FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Sry 4 d late comment...interesting story love it hope ram ki gadi jald hi age baregi looking frwd d nxt pls update soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go... Ur every update is very simple yet beautiful.. Believe me if u polish ur writting skill u can bcome a very gud writter... Priya and ram ki gaari atak te atak te manzil tak pahuch hi jayegi but jo rasta tumne chuna hai unki ki gaari ko manzil tak lane ke liye, wo bahut hi khubsurat hai.. In short and simple way the concept of this story and the way raya ka love is progressing is very unic and awesome... oved ur ff, update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sss283

part 3:

ye ram kab baat karega priya se
priya ki engagement fix hui h and ram ki gaadi wahin atki hui h
superb
continue asap

thank u so much🤗. Definately Ram will do something
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Rajjo aur Priya ki engagement hogi ke nahi yeh toh RAMjaane, the story is going interesting, continue ASAP

thank u so much.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

Read all the parts in one go... Ur every update is very simple yet beautiful.. Believe me if u polish ur writting skill u can bcome a very gud writter... Priya and ram ki gaari atak te atak te manzil tak pahuch hi jayegi but jo rasta tumne chuna hai unki ki gaari ko manzil tak lane ke liye, wo bahut hi khubsurat hai.. In short and simple way the concept of this story and the way raya ka love is progressing is very unic and awesome... oved ur ff, update soon..

thank u so much🤗. about my writing:- I know its not up to the mark. life mein kabhi zaroorat hi nahi padi likne ki. this is first time Im active in any networking site.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
priya or rajat ki engagement ye kya horaha he
ram ko kuch krna parega wo bhi jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Sandhyasn..Lovely FF. Liked it so far,apart form Rajat-Priya think.Sorry am not a rajat fan.Otherwise i loved it.Neha and Vikram rock as usual.Hahaha Ram Golu hai dint even speak to her once.Btw how cum Priya agreed to the engagement? Haawww!! I hope they are not getting engaged. Shadi to door ki bat hehe.. waiting for the next update.Requesting for a PM the next time u update.Thank u :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siacutie

priya or rajat ki engagement ye kya horaha he

ram ko kuch krna parega wo bhi jaldi

he will do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love4raya

Hey Sandhyasn..Lovely FF. Liked it so far,apart form Rajat-Priya think.Sorry am not a rajat fan.Otherwise i loved it.Neha and Vikram rock as usual.Hahaha Ram Golu hai dint even speak to her once.Btw how cum Priya agreed to the engagement? Haawww!! I hope they are not getting engaged. Shadi to door ki bat hehe.. waiting for the next update.Requesting for a PM the next time u update.Thank u :)

thank u so much🤗.Ram will do something.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here's comes the next part. Im sure you will definately bash me after reading,but trust me everything will be alright.

Part 4

Scene 9

At Kapoor mansion

Ram in his room with his friend Vikram. Vikram:- kuch socha hai kya karna hai.Neha ne khaha ki Rajat sirf uska bachpan ka dosth hai.

Ram:- Pata nahi yaar ,jab bhi saamne aati hai bolti bandh ho jati hai,waise na inn bachan ke dostho se jyada darna chahiye, pata nahi ye bachpan ke dosth kab husband bann jate hai.

Vikram surprisingly:- Ramm kya ye tu keh raha hai. Yaar tujhe dekkar log darte hai

Ram:- ha par pata nahi Priya ke saamne kuch bol hi nahi pata. Kuch bata yaar usse kaise baat karu

Vikram:- sabse pehle hame ye pata lagana honga ki Priya tere baare mein kya sochti hai

Ram:- mujhe dar lag raha hai, agar Priya ne naa kar diya toh

Vikram:- sun eisa kuch nahi hone wala hai. Kuch sochte hai.

Vikram aur Ram sochne lagte hai.then,

Vikram:- Ram muje kya lagta hai, tu usse party mein invite kar.

Ram:- Party konsi party

Vikram:- kya Ram tu ek party arrange nahi kar sakta

Ram:- achha'. Kya kahunga usse kis cheez ki party hai aur tuje kya lagta hai agar mein sirf usse invite karunga toh woh nahi puchengi baaki staff ko kyun nahi bulaya.

Vikram:- are toh tuje kisne khaha usse akele bulane ko.Tu sab ko invite kar aur keh kiii ess baar sales is jumps by 50%. Ur pharma industries continuing ruling the market with 65% market share. Waise yeh sach bhi toh hai.

Ram liked the idea and said arre yeh sab toh tik hai par party khaha raku.

before Vikram said anything, KK who is listening everything entered and said: yahan iss ghar mein

both Vikram and Ram looked back. Ram:- Maa...aap yahan

KK:- sorry beta maine tumhari saari baat sun li.Mein bhi milna chahti hoon apni honewali bahu se.Mein bhi toh deku kon hai woh ladki jisne mere bte ke dil mein jagah banayi hai. Mein kabse iss din ka intezaar kar rahi thi, mein bahut kush hoon beta.

Ram goes near to KK and hold her both hands and kissed and said:- Maa muje nahi pata ki woh mere baare mein kya sochti hai,muje pasand karegi ya nahi.

KK:- zaroor beta, tu usse baat toh kar.kya mein teri kuch madad karu

Ram:- nahi maa'.. Waise kya ghar mein party rakna teek rehega. Mera matlab hai '.. maine party parso rakne ki sochi hai, toh itna sara kam rehega aur aapki tabiyat bhi toh teek nahi hai.

KK:- tu meri tabiyat ki chinta mat kar,muje kuch nahi hua hai aur waise bhi abb jab tak Priya ko dekh na loo neend nahi aane wali.

Vikram:- toh Party final parso aur woh bhi KM mein. Mein kal hi sabko invite karta hoon,aur Ram tu personally Priya ko invite kar dena.

Idar Ram, Priya ke liye party ka plan karta hai udar inn sabse anjaan Priya apne aur Rajat ke rishte se bahut kush hai.

Scene 10

At Sharma residence

Around 11'o clock,Priya resting in her room. She calls Rajat

Priya:- hello '.Rajat so gaye kya

Rajat:- No, darling muje pata tha tum muje call karogi

Priya shocked as Rajat never called her darling before.

Rajat:- hello'hello Priya r u their?

Priya:- h h h ..Rajat I din't expect from u

Rajat:- tumhe pasand nahi aaya.

Priya smiles and said achha ye batao agar pata tha ki mein phone karne wali hoon toh tumne phone kyun nahi kiya

Rajat: kyunki mein chahta tha ki tum muje call karo aur batao ki tum mujhe pasand karti ho ya nahi

Priya:- nahi: shocked Rajat:- kya???;

Priya:- Mazak kar rahi hoon. Yeh batao tumne muje subah ye baat kyu nahi batai ki tumhare mummy pappa aaj rishta lekar aane wale hai.

(Well muje pata hai dosto aap logo ko Priya-Rajat ki phone conversation kuch pasand nahi hai,toh inhe inke haal mein chod dete hai.waise bhi inka conversation bahut lamba chalta hai.shaadi jo karne wale hai.

one side Ram is happy for Priya and on the other side Priya is happy for Rajat. And BG voice "ek dusre ke pyar se anjaan kya mil paayenge Ram aur Priya.

Precap:- Ram invites Priya for the party and here Priya's parents fix the engagement date

Please comment and sorry for the mistakes

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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