FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago
I know u r damn busy but we are also becoming impatient so can we an update plz dear
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waiting 4 ur update pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hiii sandhya...First sorry for late commenting ..
You told me first when you are going to start this FF but as i was not feeling well didnt get chance to read it but thank you so much for th PMs...Loved your dedications...
When iam reading i liked Rajat charcter and i thought he wi l come to knew priyas feelings on Ram than he may side of i thought .. But they way he treted priyA i hate him to the core i just dont like him ..
such a leach and asshole he is to behave with a girl like that .. thankgod Ram saved her everytime .. And sson priya will feel his love and rest of all continue in their love land .. ''
loved their meeting ..selection of rings and clothes .. her hesittion towards her innocenece beilib=ving blindly rajat ... her inner emotions u have shown it beutifully ..
BUt this will hurt her more well waiting to see Ram ..how he manages to control proya after this biggest turmoil..wqaiting for the next update ...


oh my god😲. u actually read it. thank u so so much for comments. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hi dear..

When is the next update..???
it is impossible to control my eagerness bcoz of the tempting story line...

update coming in a minutes😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jmehta1957

when r u going to update.atleast ek date bata do.eagerly waiting.please do reply.

updates in a minutes. dated 29th april timing 11:30PM😃
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

I know u r damn busy but we are also becoming impatient so can we an update plz dear

busy toh hoon but aaj time mil gaya toh meine aaj pura kiya. 😃
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thanks for all comments and sorry for waiting.
dedicated to all Raya lovers.
Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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PART- 19

Scene 55

Rajat ko police lekar chali jati hai. Ram darwaza bandh kar deta hai.

Priya is sitting on the ground. She is scared and crying continuously. He goes near to Priya hugged her very possessively. He is caressing her back. He kissed her head, then to her forehead continuously. He breaks the hug and wipes her tears.

He is giving her strength and moral support.

She is trembling and said woh ''woh'' Ra'..rajat''.

Ram:- I understand Priya. Don't say anything. I am with you. Don't think anything.

Priya:- Ramm'woh Rajat mere saat'..and hug him tightly.

Ram:- kuch mat bolo Priya.. mein tumhare saat hoon. Rajat kuch nahi karega. Usse police pakad kar le gayi hai. Priya please don't cry.

Ram is in pain. He cannot see his love like this.

Ram helps her to stand and made her to sit on the sofa.

Ram:- Yahan baito priya ,mein tumhare liye paani lekar aata hoon

Priya(scared):- nahi Ram. Mat jao. Please.

Ram:- Priya yahan baito kuch nahi honga tumhe, relax mein abhi aaya.

Ram brings her water.

Priya:- Ram' mat jao muje chodkar'.

Ram:- Priya mein tumhare saat hoon mein kahi nahi jaa raha hoon. Rajat tumhe kuch nahi karega. He is arrested abb woh tumhe kabhi kuch nahi karega.

Priya:- Ram muje chod ke toh nahi jaaonge na

Ram:- priya mein kahi nahi jaa raha. Chalo Priya andar kamre mein chalo.

He takes priya to the bedroom and makes her to sleep. Priya asked Ram to sleep along with him. She puts her head on his shoulder. She hugs ram possessively.

Priya:- Ram'.. aap toh chale gaye the, phir kaisa pata chala ki Rajat aaya tha.

Ram:- hmm'. Meri Priya musibat mein thi toh mein aa gaya.

Priya:- please Ram batao naa'.

Ram:- jab mein jaa raha that oh meri nazar front mirror par padi,toh meine dekha ki Rajat aur uske dosth tumhare building ki taraf jaa rahe hai. bas muje laga ki zaroor woh tumse milne ke liye gaye hai. issliye mein dekhne ke liye wapas aa gaya.

Priya looked at him and smiles. Ram kisses her forehead.

Priya is tied and sleeps after some time.

Ram cuddled Priya and after some time he also drove off to sleep.

(Ram ne Mazak mein hi kaha tha ki woh Priya ke saat raat spend karne wala hai aur Priya bhi Ram ko rokhna chahti thi. Kismat ne inn dono ki baat sun li wajah job hi ho Ram aaj Priya ke saat hai. Na Ram ko insist karna pada aur na Priya ko kuch bolna pada.)

Part 56

Ram is nowhere

Its 8'oclock in the morning,

Priya woke up from sleep. She remembers that yesterday she sleeps with Ram. She looks into the other side but Ram is not in his place. She gets up from bed and calls Ram. She thinks may be he is in bathroom. But Ram is not there.Then she searches him in terrace but Ram is not in terrace also.

Priya sofe par baithi hai aur sochti hai "Ram kahan ja sakta hai"

Priya then calls in his no, but his mobile is switched off. Then, she called in KM.

KK attended the call

KK:- Ram kal raat se ghar nahi aaya hai. raat ko phone kiya toh bola ki uuse kuch zaroori kaam hai issliye ghar nahi aayega. Bansi kaka keh rahe the Ram subah 5 baje aaya tha, fresh hokar chala gaya. Mein so rahi thi issliye Ram ne bansi kaka ko jagane se mana kiya. Ek kaam karo beta Ram ko phone karo.

Priya KK ko kal raat ki saari baate batati hai aur kehti hai ki kal raat Ram uske saat tha. lekin jab who subah utti toh Ram ghar par nahi tha. Priya yeh bhi kehti hai ki usne phone bhi kiya tha,lekin Ram ka mobile switched off aa raha hai.

KK:- tum teek toh ho na beta. Kuch hua toh nahi

Priya:- maa mein bilkul teek hoon. Kal raat ko thoda dhar gayi thi issliye Ram kal raat mere saat ruk gaya tha.

KK:- Priya tumhari maa papa kab aa rahe hai.

Priya:- mummy papa ne kaha tha ki kal subah tak aa jaayenge.

KK:- teek hai beta aaj raat tum KM mein rehna. Mummy papa ke aane ke baad chali jana.

Priya:- nahi maa mein manage kar lungi.aap chinta mat kariye. Maa mein baat mein baat karti hoon, office ke liye der ho rahi hai.

KK:- teek hai beta Ram ka pata chale toh bata dena aur agar yahan aata hai toh mein Ram se baat karne ke liye kahungi.

Both cut the call

Priya is worried about Ram. She called Vikram but his mobile is also switched off. She surprised how both of them switched off their mobile. Priya then called Neha she told her that morning Vikram telling about some urgent meeting, may be they are in meeting. Neha also told her that she wanted to meet her.

Priya:- achha teek hai evening ko tum mere ghar aa jana. Mein abhi office jati hoon.

Priya called in the office. Receptionist told her that Ram is in the office for some urgent meeting.

Priya thinks" kal raat mere saat itna sab kuch hua aur Ram mujse bina bataye office chale aaye. Muje batana bhi zaroori nahi samja. Kya Ram ko mujse jyada apne kaam se pyar hai.Ram ne mere baare mein ek baar bhi nahi socha. Kya Ram sach mein mujse pyar karte hai. kya Ram se shaadi karne ka faisla galat toh nahi tha. hey bagwan'''' mein Ram se bahut pyar karti hoon, mere iss dhar ko kabhi sach nahi hone dena.

Priya office ke liye ready hoti hai.

PART 57

Ram-Priya kiss

Priya car mein baithti hai. car in signal when two girls asking for lift. Priya allows her. Two were talking about their boss

1st girl:- job ke liye hame Boss ke tantrums bhi sehna padta hai. jab dekho ladkiyon se flirt karta hai. muje toh uske chehra dekhkar hi gussa aa jata hai. kuch bol bhi nahi sakte nahi toh job jaane ka darr bhi rehta hai.

2ndgirl:- haa yaar meine suna hai ki pehle bhi sir ne office ki ladki se jhoote pyar ka natak kiya aur shaadi karne ka wada kiya lekin baad mein apna matlab ho jaane ke baad usse kaam se hi nikal diya.

Priyas is listening everything become little worried and thinks "Kya Ram bhi mere saat eisa karenge. Meine toh unki aanko mein mere liye sachha pyar dekha hai lekin aaj jiss tarah unhone muje akele chodkar meeting ke liye gaye eisa toh nahi Ram mere feeling ke saat khel rahe hai".

Priya reached office.

Receptionist told her that Ram is in meeting. Priya is become little impatience. Uuse samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Ram ka cabin mein wait kare ya phir apne place mein jakar apna kaam kare.

At last she decided not to ask anything about this to Ram and do her work.

After two hours Ram finished his meeting. He saw priya is busy in work. He went to his cabin and called peon and told him to send Priya inside.

Priya nahi jati hai aur apna kaam karti rehti hai.

Saudamini uuse poochti hai ki woh kyun nahi jaa rahi toh priya kehti hai ki woh baad mein chali jaayengi.

Ram is surprised with her behavior. During recess also Priya take her lunch with office staff people. Ram ko gussa aa jata hai. Ram ka mann karta hai ki uska haat pakadkar uuse cabin mein lekar aaye.

Ram wapas peon ko bejhta hai ,iss baar bhi Priya nahi aati hai. Now, Ram is really pissed off her behavior. Ram came out from cabin and stand in front of Priya. All staff looked at them. Priya fell awkward. Ram hold her hand and taken her to his cabin.

He pin her to the wall and block her and look straight into her eyes. Priya feel little uncomfortable.

Ram:- (bending his head towards her and asked slowly) kya hua???baat kyun nahi kar rahi hoo.

Priya :- (pushing him) janiye dijiye ram. muje aapse koi baat nahi karni.

Ram:- baat nahi karni matlab????

Priya:- Ram please muje jane dijiye.

Ram:- arre lekin baat kya hai. batao toh sahi

Priya:- really Ram aap sach mein kuch nahi jaante ki mein apse kyun naaraz hoon. Mere saat Kal raat jho kuch bhi hua uske baad jab aaj subah mein uthti hoon toh pata chalta hai aap ghar par nahi hai. muje batana bhi nahi samja aur aap chale gaye aur mein aapko paagalo ki tarah pure ghar par doondh rahi thi,aapke ghar par phone kiya,vikram ko phone kiya phir neha se muje pata chalta hai ki vikram aaj subah meeting ke liye nikal gaye hai.

kal raat mein dari hui thi, muje pata tha ki aap mere saat hai, muje darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai lekin mere soo jane ke baad aap wahan se chale aaye, meeting attend karne,aur muje bataya tak nahi.

Ram was just staring at her and slowly came near to Priya. He is very close to Priya. Their lips are mm away. Priya is not realized that he is so near to her.

Priya continues'

Aapko pata hai Ram aapke liye zindagi mein kaam se jyada kuch matter nahi karta. Mein dari hui thi lekin mein hosh mein thi, mein yeh janti hoon ki kal raat aap mere saat the''..

Ram cuts her in between and kiss very tightly on her lips. Priya closed her eyes and feeling him. Ram pushing himself towards her. Priya is crushing between Ram and wall. Priya clutched his collar tightly for balance. Ram is not leaving her lips. Kiss turned into a passionate one. After some time they broke the kiss for some air. Priya open her eyes and push him lightly. She is shocked with his action. She asked'

Priya:- yeh kya tha????

Ram:- chup''.ek dum chup. Abb sirf mein bolunga aur tum sunogi'.

He again leaned towards Priya and said very slowly''

Aaj muje yeh ehsaas ho gaya hai ki tum mujse utna hi pyar karti ho jitna ki mein tumse karta hoon. Mein tumhari aaankon mein wahi tadap dekhna chahta tha jo do pyar karne walo ke dillo mein rehti hai. Meine jaanbhujkar tumhe bataye bagair chala gaya taaki mein yeh dekh saku ki isse tumhe kuch farak padta hai ya nahi. Jiss pyar ko tum apne dil par chupa kar rakki thi uss pyar ko aaj meine gusse ke roop mein dekha.

Pata hai Priya muje hamesha se hi yeh laga ki tum mujse pyar toh karti ho lekin mujse kuch expect nahi karti. Lekin aaj meine tumhari aankon mein mere liye tadap dekhkar, tumhari yeh jo bechaini dekhkar, mere liye gussa muje appnapan ka ehsaas dila rahi hai. mein bahut kush hu ki mein bhi tumhare liye important hoon.

Muje khushi hui yeh dekhkar ki mere kuch karne na karne se tumhe farak padta hai.

Aur tumne kya kaha ki mere liye kaam jyada important hai. yes, tum sahi ho mein apne kaam ke saat koi compromise nahi karta lekin mera kaam tum se badkar nahi hai. tumhare liye mein yeh kaam chod du, inn sab ka mere zindagi mein koi mayine nahi hai agar tum mere saat na ho.

Phir kabhi eisa mat kehna Priya. Meine mere zindagi mein sirf aur sirf tumse pyar kiya hai.muje kabhi chodkar mat jana Priya, mein tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta.

I love you Priya. I love you very much.

He hugged Priya very tightly. He caresses her head. Priya is very happy to hear all this.

After some time Priya broke the hug and said

Priya:- Ram yeh office hai koi aa jaayega

Ram:- koi nahi aayega. Sabhi jaante haiki agar hum dono ek saat ek cabin mein hai toh disturb nahi karna chahiye.

Priya blushed. He again hugged her back and kisses her cheeks.

Ram holds her hands and asked "aaj sham ka kya plan hai". mein soch raha tha ki hum kahi long drive par chale.

Priya:- nahi aaj nahi ho sakta. Neha se baat hui thi keh rahi thi ki uuse mujse milna hai.

Ram:- kyun??? Neha ko tumse kyun milna hai.

Priya:- pata nahi. Shayad eise hi milna chahti hai.

Ram:- suhir ji kab aa rahe hai

Priya:- aaj subah baat hui thi. Kal subah tak pahuch jaayenge.

Ram:- kal raat ke baare mein bataya

Priya:- nahi. Pareshan ho jaayenge.

Ram( naughtily):- iska matlab aaj raat ko mein tumhare ghar mein. Aaj kiss kiya hai aaj raat ko kuch aur bhi karunga

Priya:- no dear'.iski koi zaroorat nahi hai, kyunki aaj raat mein apne ghar par nahi sone wali.

Ram:- matlab????...aaj raat ko kahan jaa rahi hoo???

Priya:- aaj raat mein KM mein rahungi. Mummy ji ne muje aaj raat wahan rehne ko kaha hai.

Ram become very excited.

Ram:- fine' toh aaj tum mere ghar par rahongi. Iss baat ke liye maa se thanks kehna chahiye. Be ready for tonight Priya. Abb mein tumahare bagair ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta.

Priya:- Ram muje chodiye na muje bahut zoro se bhuk lagi hai.

Ram:- arre tumne lunch nahi kiya.

Priya:- aapko kya lagta hai Ram. Mein aapke bagair khana kaa sakti hoon. Mein jaanti hoon ki aapne subah se kuch nahi kaya.

Ram:- abhi sham ho gayi hai lunch nahi milne wala.

Priya:- koi baat nahi Ram hum coffee peene chalte hai.

Ram:- ok and hit his head with her'.chalo

Dono ko jaate hue dekh saudamini baaki staff se kehti hai

"hamare Ram sir kitna badal gaye hai na. jab se Priya unki zindagi mein aayi hai Ram sir hamesha kush rehne lage hai. pehle kitna arrogant, short tempered aur kitne strict the. Unke pass jane se hi darr lagta tha. Aur aaj Ram sir hamare saat kitna happily baat karte hai. kabhi bhi gussa nahi karte,strict toh woh aaj bhi hai par gussa nahi karte.

Other staff:- sahi baat hai. Ram Sir bilkul badal gaye hai, aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf Priya ki wajah se hai.

Sachha pyar pathar ko bhi pigla sakti hai.

(Aaj Ram aur Priya ek dusre se sachha pyar karte hai. Ram ko pyar ka matlab Priya aur Priya ko pyar ka matlab Ram hai.)

Precap:- Priya-Neha meet, Priya spend night in KM, Sid-Priya meet and Ram put haldi to Priya.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i captured😊

wowwowowww ram is my dashing hero kya kiss maara 😉 ohohoh he and priya in same rom ahemmm😉 ok nothing happened i know .. he did it to ge priya love muje nahi lagta .. but kya baat hain 2 baar kis kardiya😳 ise kehte hain romantic kissing update😆
so now priya in km.. ab ye sid ko kyun imp de rahi hoo
continue soon
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update
raya kissed was awesome
update soon
waiting

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