sid have their lunch and retire to their room. Priya is taking rest when Sid knocks the door. Priya very well know its Sid. She opens the door.

Sid enters. Priya is standing there folding her hands.

Sid:- bhabhi''agar aap free ho tho kya hum thodi der baat kar sakte hai

Priya(keep looking at him):- Kyun aaye ho sid?????kya chahte ho???

Sid:- kya hua bhabhi aap eisi kyun baat kar rahe hai

Priya:- tumhe kya lagta hai Sid ki mein kuch nahi samajti. Mein sab kuch samajti hoon ki tum kya karna chahte ho

Sid:- (little scared feeling of getting caught) bhabhi aap galat samaj rahi hai; mein toh bass aapse thodi der baat karna chahta tha. agar aapko mera aana pasand nahi toh I am sorry Bhabhi mein chala jata hoon.

Priya:- bhabhi kehte ho na muje. Tumhare bhai ki biwi hoon aur tum???? Kya chal raha hai tumhare dimag mein '''''..please'.. tumhe kya lagta hai ki mein tumhari saari battimizi chup chap seh loongi.

Tumhari inn harkato ke baare mein meine abhi tak tumhare bhaiyya se kuch nahi bataya, aur muje majboor matt karo eisa kuch bhi karne se.

Sid:- (changing his tone) toh aapko kya lagta hai ki aap kuch bhi kahegi toh bhaiyya aapki baat par vishwas kar lenge. Abb jab aapko saari baat pata chal hi gaya toh mein confess kar hi leta hoon;''..haan muje tum pasand ho aur mein tumhe kisi aur ke saat nahi dekh sakta chahe woh mera bhai kyun na ho. Aur mein yeh bhi janta hoon ki tum bhi mujse uthna hi pyar karti ho jitna ki mein.

Priya shouts and slaps hardly on his face:- get out of my room''''.. aur iss ke baad kabhi mere paas aane ki ya mujse baat karne ki himmat nahi karna.

Sid:- uss Ram mein eisa kya hai jo mujme nahi. He doesn't suits u. mein konsa Ram ko chodne ki baat keh raha hoon. Uske alawa bhi toh hum''''

Priya:- shut up and please get out. Please warna mein kuch kar dungi. Just leave.

Tabhi KK ki aane ki awaz aati hai. Without saying anything Sid goes from there.

In the evening,

Ram came back from office. He found Priya is disturbed. He asked but, she said nothing. He asked KK but, she said that she also don't know, may be Sid knows as he is there at that time.

Ram understands Priya is upset because of Sid.

In the dinner table

Priya is silent. Sid is looking at her with a devil smile in his face. Ram notice this,but keep silent.

In the room,

Ram is asked her many times, but she said nothing.

Ram:- Priyaa' jab tum itni chup rehti ho naa, tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi lagti ho. Priya please apna mood matt kharab karo,aur mera bhi. Mein tumhare saat ek bhi din miss nahi karna chahta.

Both are sitting on the Bed. She wipes her tear. Ram kisses on her hand and allow her to sleep. They made love, even she is not supporting but, she does not want Ram to get angry. After making love she covers herself with duvet, and remembers a talk with Sid. She had tears.

Precap:- Priya-Sudhir talk, Priya talk to Ram about Sid, Ram- Sid talk, Sid-Ayesha marriage, Priya is pregnant.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeyee
me first

awesome updt sandy 😳
loving raya relationship alot 😉
but is sid ki toh 😡
gadha kaika babhi bolke
ema ke barey main sonchta hain😡
sandy lekhin ram ki problem kya hain
bachey uhu uhu
aur 6 months leap
priya preggy hehee😳
maast mazaa ayega
paar isa kuch maat karo ki
raya break up ho jayee 😭


Edited by sangeethagupta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sangeethagupta

yeyee
me first

awesome updt sandy 😳
loving raya relationship alot 😉
but is sid ki toh 😡😡😡😡
gadha kaika babhi bolke
ema ke barey main sonchta hain😡😡😡😡
sandy lekhin ram ki problem kya hain
bachey uhu uhu
aur 6 months leap
priya preggy hehee😳
maast mazaa ayega
paar isa kuch karo ki
raya break up ho jayee 😭😭😭😭


Ram ko koi problem nahi hai
he don't want child right now.
what will be his reaction when he comes to know that Priya is preggy
u will see in next update
thanks for comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting update Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn




uhu
haapy updt dena
cant see
priya sad when
ram says that he dont want kid now

Ram ko koi problem nahi hai
he don't want child right now.
what will be his reaction when he comes to know that Priya is preggy
u will see in next update
thanks for comments🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
sach batao next update happy update nahi honga.😕

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