FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145 - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ff love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
update the next part
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thanks for all comments
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My update is short due to some personal problems

Part- 18
Scene 54

Rajat knocked the door. Without thinking second Priya opened the door. She shocked to see Rajat in front of her. She said' TUM' and try to close the door. But, Rajat thrust the door very hard. Priya fall back. Rajat and his two friends entered. She gets scared. His friends closed the door

 

Rajat:- kya laga Ram hai darwaze par. Ram nahi aane wala, uske jaane ke baad hi mein yahan aaya.

Priya:- Rajat tum yeh kya kar rahe ho. Yahan se jao warna mein shor machaaungi.

Rajat:- shor!!! Machao shor priya. Yahan koi tumhara awaaz nahi sunne wala.

Priya:- please Rajat. Meri shaadi hone wali hai. tum jao yahan se

 

Rajat:- shaadi!!! Jab sabke saamne tumne meri insult ki, engagement todkar jab tumne mera tamasha banaya, Uss din meine soch liya tha ki mein tumhari shaadi nahi hone dunga.

 

Priya(trembling):- Rajat'.dekho mera tumko insult karne ka koi plan nahi tha. meine yeh jaanbhujkar nahi kiya. Par haalat mere bas mein nahi tha. koi meri baat sunne ko taiyyar nahi tha. mere paas aur koi option nahi tha. mein tumse pyar nahi karti thi Rajat.

 

Rajat started laughing.

Rajat:-(still laughing) pyar!!! Tumhe kya lagta hai priya ki mein tumse pyar karta hoon. meine bhi kabhi tumse pyar nahi kiya.

abb tumse kya chupana. Waise toh tum mere type ki nahi ho phir bhi kuch toh hai tumme jo hamesha se muje pagal kar deta hai. shaadi karke ek toh jo muje chahiya woh tumse mil bhi jata aur dusra tum ghar par ek door mat ki tarah padi bhi rehti. Meri aur mere maa baap ki seva karke.

Abb shaadi toh mein tumse nahi karne wala,lekin jo muje tumse chahiye woh mein aaj tumse lekar zaroor rahunga.

 

Itna kehkar Rajat priya ke paas badta hai.

Priya(begging) please Rajat '.please muje maaf kar do.

Priya is moving backward. Rajat came very near to Priya

 

Priya pushes him and runs to her room. Rajat also runs and hold Priya. He crushes her hand very badly.

 

Priya:- haat chodo Rajat,warna mein shor machhaungi.

Rajat:- bahut maza aa raha hai Priya tumhe mere saamne gidgidathe hue dekhte.

Priya:- agar Ram ko pata chal gaya tho woh tumhe nahi chodne wala hai.

Rajat:- mein bhi toh yahi chahta hoon ki usse pata chale. Uuse meine pehle bhi kaha tha ki mein tumhe chodne ko taiyyar hoon,bas ek baar tumhare saat''

Priya:- tum bahut gire hue insaan ho Rajat. Meine bilkul sahi kiya ki meine tumse engagement todi, aura abb iss baat ka muje koi guilt bhi nahi hai.

 

Rajat is fuming in anger. He pushes her and pin her to the wall and try to kiss. Priya close her eyes and moves her head.

Priya apne haato ko peeche le jati hai.

 Her hand touches the vase. She holds and hit very hardly on his head.  Rajat leaves her hand.. Blood is flowing from his head. Priya pushes Rajat and runs towards the entrance door; Rajat two friends' blocks her and hold her.

 

Rajat:- Priya ko rokko,uuse jaane mat dena.

 

Rajat Priya ke paas aata hai aur zor se uuse thappad marta hai. He again raises his hand and tries to slap on her other side when he feels somebody stopped him. He looked back. He shocked to see Ram is standing behind them.

 

Ram gives one tight slap on rajat's face.

Rajat friends tries to hold Ram.

 

Ram eyes show his anger. He punches very hard on their face. Both fell on the floor. They try to get up but slips. Ram holds one of them and punches him again and throws him near door and doing the same with second. Both runs from there.

 

Ram goes near to Priya and hugs her very possessively. 

He broke the hug and goes very angrily towards Rajat and hits him many times on his face. Each time he falls. Ram again hold him and punches him nonstop.

Ram asks him "how dare to touch my Priya". I will not spare you I will kill you.

 

Rajat raises his hand and telling him to stop. Ram in no mood to listen and smashes him nonstop. Rajat is almost faint

Ram called police. After sometime police also came and arrest Rajat.

 

Ram:- inspector isse yahan se le jaayiye. Kisi bhi haalat mein inski zamanat nahi honi chahiye.

Inspector:- aapko aur madam ko ek baar aakar FIR file karni hongi.

Ram:- ji hum kal subah aakar FIR darz kar denge. ek aur baat inspector,uss din meine aapse jhoot kaha tha. mera accident isine karwaya tha.

 

Ram to Rajat( in anger):- bahut badi galti kar di Rajat tumne. Tumne aaj tak jho bhi kiya usse mein bhool bhi jata. Lekin aaj tumne saari hade paar kar di. Abb dekhna mein tumpar kaise case file karta hoon. Zindagi bhar tumhe afsoos hoga ki kabhi tumne mujse panga liya tha.

Inspector Rajat ko lekar chala jata hai..

 

(uff at last I finished this Rajat's character. When I started this FF, I wanted to give him a positive look, but my reader forces me to show him as villain.

Meine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Rajat ka mein eisa haal kar dungi. Jab bhi Rajat (Samir k) ko IPL mein dekhti hoon,kahi  na kahi muje meri FF yaad aa jati hai.

Khair jo hua so hua muje lagta hai ki meine apne readers ko nirash nahi kiya.)

 

Precap:- Ram spend night at Priya's house, there first kiss, Neha-Priya meet,Ram apply haldi to Priya.

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Sorry for the mistakes.

Edited by sandhyasn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

super awesome update...


total filmi masala...





cant wait after reading precap... 

Edited by taashu11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg They will kiss😳

jaldi update karo plz 

You are update was action packed i so wanted this scene in balh ram beating rajjo

how dare he slap priya shameless kamina

P.S: same feeling jab bhi sameer  ko IPl mein dekhti hun channel change karti hun rajjo affect LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey hope you are fine 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This rajat how dare he slap priya nd what a shameless creature he is 😡 hero ki entry nd dishum dishum rajat ki bandh baji maaza agaya yar
Nd precap their first kiss hayee 😳
Cont soon plz plz plz