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Originally posted by: sangeethagupta

i really want to know priya loves ram or not
so wt will be ram reaction to priya words
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awesome update..finally engagement happen..ram is over excited to meet priya..nyc talk betwn ram nd priya..yaar iss rajat ko hatao raya ke bich se..eagerly waiting party scene..cntinue soon thankx for PM
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PART-16

Scene 49

Office scene continues''

Ram:- Priya lunch kiya????

Priya:- nahi. Aaj jaldi mein tiffin laya nahi.

Ram:- koi baat nahi. Aaj tum mere saat lunch karna.

Priya:- nahi''''.mein canteen mein kuch khaa lungi.

Ram:- no darling'' aaj tum mere saat lunch karne wali hoo.

Priya:- Ram, aapka lunch kam pad jaayega.

Ram:- jitna bhi hai. hum milkar kaayenge. Agar ek hi roti rahi hai phir bhi' I am hapy to share with my wife. chalo

Both went to the conference hall. Priya sits and Ram sits beside her.

Ram opens his lunch box. He saw one chit. He confused and open the chit. He reads " aaj bahu ke liye bhi lunch pack karwaya hai. dono milkar khana.maa'..

Ram smiles and said:- maa ne tumhare liye bhi khana bijwaya hai.

Priya places two plates. Ram immediately removes one plate and kept aside.

Ram:- hum ek hi plate se kaayenge. Aur aaj mein tumhe kilaaunga.

Ram takes small piece of chapatti and feeds priya. Next piece he takes.

Ram intentionally licks his fingers and gives next to Priya.

Thodi der mein Priya ka pett bhar jata hai.

Priya:- Ram mein aur nahi khaa sakti. Mera pett bhar gaya hai

Ram:- bas' itne mein hi. Abhi toh aadha bhi nahi hua hai.

Madam aap MR. Ram Kapoor ki honewali biwi ho. Muje dekho aur apne aap ko. Abb tumhari kamar hai itni si biscuit ke itni aur muje dekho bilkul hatta kata tandarusth.

Priya:- haatte katte hai yeh toh mein nahi jaanti. Haa lekin mote zaroor hai.

Ram:- tumne muje mota kaha. Dekhna tumhe bilkul mere saaman na bana diya toh kehna.

Both were started laughing. Ram thodi der mein hasna bandh kar deta hai aur Priya ki taraf dekhta rehta hai aur sochta hai " aaj pehli baar priya mere saat itna khulkar hasi hai. hey bagwan mein hamesha iski khushi banayi rakku."

In this way both finish their lunch.

Ram:- aaj toh meine tumhe killa diya lekin kal se tum muje kilaaungi. Roz. Aur woh bhi apne haato se banaya hua. Kyunki kal se mein ghar se lunch nahi mangwaaonga.

Priya smiles and said:- teek hai. lekin shaadi se paanch din pehle hi mein office se chutti lene wali hoon.

Ram(shocked):- what?..chutti!!!!!. no way Priya. Mein tumhe chutti nahi dene wala hoon.

Priya:- kyun????. Muje shaadi se pehle bahut sari taiyaariyaan karni hai.

Ram:- kya kaam hai. joh bhi hai hum milkar karenge.

Priya:- Ram.. shopping baaki hai. suitcase pack karni hai. ghar par kaam rahega, mehmaan aayenge. Bahut sari rasam nibani hai.

Ram:- nahi. Priya'baat agar shopping ki hai toh mein tumhare saat chalunga. Suitcase baad mein bhi pack ho sakta hai. aur kya khaha tumne rasam. Tum sirf ek rasam karo mujse shaadi karne ki,baaki karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Priya:- maa muje aane nahi dengi. Aur mein toh sirf aapse paanch din ki chutti maang rahi hoon. Uske baad toh hamari shaadi ho jaayengi. Phir mein aapke saat hi toh rahungi. Aur waise bhi haldi ke baad hame milna nahi chaahiye.

Ram:- No Priya tumhe roz office aana honga. Tumhe abb roz dekke bagair nahi rah sakta. Tum agar mujse sach mein pyar karti ho toh mujse milne aaongi.

Priya shocked and keep her mouth wide open. Uuse samaj nahi aata ki who Ram ko kaise samjaaye.

She came out from hall. She saw Sid is waiting in her place.

Priya:- Siddhanth!!!!..tum yahan

Sid:- Bhabhi !!! mein aapse se hi milne aaya tha. woh kya hai na aap aur Ram baiyya dono jaldi nikal gaye ,congratulate karne ka time hi nahi mila. Congratulation and forward his hand.

Priya looks here and there when she heard bhabhi . She feels embarrassed and said thanks and shakes with him.

Sid:- mein baiyya se milkar aata hoon.

Saudamini:- priya tumne bataya nahi ki shaadi ki taarik fix ho gayi hai.

Priya:- mein batane hi wali thi.

Ram se milkar Sid wapas priya ke paas aata hai.

Sid:- Meine socha tha ki aaj sham ko aapko dinner par invite karne ko bolu. Lekin aap aur baiyya toh Party ko jaa rahe hai.

Priya looks at him and slightly nods her head but, said nothing.

Sid understands priya is not interested.

Sid:- bhabhi agar aap party par nahi jana chahti toh aap baiyya ko bol do. Woh samaj jaayenge. Lekin ek baar aap jana shuru karenge toh baiyya aapko har jagah lekar jaayenge. Mein hamesha avoid kar deta hoon khaskar business party. Woh apne clients se baat karne mein itna busy hote hai kabhi kabhi ye bhi bhool jate hai unke saat koi aaya bhi hai. party khatam ho jati hai lekin inki baate nahi khatam hoti.

Priya:- nahi!!!! Tumhare baiyya ne aaj pehli baar muje invite kiya hai, mein mana nahi kar sakti.

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Ram drops Priya at home and told her to be ready for the party. He will come and pick her by 7'oclock. He told her that Party is out of city so two hour journey is there.

Priya:- papa permission nahi dene wale

Ram:- common Priya tum apne hone wale pati ke saat jaa rahi ho. Tum chinta mat karo mein maa ' papa se baat kar lunga.tum bas taiyyar rehna.

Scene- 50

Ram and Priya at the party

Ram takes permission from sudhir and told him that he will take care of Priya and will drop her soon. Priya wore sari and looks as usual beautiful. Ram looked at her from top to bottom with a mouth wide open. He always found Priya very attractive in sari.

Ram aur priya party ke liye nikalte hai. Priya ask about the venue and all that.

After whatever happened on club she is very scared to go out at night, especially for the party.

Though this time Ram is with her and she is well aware that Ram will take care of her but, still she is very nervous as she never attended any business party before.

Ram told her that Vikram is also invited with his family but, his son is not well, so he is not coming.

After 2 hour of journey at last they reached the place. He looked at priya and found her nervous.

Ram:- nervous kyun ho rahi ho??? Mein hoon na. aur waise bhi eise Party ki aadat kar lo, bahut aayenge.

Ram put his hand on her shoulder and walks inside the venue.

They entered the hall. Light music is going on. Some people are dancing.

Ram and priya are welcome by Gupta industries staff people.

Both the owners shake hand. They knew Priya already as she is also present when the deal is sanctioned. But, nobody knows that she is engaged to Ram.

Ram and client started talking about business matter.

Priya is bored and tied also. She told Ram that she is sitting there. Ram said ok and said "he will join in fifteen minutes.

Priya is sitting at the corner and taking juice, when one man came near to her and tries to talk with her.

Man:- hii. May I

Priya:- ya sure.

He sits beside her.

Man:- aap yahan kiske saat aayi hai

Priya:- Mein Mr. Ram Kapoor, kapoor industries ke maalik ke saat aayi hoon.

Man:- aap???? wahan

Priya:- mein company ki C.S. hoon'''''''Aur aap?

Man:- mera naam Mr.'''hai. gupta industries mein manager hoon. Aapka naam kya hai????

Priya:- mein Miss Priya Sharma.

After some time.

Man:- kya aap mere saat dance kar sakti hai..

Priya:- NO!!!. mera mann nahi hai.

Man requests her continuously. Suddenly he holds her hand and takes her to the dance floor.

Priya is saying No and looking for Ram. Ram is busy in talking and did not notice this.

Priya dance with that man and not at all comfortable with him. She tries to move but he holds him very tightly.

Priya gets angry and wanted to slap him but she didn't. She thinks if she react it may happen that they will cancel this deal.as ram already told him it's very important deal and she don't want this deal will be cancelled because of her fault.

Ram finished his talk and look for Priya. He found priya is not in place. He panicked. Suddenly he saw she is dancing with one man. Ram is fuming and thinks" how dare he touch my priya". Ram sensed that she is not happy and the man is forcing her to dance.

He goes near her and takes her hand from him and started to dance. Ram looks at her from all his love. With his eyes he is trying to say sorry to Priya. Priya is almost crying but controls. Now, Priya feels secure in Ram"s hand. She is breathing very heavily. Ram again said sorry and promised her that he will never do this again.

Ram:- abb toh thoda has do priya.

Priya hasti hai.

Suddenly Ram holds her from her waist and pulls her more inside. Priya is feeling tinkling in her stomach.. Both are very very close. Ram whispers in her ear you are very erotic. Priya smiles. Ram put his hand on her back and pulls her more inside. Ram move closer to her lips. She swallowed a gulp and closes her eyes. Ram sensed that she is not ready. He moved back.

Priya looks down and said sorry.

Everybody wonders how an owner of the company can dance with their employee and that too very close.

After sometime both came. But, he didn't leave her hand.

Before anybody asking him about Priya. Ram said Priya is my fiance. Yesterday only we are engaged.

Enerybody congratulates them.

Person who is forcing her to dance feel ashamed for his behavior. He said sorry to both Ram and Priya.

Both finished there dinner, spend some more time in party and left from there. Both spend wonderful time together.

It's 12'oclock midnight.

Ram is driving his car. When he asked priya " tumne usse roka kyun nahi"

Priya:- woh mein nahi chahti thi ki meri wajah se apke deal cancel ho jaaye.

Ram stops the car with a jerk.

Ram:- (shouts) pagal ho gayi tum. Tumhe kya lagta hai Priya mere liye deal jyada important hai. tum eise soch bhi kaise sakti ho.tumse zyada muje koi maiyne nahi rakta. Aur tum nahi har ladki mein itni himmat honi chahiye ki woh kisi ki bhi zabardasti na sah sake, aur react kare.

Priya be strong and react .Mein nahi chahta ki tum kisi ke saamne kamzor pado. wada karo aage se tum chup nahi rahogi.

Priya gets emotional with his words and nods her head.

Ram:- Priya kya hum thodi der bahar khade ho sakte hai?????

Both came out from the car. There was silence. When Ram started:- Priya kya mein tumse kuch pooch sakta hoon. "Priya kya tum iss shaadi se kush ho????"

Priya:- eisa kyun pooch rahe ho.

Ram:- Priya''muje lagta hai ki tum shaadi ke liye taiyyar nahi ho. Jab bhi mein tumhe dekhta hoon,muje eisa kyun lagta hai ki tum mujse kuch kehna chahti ho. Par bol nahi paa rahi ho. Mein tumhe issliye party mein lekar aaya taaki mein tumse ye jaan saku,ki tumhari problem kya hai. bolo priya mein jaanna chahta hoon.

Priya becomes emotional. Ram is waiting for his answer.

Priya:- mein janti hoon Ram aap mujse ye sawal kyun kar rahe hai. mein janti hoon jo aap mujse expect kar rahe hai mein woh nahi kar paa rahi. Lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ki mein appse pyar nahi karti. Mein aapse pyar karti hoon, lekin muje thoda waqt chahiye.

Ram:- waqt????kaisa waqt

Priya:- Ram''.inn dino mere saat job hi kuch hua usse mein bahut disturbed hoon. Mein inn sabse bahar nikalne ki koshish kar rahi hoon lekin yeh itna aasan nahi hai.

"mein Rajat ko bachpan se janti hoon. Woh mera achha dosth tha, muje laga ki mein uske saat shaadi ka rishta bhi niba sakti hoon. Phir aap mere zindagi mein aaye. Aapne mujse kaha ki aap mujse pyar karte hai. lekin meine kabhi bhi serious nahi liya.

Jab aapka accident hua meine bahut koshish ki ki mein aapse na milu, lekin mein eisa nahi kar paayi aur aapse milne chali aayi. Jab aap mujse naraz the muje takleef hoti thi. hamesha meine jaan boojkar Rajat ko aapse upar rakha. Jab party mein muje Rajat ki sachayi ka pata chala, mein poori tarah se tutt gayi thi. Agar aap uss din muje nahi bachate toh mein shayad aapke saamne'''''.

Ram put his hand on her lips. Priya ram ka haat hatati hai..

Priya:- muje bolne dijiye Ram. Uss din meine sirf aapka naam liya tha. App aaye bhi muje bachane ke liye. Jab rajat ne muje kiss karne ko kaha mein nahi kar paayi. Muje ehsaas ho gaya tha ki mein Rajat se pyar nahi karti. Lekin jo bhi Rajat ne mere saat kiya, mein bahut darr gayi hoon. Muje apne aap par bhi vishwas nahi hota hai. muje samay chahiye Ram apne aap ko samajne , aapko samajne ke liye. Bas thoda sa waqt.

Ram(relaxing):- mein samaj sakta hoon. Achanak se tumhari jindagi mein jo bhi hulchal hui hai uuse tum disturbed ho. Mein yeh chahta hoon Priya ki tum apni kadwi yaado ko bhool jao. Aura aage ke baare mein socho. Jin cheezo ke baare mein sochkar tum disturbed ho jati ho,uuse apni zindagi se nikal do. Tum jitna samay lena chahti ho le sakti ho. Mein tumhare saat hoon Priya.

Priya had tears and hugs Ram very tightly. This is the first move from Priya. Ram put his hand around her and rubs her back. After sometime he broke the hug and wipes her tear.

Ram:- chale'..

He again starts his car. After some time Priya sleeps. Ram apni gaadi rokta hai and Priya ko dekhta rehta hai. Ram Priya ke karib jata hai aur uuse sote hue dekhta hai.

He smiles. Ram feels he is complete with Priya. He slowly touches her cheeks without disturbing her.

Thodi der mein Ram Priya ke apartment pahuchta hai. he wakes up Priya.

Ram didn't want to let her go. Ram Priya se ek pal ke liye bhi alag nahi hona chahta tha. but, he has no other option. Ram takes her hand and kisses her.

Ram:- good night Priya. Miss you. Kal office me milte hai.

Priya:- good night and walks to her apartment.

Precap:- Last part of Rajat.

Friends I will try to give one more update before Thursday. This week I am super busy. I am going out for 2 months. Will try to give update in between.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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