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Posted: 12 years ago




Part 96



Coco followed Arnav Singh Raizada as he strode to the front door of his house. As she watched, he threw open the door to 3 men waiting there with bulky packages. He signed for them. The men left the packets near the door, and left.


Coco decided that it was time to make her move. The old helpless damsel in distress trick would work well. He seemed to be a sucker for weaklings, if his choice in a wife was any indication. She smirked.


She adjusted her transparent dupatta to maximum advantage, and batting her eyelashes, moved to make the kill with the precision of a man-eating shark that had smelt blood.


Arnav's phone rang, and he listened to Baba at the other end in silence, smiling slightly.



As she was a few metres away from him, Arnav turned around, smiling. Coco congratulated herself. But too soon! Arnav Singh Raizada was smiling at someone behind her. Bile turned her face yellow and green.


"Bhaiyya, Baba said you might need help.", Chotu said.


"What are these?", asked Vivek, flexing his muscles.


"Mami's costumes.", Arnav smiled. "The shop renting out the costumes left these out in the first delivery."


"Mamiji must have had a fit!", Chotu chuckled.


"And said, Hello Hi Bye Bye! How can you forget Manorama Raijjada's fancy dress?", laughed Vivek good-naturedly.


Arnav couldn't hide his smile. "Very close. She also threatened to send the nearest kotwaal to the shop to shut it down if her clothes were not delivered at the earliest!"


HP came running, seeing Arnav and the boys tugging at the heavy packages. "Arnav Bhaiyya, I will manage. You go and watch the dance."


"It is OK, HP. We will help you.", Arnav said.


The four of them dragged the bulky bags to the rooms set aside for the performers, the boys cracking jokes and all of them laughing away to glory.


Coco ground her teeth in fury. But all was not lost. She would wait and watch for another opportunity. She smiled. She then untied the top dori of her choli, hoping to ask Arnav Singh Raizada for help in tying it.





HP went to the kitchen once the job was done.

Arnav and the boys walked towards the stage together, the boys teasing him that lugging Mami's luggage for years had given him the bulging muscles on his arms.


Arnav laughed, loving the cheerful and uncomplicated companionship of the two boys who were brothers and sons to Khushi. As they were about to enter the venue, Arnav's phone rang. It was Aman.


Coco watched Arnav Singh Raizada send the two pesky brats inside the venue, and walk away to talk on the phone in peace. She again arranged her dupatta, lehenga, & choli to make the maximum of her assets, and walked up to him, rolling her hips.


"Haan, Aman?" Arnav walked away from the noise emanating from the stage.


"Boss, Handa called just now. He wants a meeting to be set up tomorrow."


Some girl was walking towards him in a drunken gait.


"No way, Aman. I need time to go through the reports and to check the figures."


"Sir."


The girl was in danger of walking into him. Arnav frowned. He veered away to avoid knocking her down, and continued his conversation with Aman.


"Ask him to back off. I will not be pushed into doing business with him."


"Sir."


"By the way, what are you doing attending business calls during Sangeet?"


Aman laughed. "I thought it might be important'"


"Switch off the official phone and give it to your wife.", Arnav instructed.


Aman laughed. "Yes, Boss."

Arnav returned to the Sangeet venue, his eyes searching for his pink-red sari clad wife. She was where he had left her, sitting by Baba, her head resting against his lean shoulder as they both watched Anand and Anjali dance with the children from Omkar to

Mere piya gaye Rangoon,

Kiya hai wahaan se teliphoon,

Tumhari yaad sataati hai, jiya men aag lagaati hai...


Both of them were smiling fondly at the pair on stage, and laughing at times at the dance moves of the Omkar children dressed in period costumes. Arnav felt his heart melt. His eyes softened as they lapped up the smile on her face.



Khushi felt Arnavji's eyes on her, and looked towards the entrance. He was standing there, looking at her. Khushi sat up, intending to get up and join him. Arnav quickly strode to her, and sat with them.

"Did the boys help you?", asked Baba.

"Yes.", Arnav smiled.

They watched the dance together, Khushi sitting in the centre, leaning against Baba on her right, and Arnav on her left, holding her hand.


Coco looked at Arnav Singh Raizada's black coat-covered back with incredulous eyes as he walked away from her and out of her sight. He had looked through her! How dare he? How could he? No man had ever...


"Auntyji!", came a call from near her knees.


Coco looked down.


A gap-toothed child stood near her, a laddoo in hand.


Coco looked behind her. Maybe the kid had called someone else. But, alas, that was not to be! This was just not Coco's day.


"Auntyji! Shame, shame, puppy shame! The dori of your choli is open!", said Nidhi, before she went away, laughing, to locate more laddoos.



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Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smita,😊

Here is the interpretation for Part 96.

What glaringly stands out in this update is the failure of attempts to impress... DAMP SQUIB.

Coco followed Arnav Singh Raizada as he strode to the front door of his house. As she watched, he threw open the door to 3 men waiting there with bulky packages. He signed for them. The men left the packets near the door, and left.

Coco decided that it was time to make her move. The old helpless damsel in distress trick would work well. He seemed to be a sucker for weaklings, if his choice in a wife was any indication. She smirked.

"Choices determine character"

~ Brandon Mull, Secrets of the Dragon Sanctuary

She adjusted her transparent dupatta to maximum advantage, and batting her eyelashes, moved to make the kill with the precision of a man-eating shark that had smelt blood.

"Ah, lust. It makes us forget anything we want to. The greatest relaxant, the greatest stimulant"

~ James Lusarde

Arnav's phone rang, and he listened to Baba at the other end in silence, smiling slightly.

"Most smiles are started by another smile"

As she was a few metres away from him, Arnav turned around, smiling. Coco congratulated herself. But too soon! Arnav Singh Raizada was smiling at someone behind her. Bile turned her face yellow and green.

"Bhaiyya, Baba said you might need help.", Chotu said.

"What are these?", asked Vivek, flexing his muscles.

"Mami's costumes.", Arnav smiled. "The shop renting out the costumes left these out in the first delivery."

"Mamiji must have had a fit!", Chotu chuckled.

"And said, Hello Hi Bye Bye! How can you forget Manorama Raijjada's fancy dress?", laughed Vivek good-naturedly.

"When you're really close to someone, they can make fun of you a lot and get away with it. But they sort of poke you in all of the right places"

~ Ian Somerhalder

Arnav couldn't hide his smile. "Very close. She also threatened to send the nearest kotwaal to the shop to shut it down if her clothes were not delivered at the earliest!"

HP came running, seeing Arnav and the boys tugging at the heavy packages. "Arnav Bhaiyya, I will manage. You go and watch the dance."

"It is OK, HP. We will help you.", Arnav said.

The four of them dragged the bulky bags to the rooms set aside for the performers, the boys cracking jokes and all of them laughing away to glory.

"Jealousy is all the fun you think they had"

~ Erica Jong

Coco ground her teeth in fury. But all was not lost. She would wait and watch for another opportunity. She smiled. She then untied the top dori of her choli, hoping to ask Arnav Singh Raizada for help in tying it.

"This I choose to do. If there is a price, this I choose to pay. Where this takes me, there I choose to go. I choose. This I choose to do"

~ Terry Pratchett, Wintersmith (Tiffany Aching)

HP went to the kitchen once the job was done.

Arnav and the boys walked towards the stage together, the boys teasing him that lugging Mami's luggage for years had given him the bulging muscles on his arms.

"There's nothing more contagious than the laughter of young children; it doesn't even have to matter what they're laughing about" ~ Criss Jami

Arnav laughed, loving the cheerful and uncomplicated companionship of the two boys who were brothers and sons to Khushi. As they were about to enter the venue, Arnav's phone rang. It was Aman.

Coco watched Arnav Singh Raizada send the two pesky brats inside the venue, and walk away to talk on the phone in peace. She again arranged her dupatta, lehenga, & choli to make the maximum of her assets, and walked up to him, rolling her hips.

"There's small choice in rotten apples"

~ William Shakespeare, The Taming of the Shrew

"Haan, Aman?" Arnav walked away from the noise emanating from the stage.

"Boss, Handa called just now. He wants a meeting to be set up tomorrow."

Some girl was walking towards him in a drunken gait.

"No way, Aman. I need time to go through the reports and to check the figures."

"Sir."

The girl was in danger of walking into him. Arnav frowned. He veered away to avoid knocking her down, and continued his conversation with Aman.

"The world is quickly bored by the recital of misfortune, and willing avoids the sight of distress" ~ W. Somerset Maugham

"Ask him to back off. I will not be pushed into doing business with him."

"Sir."

"By the way, what are you doing attending business calls during Sangeet?"

Aman laughed. "I thought it might be important..."

"Switch off the official phone and give it to your wife.", Arnav instructed.

Aman laughed. "Yes, Boss."

"My relationships with my loved ones always take precedence over work" ~ Lexa Doig

Arnav returned to the Sangeet venue, his eyes searching for his pink-red sari clad wife. She was where he had left her, sitting by Baba, her head resting against his lean shoulder as they both watched Anand and Anjali dance with the children from Omkar to

Mere piya gaye Rangoon,


Kiya hai wahaan se teliphoon,


Tumhari yaad sataati hai, jiya men aag lagaati hai...

Both of them were smiling fondly at the pair on stage, and laughing at times at the dance moves of the Omkar children dressed in period costumes. Arnav felt his heart melt. His eyes softened as they lapped up the smile on her face.

"To be with you, to hear your voice,

To see your sunny smile,

To walk with you and talk with you

And laugh with you awhile...

That's all I need to make my life

Happy and worth while!"

Khushi felt Arnavji's eyes on her, and looked towards the entrance. He was standing there, looking at her. Khushi sat up, intending to get up and join him. Arnav quickly strode to her, and sat with them.

"Did the boys help you?", asked Baba.

"Yes.", Arnav smiled.

They watched the dance together, Khushi sitting in the centre, leaning against Baba on her right, and Arnav on her left, holding her hand.

"Life is so busy. If I could have five extra minutes each day . . . I'd make out with you like crazy for five minutes"

This is what he always wants with Khushi!

Coco looked at Arnav Singh Raizada's black coat-covered back with incredulous eyes as he walked away from her and out of her sight. He had looked through her! How dare he? How could he? No man had ever...

"I can chase you, and I can catch you,

but there is nothing I can do to make you mine"

~ Morrissey

"Auntyji!", came a call from near her knees.

Coco looked down.

A gap-toothed child stood near her, a laddoo in hand.

Coco looked behind her. Maybe the kid had called someone else. But, alas, that was not to be! This was just not Coco's day.

"Auntyji! Shame, shame, puppy shame! The dori of your choli is open!", said Nidhi, before she went away, laughing, to locate more laddoos.

"You may not realize it when it happens, but a kick in the teeth may be the best thing in the world for you." ~ Walt Disney

This update is all about how a spoilt brat would like to grab anything and everything that she fancies. Its her single mindedness in pursuit of her misplaced love that is making her do things, which any sensible person ordinarily would never do seeing the state of affairs!The question here is, is it the love she feels, or the lust due to her infatuation??

The path that she has chosen, she knows, is wrong but still persists. Knowing that Arnav Singh Raizada is a married man she is trying to entice him! Why? Because she fancies him. She finds all his loving gestures to his wife distasteful and the green eyed monster in her comes to the fore. Once that monster takes control over her mind, the rhyme and reason just flies out. She is gripped by the thought that only she deserves the tall, dark and handsome Arnav Singh Raizada and his wife is a two bit chit who doesn't deserve to be by his side and needs to be ousted!

"Two persons look out through the same bars. One sees the mud and one sees the stars"

~ Frederick Langbridge

This is what has happened. When Arnav sees his Khushi he sees the stars but when Coco sees her, she sees her as mud! Everything is relative. As the saying goes,

"Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder"

What she doesn't realize is she just doesn't have a chance! Arnav Singh Raizada might tolerate her, that is, if he becomes aware of her existence and overtures, as she is Kishore family guest!

If such attempts of hers get noticed by any one of the members of his Parivaar, the consequences would be extremely funny!

First, her attempt to get eye contact with him makes her think she was successful seeing his beaming smile but turned out that he was smiling at some others who were behind her. He wasn't even aware of her presence.

Her next attempt to get noticed by Arnav Singh Raizada, makes him think that a girl with drunken gait is on the loose! So he avoids being anywhere near the brat!

Her later attempt to make Arnav tie her dori ended up in young Nidhi, who loves NK Bhaiyya and laddoos, chant childish phrase of shame!

So far all her attempts to get herself noticed have been in vain! It has been a huge failure!

A glaringly obvious DAMP SQUIB!


That's it from me. Hope you enjoy it!


ADDENDUM

In the end, let me justify why I have chosen antics of Coco to be the center of today's theme! I have chosen it despite the other strong theme I see that I never ignore otherwise!

Firstly it is going to show us the strength of the bond between Arnav-Khushi-Rest of the Parivaar in the coming updates.

I would love to see how either Arnav or Khushi deal with her.

I would love to see the rest of the Parivaar in action or their reaction!

May be the transformation of Coco takes place much to the relief of her mother Pinky Geelani. You see Khushi has the ability to change people for good in her subtle ways.

There are things that Baba and Buaji could help her with.

Wouldn't I love to see Buaji giving her a dressing down in her most down to earth way!

Right now she is a comic relief who has been unsuccessful in making Arnav Singh Raizada, even aware of her existence let alone leave Khushi for her! Anyway there is no harm in trying!! After all,

"A moth attracted to the flame gets nothing but singed!"

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG smita...u cracked me up !!!! 🤣

what did Coco think...that shec ould get Arnav Singh Raizada to tie her dori !!!! shameless creature !!!

loved Arnav who sensed a moronic female walking towards and walked right thru her !!!

poor Coco...witch a word of advice...Arnav Singh raizada has eyes only for one woman and that his Mrs.Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada !!!


keep ur hands off him or else u will get burned for sure !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG what she think about ASR...poor coco🤣...nice update yaar...cant wait for next update...
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ha ha ...just not coco's day.

i love nidhi...

nice update.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... "shame shame, puppy shame" awesome :) :)

n another cute aspect of the chapter... tht ASR doesnt care to even HELP any other female than his family. :) :)

tht was just tooo tooo gd :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh I just love how you update so quickly!! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shame shame puppy shame...hilarious Smita..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now comment for the update! :)


Lol, this was just too good!


Coco Coco Coco, she is quite the character! Lets see what she gets herself into with ASR ;P


Bahaha Auntyji!! And Shame, shame, puppy shame! The dori of your choli is open! Lololol. Nidhi can't possible get any cuter ^_^


The scene with Baba, Khushi and Arnav was just perfect :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Coco aunty!! šŸ˜†
I love Nidhi for that! 😃

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