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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Jst hv complete ur story..very nice nd very intresting story..amazing writting..very truely say cant wait 4 next update,so update soon asap!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

hey interesting story

update
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next update in 2-3 days. stay tuned
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<div></div>mostly tomorrow


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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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This part I am dedicated to all those friends who commented in my previous update and those who PM me.

Part '14

Scene 38

Night before engagement.

Priya apne kamre mein chali jati hai. maa ne uuse jo kuch khaha uuska uspar kuch bhi asar nahi pada. Priya toh sirf Ram ki khayaloo mein khoyi hui thi. Priya fresh hone ke liye chali jati hai.

Idar Sudhir Shipra par gussa hote hai.

Sudhir:- Priya ko datne ki kya zaroorat thi Shipra. Bechari sagai ke pehle wale din bhi kaam karke aa rahi hai. Aur tum uss par chilla rahi hai.

Shipra:- issiliye toh gussa ho rahi hoon. Are koi sagai ke pehle bhi kaam ko jata hai. mehmaan aaye hue hai, sab log Priya ke baare mein hi pooch rahe the.

Sudhir:- shipraaa'. Kal hamari Priya ki sagai hai. kuch din baad uski shaadi ho jaayegi. Phir priya hame chodkar apne sasural chali jaayengi. Phir toh ye ghar kitna suna sua ho jaayega. Aur tum uuse thoda pyar karne ke badle uuspe chilla rahi hoo.

Shipra:- sudhi'..meine toh uske balai ke liye khaha. App sahi keh rahe hai. shaddi ke baad ye ghar toh pura suna suna ho jaayega.

Sudhir:- achhi baat ye hai ki woh hamse jyada door nahi jaa rahi. Rajat ke ghar jaa rahi hai

Shipra:- aur ham priya ko roz dekh toh sakte hai.

Both become emotional.

Priya came out from bathroom. She opens her cupboard. She saw Ram's coat and then jeans she wore yesterday. She remembers the incidence. Smile crept on her face.

She forgets that these happiness stay for the short period of time.Tomorrow is an engagement with Rajat.

Here at KM,

Ram in his room. Ram is thinking about Priya only.

He said" Rajat ki sachhayi Priya ke saamne aa gayi hai. lekin kya woh kal Rajat se sagai karegi.

Aaj pehli baar usne mujse pyar se baat ki. Pata nahi kal kya hone wala hai.

Priya ne kuch bataya nahi ki woh kya karne wali hai.

Ek kaam karta hoon Priya ko phone karta hoon. He takes his mobile and dials his number but, he cut the call.

Nahi... Priya sachhayi janti hai. uuse khud faisla karna hai ki uuse kiske saat zindagi bitani hai. Uska jo bhi faisla honga mein uski izzat karunga.

Lekin Agar Priya sab jaanne ke bawzood bhi Rajat se sagai ki toh!!!!

Iss ladki ka koi bharosa nahi, Rajat uuse maafi maang lenga aur Priya maan bhi jaayegi.

At the same time,

Rajat is tensed. Whatever happens yesterday, he is very disturbed. His plan is flopped.

Rajat priya ko call karta hai,lekin Priya call nahi uthati hai. Rajat ko gussa aa jata hai.

Woh sochta hai " kal jo kuch hua uske baad Priya shayad sagai ke liye mana kar de. Pata nahi priya kya soch rahi hongi. lagta hai usne ghar par kuch nahi bataya.

Agar pata hota toh Shipra aunty mujse zaroor iss baare mein baat karti.

Priya mera phone bhi attend nahi kar rahi.

Kal jo bhi ho sagai se pehle muje Priya se baat karni padengi. Uuse maafi mangni padegi. Pata nahi Priya kal kya hungama karegi.

Abb yeh mere izzat ka sawal hai, priya se toh mein sagai bhi karunga aur shaadi bhi. Tumhara yeh thappad mein kabhi nahi bhool sakta. Zindagi bhar nahi. Ek baar tumse shaadi ho jaaye phir dekhna mein kya karta hoon.

Scene 39

Engagement day

Its morning 7'oclock

Priya achanak se uthathi hai, jaise ki usne koi bura sapna dekha ho. She is fully sweated.

Uuse ehsaas ho jata hai ki aaj uska engagement hai. kal office jaane ki wajah se Priya ne club wali baat kisi ko batayi bhi nahi thi. Priya gabrayi hui apna pasina pochkar bhahar aati hai. apni maa aur papa ko dhundti hai. lekin dono nazar nahi aate.

Engagement sham ki rehti hai

Engagement ceremony is arranged in the society lawn. As both are staying in the same colony, they decided to celebrated in the lawn. Sudhir is busy in the arrangement of the lawn.

Shipra is also busy in arranging chai naasta for the relatives.

Priya is worried. Time is very less; she wanted to make them understand. She is looking for her parents but both are busy.

Shipra Priya ko dekhti hai aur kehti hai " Priya utt gayi, mein tere liye abhi chai banakar lati hoon. Uske baad jaldi taiyyar ho jaa.

Priya:- maa muje aapse ek zaroori baat karna hai.

Shipra:- beta baad mein. Abhi dek sabko naastha bhi nahi diya hai

Priya:- maa''''maa'..

Priya andhar chali jati hai.

She is tensed. Uuse samaj nahi aa raha kisse bole kya kare.

Priya sochti hai "neha ko bolti hoon yeh teek rahega

She called neha but out of range.

Ohh god neha ka phone out of range hai. abb kya karu.ek kaam karti hoon Ram se baat karti hoon.

She called Ram. Ram cell is ringing after some ring his phone is attended.

Priya:- hello Sir''''sir mein Priya bol rahi hoon.

Sid:- Priya ji mein Sid bolo raha hoon. He lied " bhiyya ghar par nahi hai, kisi se milne gaye hai.khaha ki sham ko aayenge. Apna phone bhool kar gaye hai.

Priya feels helpless.

Ram came out from bathroom

Ram:- kiska phone tha

Sid:- pata nahi.koi wrong no. tha

He deleted the no.

It's evening,

Iss dauran Priya kahi baar mummy aur papa se baat karne ki koshish karti hai. lekin koi uski baat nahi sunta. Priya bilkul pareshan ho jati hai. Priya ko lagta hai abb woh ye engagement nahi rok sakti.

Priya ko taiyyar karane uski beautician bhi aa jati hai.

Here at KM,

Ram is upset. He is very disturbed. He really don't understand what to do, what not to do.

Vikram and Neha also reached KM.

Neha:- kya faisla kiya hai. Priya ke engagement ke liye chal rahe ho.

Vikram:- kya sawal kar rahi ho tum. Ram zaroor chalega. Kyu Ram.

Ram dono ko dekhta hai but kept silent.

Vikram:- dekh Ram...Priya kya faisla leti hai yeh mein nahi jaanta. Lekin mein yeh chahta hoon ki Priya ke faisle ke waqt tu wahan rahe aur job hi faisla ho uuse dil se accept kar.

Agar Priya Rajat ke saat rehna chahti hai toh uuse karne de,aur tu aage bhad. Aur yeh tabhi mumkin hai jab tu apni aankon se Priya ko kisi aur ka hote hue dekhega. Ham sab tere saat hai Ram.

Neha:- fatty jao jakar taiyyar ho jao. Mein maa se milkar aati hoon.

Ram goes for a change. He wears combination of cream and green color sherwani. He looks very handsome in that attire. He came out from changing room. Vikram is shocked to see him in this outfit.

Vikram:- Ram yeh kya pehna hai

Ram:- kyun kya hua'.achhi nahi hai.

Vikram:- achhe ki baat nahi hai. tu isme bahut achha lag raha hai.muje laga ki tu suit pehnega.

Ram puts small box in his pocket.

Ram ,vikram aur neha function ke liye chale jaate hai.

Here at Sharma house

Priya tries to speak with her parents from the morning. .

Priya is in dilemma. Beautician has come. She has no other option. Beautician gets her ready. She is crying from inside.

Here Rajat, decided to speak with Priya before engagement. He called Priya.

Priya attended. Rajat said " Priya I am sorry. Uss din club mein jo kuch hua uuse mein sharminda hoon.

Sach mano Priya dosto ne muje pilayi thi. Muje bhi samaj nahi aaya mein kya kar raha hoon.

Priya I love you. Mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhari izzat bhi karta hoon. Meine apne dosto ko yu hi keh diya tha ki tum muje kiss karogi, mera eisa karne ka koi irada nahi tha. lekin pata nahi mere friends ne isse seriously le liya. Mera Tumhe hurt karne ka koi irada nahi tha".

Priya:- koi baat nahi Rajat. Meine tumhe maaf kar diya. Rajat mein abhi rakti hoon.taiyyar ho rahi hoon.

Rajat:- ok mein bhi rakta hoon. Milte hai.

Priya is ready. She is looking gorgeous in green color lehenga with matching accessories. But something is missing. She is looking stunning from top to bottom but glow is missing in her face. Everybody praises her beauty and Priya giving fake smile to everybody.

Shipra put her kala teeka on back of her ear near neck.

Priya:- maa muje aapse baat karni hai. maa please. Baat karna bahut zaroori hai.

Shipra:- haa beta bolo. Kya baat karni hai

Priya:- maa mein appse akele mein baat karna chhahti hoon.

Everybody left the room

Shipra:- haa bolo Priya. Tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hoo

Priya:- (mumbling) maa'..maa mein Rajat ke saat sagai nahi kar sakti.

Shipra shocked and asked" kya hua Priya achanak se ''..Rajat se koi jagda hua hai kya.

Priya:- maa baat jagde ki nahi hai. Rajat...

Before Priya said. Somebody knocked the door. It was Sudhir.

Sudhir:- Shipraaa'tum yahan ho . dekho Rajat ke gharwale aa gaye hai. chalo jaldi chalo. Priya beta chalo Rajat ke parents se millo.

Shipra pareshan ho jati hai aur room se chali jati hai. jane se pehle woh Priya ko dekhti hai.

Everybody welcomes Rajat's family.

Shipra welcomes Rajat's family. Shipra asked about Rajat.

R's mother:- woh neeche hai. Lawn mein.

R's mother praises priya.

Rajat is standing with his friends in the Lawn.

R' friend:- Rajat, priya se baat hui. Club mein job hi kuch hua uske baad kya priya tumse sagai karne ke liye taiyyar hai.

Rajat:- phone kiya tha. priya normal lag rahi thi. Muje lagta hai usne club wali baat ghar par nahi batayi. Chalo achha hai. aaj sab kuch teek se ho jaaye. Phir dekhna Priya ko kya karta hoon. Thappad ka badla mein kaise deta hoon. Usne sabke saamne meri insult ki thi na, abb dekhna sabke saamne uska Mazak kaise banata hoon. Shaadi ke baad mein uuse yahan se door le jaaunga. Aur phir''''.

Ayesha who is standing there overhears the talk of Rajat and his friends. She is shocked.

She thinks "agar di rajat ke baare mein sab kuch jaanti hai toh phir sagai kyun kar rahi hai. isse pehle der ho jaye muje di se baat karni hongi. Rajat di se pyar nahi karta."

She runs from there to meet di.

Ram also reached. At the same time his staff people also reached. Everybody entered. Sudhir welcomes and makes them to sit. Neha and saudamini went to meet priya.

Rajat saw Ram is also present for the function. Rajat thinks'Ram yahan par hai,khahi kuch gadbad naa kar de.

Priya saw Neha and saudamini and taken them to her room.

Saudamini:- (as usual happy) priya tum kitni sundar lag rahi ho.

Priya smiles.

Neha:- Saudamini please mere liye paani lekar aa sakti ho.

Saudamini:- haa..kyun nahi aur pani lene chali jati hai.

Neha:- Priya ' Ram bhi aaya hai. mein yahan Ram ki taraf se kuch bolne nahi aayi hoon. Lekin mein itna kehna chahti hoon ki aaj tum jo bhi faisla longi uuse Ram poori tarah se accept karega. Agar tumhe lagta hai ki tum Rajat ke saat kush ho toh Ram tumhari zindagi mein kabhi bhi interfere nahi karega. Faisla tumhara hai Priya.

Priya puts her head down and kept silent. Tabhi saudamini pani lekar aa jati hai.

Neha:- hum neecha chalte hai

Both left from there

Shirpa came and said " Priya 'Rajat bahut achha ladka hai. teri usse shaadi hone wali hai.abb tum dono bachho ki tarah ladna bandh karo.abb tum dono bachhe nahi rahe. Agar naaraz ho toh Eise sagai ke liye mana thodi karte. Rajat tumse pyar karta hai issliye tujse kal milne bhi aaya tha na.

Mein Rajat ko achhi tarah se jaanti hoon,woh Priya ko bahut pyar karega.

It's time to takes Priya down. Priya had tears in her eyes.

She reached the lawn.

Lawn is beautifully decorated with flowers and colorful lanterns. Lots of peoples were presented in the lawn. Ram and his office staff sitting on the one side whereas Rajat is standing on the stage with his friends. Rajat give a dirty look to Ram.

Sudhir:- Priya tumhare office se log aaye hai, unse mil lo. Abhi thodi der mein function shuru ho jaayega.

Priya welcomes her staff. She is giving false smile to everybody. She is standing near Ram.

She looked into Ram's attire. He is looking very handsome. She realizes her and Ram's dress is matching.

Ram is not looking at Priya. She said nothing to Ram.

After that she steps on the stage. She goes near to Rajat. Rajat holds her hand intentionally.

Shipra saw this and thinks " yeh ladki bhi na dara deti hai. abhi bhi bachhi hai. thoda sa naraz thi toh sagai ke liye mana kar rahi thi.Rajat kitne pyar se priya ka haat thama hai. muje vishwas ho gaya hai Rajat Priya ko sambhal lenga."

Ayesha tries to speak with Priya but not successful. Then she tries to speak with her parents but both are not ready to talk .Both are very busy.

Everybody is on the stage. Neha and saudamini is standing near Priya. Priya can see Ram clearly from stage.

Ram is standing. Vikram tries to console him and his supports him by putting his hand on his shoulder.

Ram thinks "Everything is finished. Priya don't love me. Priya mujse pyar nahi karti. Mein haar gaya. Mein Priya ka pyar haasil nahi kar saka. Mein uska vishwas nahi jeet paya."

R's mother- Priya pehle tum Rajat ko ring pehaanugni, uke baad Rajat tumhe pehnaayenga.

Shipra opens the box contains engagement ring. She taken it out and give it to Priya.

Shipra:- Priyaaa..yee lo Rajat ko ring pehnao.

Rajat forward his hand.

With little hesitation, Priya takes the ring. She understands ring not his size.

Shipra and Ayesha also realize that ring is big. They looked into each other. They were also present when the ring was selected.

R's mother:- Priya Rajat ko ring pehnaao.

Shipra:- Priya kya hua '.ring pehnao.

Priya is shivering. First she saw Ram who is not looking at her and keep his head down, then she looks at Rajat, who is smiling and looking very cool, then again she looked at Ram.

Ram keeps his head down and closes his eyes tightly. Drops of tears fall from his eyes. Vikram holds him tightly and told him to control.

Ram:- Vikram please muje yahan se lekar chalo. Mein nahi dekh sakta. Mujme itni himmat nahi hai.

Vikram understands Ram will break down and decided to take him away.

Rams turns back when he hears Priya voice saying RAMM'..

Ram turns''

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippe me first

wowoww i am not at all happy u made raya cry and cry😡 next part u have to amke sure rajjo get kicked every where 😉 varna me not commenting😆
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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aabby oh pehle res kyun rakha niche hi update karna tha toh 😡
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Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx

aabby oh pehle res kyun rakha niche hi update karna tha toh 😡

that is for thanks giving. gussa chodo yaar comment karo.
u will understand y I reserved that place.
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Ram thinks "Everything is finished. Priya don't love me. Priya mujse pyar nahi karti. Mein haar gaya. Mein Priya ka pyar haasil nahi kar saka. Mein uska vishwas nahi jeet paya."

i got emotional here

nice update sadhya

cont soon

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