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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

sorry radhika i was in disturbance and frustration so i couldn't read your os s after saviour and today i read ur phirse and pyar to hamesha rahega

you know i always love your writing style but don't knw why i feel your writings flourishes whenever you write a sad one...

woh lamhe just pierced my heart and tears were rolling down from my chicks..the rising was a different one and it left a ray of hope..snow white was too cute it left a smile on my face..the saviour took me into another world..but but don't mind phir se in comparison to your other works were lil disappointing...it resembled the vow and salaam-e-ishq vidya john story but it didn't have any twist unlike those so it appeared boring to me ..i idn't get that feel which i gt while reading ur ffs

buty you are again back with pyar to hamesha rahega...it compelled me to cry just like your 1st one...
i was sad because last night my aunt passed away and now your story broke all boundaries of my tears😭

waiting for another one from you that will compel me to go another world



oh no problem di,it's ok...don't be sry,u hv read n cmted it's enough for me...
n thank u so much for being honest with yur comments...but i havn't thought about salaam-e-ishq while writing...actually i too was little bit nervous while writing that...
but glad u liked other's after phir se...
thank u for such a lovely n honest cmt...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhamurat

i read all ur os in one go..must say you are fabulous writer...do pm me whenever u update another os


thank u so much for reading n giving ur valueable cmt...glad u liked it...
will surely pm u...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

read ur ek mulaakat..itsa cute story ..and i liked it..but don't kn why i feel you are the best in serious mode...hope you won't mind😃



oh thank u di fr letting me know that at what i m good...but what to do hamesha heart wrenching end k saath toh ni likh sakti as many muratians will not like it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought.



ya i know but for that type of song their must a scene like that also...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi everyone it's being a long time since I have written anything, so here I am again with one more os. Well I thought to write a scene from the serial because I didn't like the ending of veer-shera's love story in serial, so I thought to write it as per my imagination or I can say as I wanted to end it. So here I am...😊
plz forgive me for any mistake as i am writing something after a very long time...😳


Well the part starts after the scene where veer ask shera to steal all the valueable thing from aryavarats tent so that they can buy necessary things for their mission and shera does all according to veer's plan and after that veer paid her for her work but she gave him all the things which she had stolen from aryavrats tent and his money also which he had paid for her work and silently walked away from their and it's time for her to return back to sawai.



MY WISH COMES TRUE...



Clocked in black dhoti n knee length kurta with black curley open hairs reaching till her waist and wrapped in thin shawl around her body she was standing at the edge of the peak looking at the setting sun. The scene of valley from the peak was beautiful but the shining rays of setting sun were making it even more breathtaking. Someone had said it true that nothing can stand in comparison of nature, it's so pure, so divine, so soothing. But it's not working for her, she had came here with the hope of forgiveness but now she is returning back with heavy heart, with the guilt of breaking someone's trust, someone's believe. For the first time in her life someone has saw a girl in her, someone actually got close to her, someone believed on her but what she did???????????...she herself had ruined everything...EVERYTHING. She looked at the lines of her palm, She had always wished for him, but her destiny never co-operated her, her destiny always betrayed her.


Kisse poochoon,Hai aisa kyun
Bezubaan sa yeh jahaan hai
Khushi ke pal..kahan dhoondhoon
Benishaan sa waqt hi yahan hai
Jaane kitne lub pe giley hai
Zindagi se kai faasley hai
Ussey jeete hai sapne kyun aankhon mein
Lakeerein chootey jab inn haathon se
Bewajah
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa


Taking a deep sigh she closed her eyes to accept, to make herself believe that now nothing can be change. She is never going to get him back. Now it's time for her to return back, return to those people who never cared about her, about anyone. Who had always saw a boy in her, who will fulfill all their desire's, all wishes not a soft hearten, a dreamy girl.


Saanson ne kaha rookh modh liya
Koi raah nazar mein na aaye
Dhadhkan ne kaha dil chodh diya
Kahan chodey inn jismon ke saaye
Yahi baar baar sochta hoon
Tanha main yahan
Mere saath saath chal raha hai
Yaadon ka dhuaan
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Se yoon takra gayi
Ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa
Jo bheji thi duaa..woh jaake aasmaan..
Jo bheji thi duaa..
Bheji thi dua..
Bheji thi dua..
Bheji thi dua..
Bheji thi dua..


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She was just preparing herself to return back when she heard some footsteps which diverted her attention but she neither turned nor opened her eyes, she tightly clutched her shawl around her body to feel his presence. There is no need for her to turn or to investigate anything, she can easily figure out only by his footsteps that who must be the person. Only his footsteps are enough to make her aware about his presence around her.

''so you are returning back????????????'':- his voice stuck to her ears making her more weak but this time something is different, his voice is not harsh as every time, it was soft, so hopeful as if asking to stay her back.

She turned and saw him standing few feet's away from her , his face was not angered but hopeful, the face which she is not going to see again in her life. With these thoughts the unnatural feelings from which she was fighting from a long time became ready to come out in form of tears. ''damn these tears, why they always came uninvited and that too in a situation where they are not needed, didn't they have any other work instead of falling idiots'':- she thought mentally chiding herself for being so emotional.

But controlling herself she pretended to be strong and replied:-''rajkumar I had came here for the apology but I think I am not even worth to get forgiven''.

''I think you have forgot that I am not a rajkumar anymore'':-he informed her but this time not harshly, he was not annoyed by her, he didn't knew why but this time he desperately wanted to stop her. Something has changed in just few days but what, he didn't knew, he just wanted her to stay back.

As he finished she gave a light smile on his information before replying him:-''well I know but a person is a rajkumar by his works not by his status and I have always consider you as my...'':- she stopped instantly realizing what she was about to say. Embarressingly she turned her face on other side to avoid his instant unknown gaze.

As he heard what she was about to say, an unknown confused happiness over powered his heart though he didn't knew what she was about to say but perhaps he has an idea about it.
''what?????????'':- after sometime he asked breaking the awkward silence between them. Hearing him she turned to face him and as their eyes met everything around them stopped as silence prevailed the whole environment.


nai jeena, tere baajo
nai jeena, nai jeena,
nai jeena tere baajo
nai jeena, nai jeena,

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
tu ki jaane pyaar mera
main karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
Haey tu ki jaane pyaar mera
mein karaan intezaar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji



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The lazy sun continued it's journey to give the whole environment in the lap of night where as these two confused souls continued to gaze at each other completely oblivious of the surrounding. Feeling hell embarrassed at her about to be confession she tore her gaze and uneasily replied fixing her gaze at the ground:-''I have to go'':- saying so she climbed down without meeting his gaze towards toofan (her horse) whom she had tied with a tree a little far from the peak and this time he too accompanied her till there.

Both were silently walking without looking and uttering a single word to each other. On one hand where he was going through something new, something very strange. He was feeling a strong urge to stop her and to tell her that she has been forgiven, there is no need to do so, to go away from HIM.He turned to look at her.

mere dil vich re ke mere dil da haal na jaane
tere baajo kaleyan beh ke ronde nain numane
jeena mera haey, marna mera naal tere si
kar aetibar mera
main karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

main tenu samjhawaan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji

main tenu samjhawaan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji


On other hand she was feeling fully scattered, fully devasted, she had broken his trust and moreover she had broken herself by loving him. She wanted to scream, wanted to shout, wanted to take out her all frustration, all her agony everything, she is going away from him, she has lost everything, her love, his trust everything. She turned her face to see him, she is returning back with a chilling silence in her heart, she is feeling like she has lost a part of herself.


HOo,oo,o,o
ni changa nai O kitaa beeba
ve changa nai O kitaa beeba
dil mera torr ke
ve bara pachtayaan akhaan
ve bara pachtayaan akhaan
tere naal jorr ke

main tenu samjhawaan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji


Both were walking with heavy steps and intentionally very slowly, the distance from peak till tofaan was very less but the way they were walking seems like they will pass an eternity to reach their but finally with god's grace they reached their. She turned and unwillingly said :-''ok then bye and as per your wish'':-she paused for a second and pretending herself she continued:-''let's hope not to meet again'':-and saying so she turned her face to other side not wanting to face him anymore otherwise she will broke herself in front of him, she hurriedly turned towards tofaan to began her journey.

As her last few words stuck to his ears, he shot up his head to look at her surprised, she is saying not to meet again, the same girl who was always with him, who was behind him just to get an apology and now when she is forgiven she is saying not to meet again. Somewhere it pinched him, he saw her climbing on toofan and an instant fear over powered his heart, she is going away, away from him forever and as that sudden realization stuck to him, he hurriedly asked her:-''will you never return????????????''.

His sudden unexpected question made her turn to face him with lots of questions, what he exactly meant by saying ''RETURN'', is he asking something which she wanted to listen, TO STOP HER but as soon as he saw her sudden change of expression he hesitatingly tried to clarify himself:-''I...i...i mean to say that...that may be in future we need you ...need you for the mission'':-he completed with the hope that he is not caught but after listening him she took a deep sigh and turned her face to other side to control herself, she is really idiot how can he ask her to stay when he hates her, it's definitely not what she was thinking what it must be.

After sometime she faced him with a fake smile very cleverly plastered on her face:-''well rajkumar if you need me for your mission you only need to remember me and you will always find me beside you, I'll be always there to help you, that's it'':- as she finished her assurance, he looked at her and a strange happiness surrounded him, she will be always there with him. At that moment he realized what he actually meant to her and the most important ''WHAT SHE MEANT TO HIM'', the unnatural, unknown feeling from which he was fight from long instantly surrounded him. Suddenly holding her hand and taking a bolder step towards her he asked:-''will you be with me forever???????????????''.

She was taken aback from his sudden question, she was looking at him totally flabber aghast, she hadn't expected this, she was unable to decided that is it true or just her one of dreams???????????, whether she should be happy or cry for this gift??????????????.
She was looking at him with teary eyes as he continued still holding her hands:-''promise me that you will leave all this illegal work, promise me you will never return to that world again whether in good or bad, promise me you will be with me forever, promise me that will never leave me, promise me'':-As he completed she just nodded slowly, she couldn't speak as her throat got dried and eyes were full of tear and soon she wrapped her arms around his neck and silently cried thanking the god to fulfill her wish, for giving her love back.


Chan ke aayi toh kya chaandni toh mili
Chan ke aayi toh kya chaandni toh mili
Chand din hi sahi yeh kali to khili
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Teri meharbaaniyan, teri meharbaaniyan
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi


On the other hand he was totally taken aback with sudden change in the situation and on his sudden confession, he himself didn't knew how he said those words to her but he knew he wanted that, he wanted her, after a long time he was feeling good, after leaving the palace it was the first time he did what his heart said, for the first time he didn't followed his mind, he didn't followed what the people said, he just did what he wanted to do, he wanted her and now she is with him and will be with him forever and soon he too wrapped his arms around her taking her into a tight hug.


Apni taqdeer ki hai yeh daastaan
Kabhi qatilaana, kabhi meharbaan
Apni taqdeer ki hai yeh daastaan
Kabhi qatilaana, kabhi meharbaan
Meharbaani jo dil ko karaar aa gaya
Apne qaatil pe bhi pyaar aa gaya
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Teri mehrbaaniyan, teri mehrbaaniyan
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi
Shukriya zindagi,Shukriya zindagi


After sometime he opened his eyes and said to tease her:-''can I ask you one thing???????????''. She was still closing her eyes living the moment in which her wish got fulfilled:-''hmmm''.

''now as you are with me you will continue to dress up like this???????????'':- as he completed she snapped open her eyes trying to get what he meant, she broke their hug and confusedly looked at him and he just signaled her through his eyes for her dress and then she looked down what she was wearing, a dhoti with black knee length kurta, she was not looking less than a boy and then she looked up only to find him chuckling on her expression.

She glared at him but soon she too joined him and gave a light punch on his shoulder. Finally the sun got set and the day ended but for them it was a new beginning, they both climbed on toofan and moved towards their basti to start their new journey, new life and to fight against the aryavarats but this time...TOGETHER.


hold me let me feel u in my arms again
softly u whisper my life, my best friend

a moment is all i m searching for, just a moment in luv wid u
a moment so special so beautiful, in a moment my wish come true

save me from the future, take me back in time
the words they have no meaning, without u in my life

let me walk the rainbow, in times of sweet surprise
toh when i was a little girl, and i had u in my life
time has no answer, for words left unsaid
for words have no meaning, there' s no read ahead

a moment is all i am searching for, just a moment in luv wid u
a moment so special so beautiful, in a moment my wish comes true

i am looking for a reason to smile once again
through every changing season, the pain i can' t explain
i see the magic all around, shining down on me
wid u my life would be so right, if only it could be

may be this world iss a mystery to me - (2)
but if u could be here for eternity

a moment is all i m searching for, just a moment in luv wid u
a moment so special so beautiful, in a moment my wish come true

a moment is all i m searching for, just a moment in luv wid u
a moment so special so beautiful, in a moment my wish come true

my wish comes true...


THE END

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A person who forgives is greater than those who punish and sometimes forgiving someone is greatest gift.

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HOPE YOU LIKED IT...

DO GIVE YOUR VIEWS...

LUV...

RADHIKA...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A really nice and touching OS ridzzi👏
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar pehle se he links diya karo na.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede

yaar pehle se he links diya karo na.😭



yaa...main bhi ehi chahti hoon...plz give links of pre post.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising



yaa...main bhi ehi chahti hoon...plz give links of pre post.



guys it's an os not an ff but if u want pre. Links so all hv been posted on pg. 1 :-)

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