FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145 - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting preview.update kab karnewali ho.kya shaadi se pehle aage badh gaye dono.aisa mat karna shaadi k baad hi.pls reply when will u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jmehta1957

interesting preview.update kab karnewali ho.kya shaadi se pehle aage badh gaye dono.aisa mat karna shaadi k baad hi.pls reply when will u update.

ji ji eise hi hoga. aap jaise chahegi waise hi hoga.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


nahi re Raya ko milna hi hai. Ram is smart he understands



thank u sandy
toh next raya ki shaadi wow 🥳 [:D/]
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a prvw waiting for the update.fast dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for all comments. update is on the way😃
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This part I am dedicated to viru, viny, sangs, shamu and alya
PART- 20
Scene 58

Priya ' Neha meet

Ram taken her to the coffee shop. While driving he put his hand around her shoulder.

Ram is very happy. He has a feeling that he has everything in his life. He drops Priya in her flat.

Ram:- Priyaa' mein tumhe teek 8 baje lene aaunga. Taiyaar rehna.

Ram is very excited and planning for tonight.

Its 7o'clock in the evening.

Neha came to meet Priya. She has one packet in her hand.

Priya welcomes Neha.

Neha:- hii Priya'. Kaisi ho?????. Rajat ke baare mein pata chala. Tum tek toh ho na, thank god Ram tumhare saat tha.

Priya:- baito mein tumhare liye paani lekar aati hoon.

Neha:- (giving her packet) Priya yeh tumhare liye tumhari amanat

Priya:- (confuse) yeh kya hai????

Neha:- khud hi dekh lo

Priya open the packet and saw the same sari and necklace which is gifted by Ram and which Priya given to Neha and request her to return it to Ram.

Neha:-(with a smile) kaisa laga Priya pasand aaya????

Priya(with a tear) Neha' yeh sab??? Tumne Ram ko yeh wapas nahi kiya tha kya???

Neha:- nahi Priya. Tumne yeh wapas karne ko de diya lekin muje himmat hi nahi hui. Ram waise bhi upset tha aur agar yeh bhi wapas kar deti toh woh poori tarah se tuth hi jata. Abb jab tum uski zindagi mein ho toh muje laga ki tumhe yeh wapas de dena chahiye.

Priya said thank u and hugs Neha

Neha:- mein chalti hoon Priya. Bachhe ghar par akele hai

Priya:- Neha baito na mein tumhare liye chai banakar laati hoon.

Priya chai lekar aati hai when there is a knock on the door. It was Ram.

Ram:- Priya tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui. 8 baj gaye hai.arre Neha tum yahan'.. gayi nahi abb tak.

Neha:- arre tum muje bagana kyun chahte ho. Baito aur priya ki haat ki chai peeyo.

Priya tum jakar taiyyar ho jao.

Ram chai leta hai.

Neha:- chai kaisi hai. priya ki jhooti hai. kaisi hai?????

Ram :- chup karegi'achhi hai

Neha:- sirf achhi hai????

Ram:- chup karegi!!!

Priya:- chaliye mein taiyyar hoon. Neha chalo hum tumhe ghar chod dete hai.

Ram drop neha near her place.

Neha:- (teasinginly) Priya , sambal ke rehna aaj raat Ram naughty hone ka poora chance hai

(Priya and Ram feel embarrassed)

Ram(gusse mein):- shut up Neha! ''tum jati ho ya nahi.

Neha(haste hue):- bye Priya''Bye Ram..

Both Ram and Priya said goodbye.

Scene ' 59

Priya in KM

Ram Priya ko lekar KM aata hai. Priya takes blessing from KK.

Ram fresh hone ke liye chale jata hai. KK aur Priya kal ki baat karte rehte hai.

Afterwhile everybody started their dinner. Priya sits besides Ram.

Priya:- sid kahan hai??? kahi dhikayi nahi de raha.

KK:-sid ghar par nahi hai.dosto ke saat hai. hamesha raat ko late aata hai.

Priya's hanky falls from her hand. She bends herself and puts her hand down to take when suddenly Ram held her hand. She becomes shocked.

Priya haat chudane ki koshish karti hai, lekin Ram Priya ka haat bahut zorro ke pakde rehta hai.

KK:- Priya, kya hua beta tum khaa kyun nahi rahi hoo? Khana pasand nahi aaya???

Priya:- nahi Maa eisi koi baat nahi.

She request Ram to leave her hand but, Ram in no mood todo it.

She started eating with her left hand.

KK:- Priya kyaa tum bhi ulte haato se khati ho???

Priya:- nahi maa'.she don't know what to say'''''''.woh mein '..khana hi toh hai maa iss haat se khau ya uss haato se kya farak padta hai.

Kk ko kuch samaj nahi aata. KK chup rehti hai.

They complete their dinner. Ram Priya ke pass aata hai aur kehta hai mein "kamre mein tumhara intezaar karunga. Jaldi aana."

Priya blushed.

KK:- chalo Priya. Aaj tum mere kamre mein sona. Waise upar mein ek aur kamra hai ram ke bagal mein tum chaho toh udar bhi so sakti ho.

Priya:- nahi maa mein aapke saat soti hoon

Ram ko Priya ke decision par gussa aata hai but, he has no other option and keep silent.

She changed her into t-shirt and pyjama.

Its 11o clock

Priya aur KK baat karte rehte hai. idar Ram baichain hote jaa raha tha. Ram sone ki bahut koshish karta hai lekin Ram baar baar uthke baith jata hai.

After some time Priya and KK goes to sleep.

Ram is ready for his action. He goes near to kk room and slightly opens the door and entered. He saw Priya sleeping peacefully. He gazes priya for some time and thinks how beautiful she looks when she sleeps.

Ram thinks" muje baichain karke kitne aaram se so rahi hai , lekin sote waqt Priya aur bhi koobsurat dikti hai."

He tries to wake up Priya, she open her eyes and shouts when Ram puts his hand on her mouth.

Ram:- (very slowly) Priya'.. mein hoo.

Priya (Ram ka haat hatate hue):- aap yahan kya kar rahe hai??

Ram:-kya kar raha hoo matlab???? Tumhe lene aaya hoon.

Priya:- Ram aap abhi jaayiye mein kahi nahi aa rahi. Waise bhi muje bahut neend aa rahi hai.

Ram:- iska matlab tum nahi aa rahi ho???

Priya:- nahi '''.

Ram:- toh phir teek hai and carry her in his arms and taken her to his room.

Ram taken her to his room and put her in his bed. He gets up from their and closed the door.

Priya chauk ke baith jati hai.

Priya:- Ram kya kar rahe hai.. maa utt jaayegi. Please muje jaane dijiye.

Ram kaha maanne wala tha. He throws himself on her and came on top of her.

Ram:- maa ko pata nahi chalne wala. Maa ki dawai mein sedation rehta hai abb who subah tak uthne wali nahi aur tum subah tak mere saat sone wali nahi.

Before priya could say anything Ram tightly kiss on her lips. Slowly Priya also responds.

They continue to kiss passionately,Priya grabs his kurtha for balancing. He moves his hand on her back. Priya pushes Ram back and broke the kiss. He begins nuzzling her neck and his other hand starts removing her top. She pushes him and stops him from doing.

Priya:- nahi Ram'.please'yeh teek nahi hai.

Ram:- kya teek nahi hai Priya. Kuch nahi hoga and starts nuzzling her neck again.

Priya again stops him, Ram becomes angry.

Ram:- kya hai priya tum muje rok kyun rahi ho.

Priya:- Please Ram.. samajne ko koshish karo. Mein nahi chahti ki shaadi se pehle hamare beech mein yeh'..

Ram:- no, Priya I wanted to do it now.

Priya:- please Ram samajne ki koshish karo I am not ready for this.

Ram:- (controlling his anger) Its ok Priya.

Priya:-I am sorry. Abhi shaadi ke liye 6-7din hi bache hai. uske baad mein aapko nahi rokungi.

Ram:- haan aur uske baad mein rukne bhi nahi wala.

Priya:- waise muje laga nahi tha ki aap itna desperate ho sakte hai.

Ram:- kehna ka matlab kya hai. Businessman hoon toh kya muje kisi se pyar nahi ho sakta. Arre mein bhi insaan hoo mujme bhi feeling hoti hai. Aur mein konsa har kisi ladki ko dekhkar deperate hota hoon. Woh toh mein apni hone wali biwi ko dekhkar thoda distract ho jata hoon.

Priya:- Ram mein aapke saat toh hoon na aur aapke paas mein bhi

Ram:- yahi toh mein keh raha hoon jab tum mere pass hoti ho toh mein aapko nahi rok pata hoon.

Priya:- please'..mere liye.

Priya hugs Ram and thinks: how much he loves me

She puts her head on his shoulder and he put his hand around her waist.

Ram:- Priya tumhe eisa pakadkar soo toh sakta hoon na

Priya:- Ramm'..

Both sleeps.

Around 5'oclock,

Priya KK ke kamre mein chali jati hai. KK still in deep sleep.

Morning 7'oclock,

KK:- Priya kal teek se neend aayi na.

Priya:- haa maa'and thinks" thank god Maa ko kuch pata nahi chala. Yeh Ram bhi na..

KK:- Bansi kaka yeh chai Ram ke kamre mein rak do aur uske baad Sid ke kamre mein bhi leke jao.

Priya:- maa, mein Ram ke kamre mein chai lekar jati hoon.

KK:- teek hai beta''.Bansi kaka yeh chai sid ke kamre mein le jao.

Bansi kaka chai lekar Sid ke kamre mein jate hai.

Sid:- bahar itna shor kyun hai??? kon hai

BK:- Priya madam aayi hui hai. kal raat ko yahi rooki thi.

BK chai rakkar chale jate hai.

Sid thinks" Priya kal raat se ghar par thi aur kisi ne muje bataya nahi. Teek hai mein milkar aata hoon.

Here,

At Ram's room

Priya chai lekar kamre mein aati hai aur Ram ko uthati hai.

Ram is little upset.

Priya:- abb bhi naraz ho kya????

Ram gets up from bed and stand near the balcony looking outside.

Priya goes near to him and hugs him from back.

Priya:- please Ram naraz mat ho. Mein apka deperation samaj sakti hoon.

Ram pulls her in front and kisses her on her lips. Sid immediately entered into the Ram's room. Both Ram and Priya seperates. Priya blushed.

Sid:- woh' bhai. Maa ne bataya ki bhabhi aayi hui so socha mil lu.

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Priya nahane kochale jati hai and came out wearing bath robe. She becomes little worried about what to wear. Ram came and hugs her from behind and kisses on her cheeks and said good morning. Her Bath robe becomes loosen, she hold her robe very tightly.

Ram:- Sid ki wajah se morning kiss poora bhi nahi hua. Abhi darwaza teek se bandh kar liya hai and he turns her. Priya is breathing hard.

Ram gazes at her from top to bottom. She is freshly bath, water drops are falling from her hair. Ram tries to control himself and kiss her. Both separate after some time.

Ram:- chalo mere saat and taken her near the cupboard.

Priya is little nervous.

Ram taken out the sari from the cupboard and gave her to wear. It was the same sari which she forgets to take when Ram gifted her new sari and necklace. Sari is nicely cleaned and folded.

Ram:- tumhari hi hai Priya. Uss din party se le jana bhool gayi. Pata hai isse pakadkar hi mein roz tumhare mere pass hone ka mehsoos karta tha.

Priya looks at Ram with all her love and affection.

Ram drops her to her place.

Precap:- Priya-Sid scene, Priya gifts Ram, haldi rasam, marriage.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy me first..
Woww too good sandi 👏
Very romantic 😳 nd loved that both understands nd respect each others feelings.. ❤️
Ram ko kisser ka khitab milna chahiye..lol..baar baar kiss karta hai.. 😆 though i m not complaining 😉 i m loving their newly found romance...
Precap priya gift degi ram ko..awww
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omggg i m deaddd...wht a romanceee...uii maa..bt hey why dnt u pm me?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Omggg i m deaddd...wht a romanceee...uii maa..bt hey why dnt u pm me?

I PM u let me check.
btw thanks for comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
very brave ram take priya with him from kk s room their room scene and and conv I love it

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